,,writ+ ,,& ,,rewrit+ ,,by ,,george ,,c>v] ,,william ,s4 ,,maulsby ,,?omas ,a4 ,,knott ,,! ,,univ]sity ,,( ,,i[a ,illu/ration ,,new ,,york ,,h>c\rt1 ,,brace ,,& ,,company ,,copyright1 #aibc1 ,,by ,,h>c\rt1 ,,brace ,,& ,,company1 ,,inc4 ,,pr9t$ ,,9 ,,! ,u4,s4,a4 ,,to ,,! ,,memory ,,( ,j4 ,,scott ,,cl>k ,,cont5ts ,,*apt] ,,page ,,index ,,to ,,admonitions ix ,i4 ,,:y ,,le>n ,,to ,,write #a ,,ii4 ,,h[ ,,to ,,write #g ,,iii4 ,,ideas ,,= ,,compositions #ab ,,iv4 ,,! ,,:ole ,,composition #ag ,v4 ,,! ,,p>agraph #ca ,,vi4 ,,gramm> #db ,,vii4 ,,s5t5ce ,,correctness #eh ,,viii4 ,,s5t5ce ,,cle>ness #hh ,,ix4 ,,s5t5ce ,,vigor #ajj ,x4 ,,words #aad ,,xi4 ,,spell+ #acb ,,xii4 ,,punctuation #aci ,,xiii4 ,,me*anics #aea ,,to ,,in/ructors ,writ+ & ,rewrit+ is bas$ on ! conviction t college fre%m5 c be taught to see & to correct _! own errors & faults4 ,criticism by means ( m>g9al numb]s1 ref]r+ to pieces ( advice 9 a rhetoric or a manual1 has long be5 utiliz$ to economize ! in/ructor's "t4 ,x has n be5 g5]ally realiz$1 h[ev]1 t ?is me?od1 :i* requires ! /ud5t to inspect & rewrite a faulty s5t5ce 9 ! light ( an illu/ration 9 8 book1 is successful also 9 tea*+ him to rewrite faulty s5t5ces be=e he submits 8 manuscript to 8 in/ructor4 ,! be/ device to enc\rage ! /ud5t 9 self-correction is ! prelim9>y copy or r\gh draft4 ,?is may be writt5 rapidly 9 p5cil on !me pap] or on scrat* pap]1 ) l9es f> ap>t to leave room = modifications4 ,aft] ?is is writt5 ! /ud5t %\ld read x ) 8 eyes op5 = ! appe>ance ( 8 pet blund]s1 & %\ld d 8 own rewrit+4 ,if ! r\gh draft is submitt$ ) ! f9i%$ copy1 ! in/ructor c discov] :e!r ! /ud5t is endeavor+ to correct 8 own faults4 ,! be/ way to use ,writ+ & ,rewrit+ 9 class is to copy ! faulty passages or to clip & pa/e !m on c>ds4 ,9 class ! /ud5t1 us+ only ! slip1 may !n be requir$ to write ! correct v]sion on ! blackbo>d1 lat] recit+ & specify+ ! fault1 or ! pr9ciple ( /yle :i* is violat$4 ,9 colleges :]e ! m>g9al numb]+ ( errors & faults is supplem5t$ by p]sonal conf]5ces1 ! swifte/ improvem5t w be f\nd to foll[ ! practice ( requir+ ! /ud5t1 be=e ! conf]5ce1 to copy 8 faulty passages on a new %eet ( !me pap]1 to copy also ! admonition indicat$ by ! m>g9al numb]1 & to rewrite ea* passage 9 accordance ) ! admonition4 ,a file ( ^! %eets w reveal :e!r ! /ud5t is improv+ or /&+ /ill4 ,writ+ & ,rewrit+ has sev]al relatively novel features4 ,*apt]s ,,iv & ,v make x possible to criticize by m>g9al numb]s ! mo/ common violations ( ! pr9ciples ( ! :ole composition & ( ! p>agraph4 ,al?\gh ! admonitions criticize faults1 ! book conta9s few 8don'ts40 ,in/ead1 ! advice giv5 is positive1 con/ructive1 & concrete4 ,ea* numb] ref]s to only a s+le fault4 ,few admonitions fill m ?an two l9es ( type4 ,x has ?us be5 possible to ins]t a criticism ( e fundam5tal fault f\nd 9 fre%man !mes4 ,probably e numb] ought to be us$ at lea/ once 9 e hundr$ !mes4 ,! division ( s5t5ce criticisms into *apt]s on ,correctness1 ,cle>ness1 & ,vigor is logical & obvi\s4 ,! numb]+ ( admonitions is n consecutive1 b a new hundr$ beg9s ) ea* *apt] z a help 9 m quickly locat+ ! numb] desir$4 ,additional copies ( ! index to ! admonitions w be furni%$ free on reque/ to in/ructors :o wi% to pa/e x on a %eet ( c>dbo>d to facilitate _! "w 9 criticiz+ !mes4 ,! li/ ( sugge/ions = subjects is a compilation ( ! practices ( _m successful tea*]s4 ,,index ,,to ,,admonitions ,! ,:ole ,composition #ajj4 ,op5+ devices #aja4 ,po9t ( view #ajb4 ,:at to include #ajc4 ,di/raction #ajd4 ,s]i\s tone #aje4 ,light tone #ajf4 ,sequ5ce #ajg4 ,*ronological ord] #ajh4 ,position #aji4 ,ab/ract to concrete #aaj4 ,summ>y to detail #aaa4 ,important to less s #aab4 ,famili> to unfamili> #aac4 ,climax #aad4 ,weld+ #aae4 ,connectives #aaf4 ,repetition #aag4 ,recapitulation #aah4 ,division #aai4 ,space emphasis #abj4 ,place emphasis #aba4 ,conclusion #abb4 ,title #abc4 ,plan #abd4 ,revision by plan #abe4 ,practice ,! ,p>agraph #bjj4 ,ind5tion #bja4 ,p>tly blank l9e #bjb4 ,no ind5tion #bjc4 ,conv]sation #bjd4 ,comb9ation #bje4 ,sep>ation #bjf4 ,viol5t break #bjg4 ,irrelevant ideas #bjh4 ,topic s5t5ce #bji4 ,arrangem5t #baj4 ,connectives #baa4 ,l9k+ #bab4 ,%ift 9 numb] #bac4 ,%ift 9 p]son #bad4 ,%ift 9 t5se #bae4 ,%ift 9 voice #baf4 ,%ift 9 mood #bag4 ,place emphasis #bah4 ,space emphasis #bai4 ,practice ,s5t5ce ,correctness ,case #cjj4 ,subject 9 nom9ative #cja4 ,:o z subject #cjb4 ,:o z subject aft] v]b #cjc4 ,pr$icate nom9ative #cjd4 ,pron\n 9 apposition #cje4 ,pron\n aft] z1 ?an #cjf4 ,possessive ) g]und #cjg4 8,neut]0 n\ns n 9 possessive #cjh4 ,objective case #cji4 ,objective ) inf9itive #caj4 ,objective aft] inf9itive ,agreem5t #caa4 ,?is k9d #cab4 ,pron\n ) antec$5t #cac4 ,v]b ) subject #cad4 ,v]b ) ea*1 none #cae4 ,comp\nd subject #caf4 ,n\ns ) or #cag4 ,collective n\ns #cah4 ,incorrect attraction #cai4 ,!re is1 !re are #cbj4 ,besides1 ) #cba4 ,ne>] ( two n\ns #cbb4 ,:o1 :i* #cbc4 ,n ) pr$icat$ n\n #cbd4 ,don't #cbe4 ,pa/ & pa/ p>ticiple #cbf4 ,correct pr9cipal p>ts #cbg4 ,lie-lay1 sit-set1 rise-raise ,%all & ,w #cbh4 ,%all & w #cbi4 ,%\ld & w\ld #ccj4 ,que/ions #cca4 ,det]m9ation #ccb4 ,p>allel t5ses #ccc4 ,univ]sal pres5t #ccd4 ,subord9ate clause #cce4 ,inf9itive #ccf4 ,adv]b ( "t #ccg4 ,contr>y to fact subjunctive #cch4 ,h1 n ( #cci4 ,_h ought ,fragm5ts #cdj4 ,fragm5ts #cda4 ,phrases #cdb4 ,p>ticipial phrases #cdc4 ,clauses #cdd4 ,"p ( comp\nd subject #cde4 ,"p ( comp\nd pr$icate ,incomplete ,con/ructions #cdf4 ,unf9i%$ con/ruction #cdg4 ,give v]b subject #cdh4 ,ins]t ^w #cdi4 ,ins]t mat]ial #cej4 ,elem5ts )\t con/ruction #cea4 ,ins]t t aft] say1 feel #ceb4 ,ins]t t ( #cec4 ,ins]t z aft] positive adjective #ced4 ,ins]t mu* aft] v #cee4 ,repeat v]b #cef4 ,repeat auxili>y #ceg4 ,repeat is1 0 #ceh4 ,repeat v]b aft] auxili>ies ,inaccurate ,con/ructions #cei4 ,correct conjunction #cfj4 ,ins]t transitional elem5t #cfa4 ,%ift$ con/ruction #cfb4 ,"o ( ! mo/ #cfc4 ,exact pr$ication #cfd4 ,idiomatic v]b #cfe4 ,idiomatic preposition #cff4 ,diff]5t preposition #cfg4 ,idiom #cfh4 ,awkw>dness #cfi4 ,is :]e1 is :5 #cgj4 ,is because #cga4 ,! fact t #cgb4 ,due to1 ow+ to #cgc4 ,because (1 on acc\nt ( #cgd4 ,omit & #cge4 ,omit irrelevancy #cgf4 ,r$undant t #cgg4 ,*ange p>ticipial phrase #cgh4 ,(-phrase ) v]bal n\n #cgi4 ,(-phrase ) ab/ract v]bal n\n #chj4 ,sep>ate ma9 clauses #cha4 ,jo9 elem5ts ) & #chb4 ,jo9 clauses ) & #chc4 ,modifi]s toge!r #chd4 ,d\ble negative #che4 ,or1 n nor #chf4 ,n h>dly #chg4 ,adv]b1 n adjective #chh4 ,pr$icat$ adjectives #chi4 ,:o1 :i*1 t ,s5t5ce ,cle>ness #djj4 ,obvi\s antec$5t #dja4 ,position ( pron\n #djb4 ,ambigu\s antec$5t 9 indirect disc\rse #djc4 ,antec$5t 9 p>5!ses #djd4 ,repeat di/ant n\n #dje4 ,unemphatic antec$5t #djf4 ,place ( only1 etc4 #djg4 ,place ( negative #djh4 ,use ( correlatives #dji4 ,place ( correlatives #daj4 ,place ( subord9ate clause #daa4 ,place ( relative clause #dab4 ,confus$ v]bs #dac4 ,place ( modifi]s #dad4 ,co-ord9ate modifi]s #dae4 ,p>ticipial phrases #daf4 ,p>ticiple ) ?us #dag4 ,p>ticiple ) conjunction #dah4 ,adjective due #dai4 ,g]und prepositional phrase #dbj4 ,repeat subord9at+ conjunction #dba4 ,repeat auxili>y v]bs #dbb4 ,repeat to ) ! inf9itive #dbc4 ,repeat preposition ) object #dbd4 ,repeat article ) n\n #dbe4 ,repeat possessive ) n\n #dbf4 ,p>allel /ructure #dbg4 ,summ>iz+ ^w #dbh4 ,use ( & #dbi4 ,use ( b #dcj4 ,comp>ative degree #dca4 ,sup]lative degree #dcb4 ,%ift 9 p]son #dcc4 ,%ift 9 numb] #dcd4 ,%ift 9 t5se #dce4 ,%ift 9 mood #dcf4 ,%ift 9 voice ,s5t5ce ,vigor #ejj4 ,isolate #eja4 ,sep>ate #ejb4 ,cond5se #ejc4 ,comb9e #ejd4 ,v>y /ructure #eje4 ,v>y beg9n+ #ejf4 ,v>y l5g? #ejg4 ,loose to p]iodic #ejh4 ,/rik+ end+ #eji4 ,climax #eaj4 ,emphatic position #eaa4 ,gr\p relat$ elem5ts #eab4 ,ma9 ideas #eac4 ,subord9ate ideas #ead4 ,simplicity #eae4 ,f>-fet*$ synonyms #eaf4 ,concret5ess #eag4 ,p>allel /ructure #eah4 ,repeat = emphasis #eai4 ,monoton\s repetition #ebj4 ,tautology #eba4 ,pleonasm #ebb4 ,^w 9 d\ble s5se #ebc4 ,consi/5t metaphors #ebd4 ,incongru\s metaphors #ebe4 ,rhy?m #ebf4 ,balanc$ s5t5ce #ebg4 ,vivid pr$icate #ebh4 ,unemphatic passive voice #ebi4 ,awkw>d absolute phrase #ecj4 ,successive subord9ations #eca4 ,successive b & = clauses ,words #fjj4 ,see diction>y #fja4 ,words almo/ alike #fjb4 ,exactness #fjc4 ,new words #fjd4 ,v]bs z n\ns #fje4 ,slang #fjf4 ,h>mony #fjg4 ,poetical words #fjh4 ,hackney$ expressions #fji4 ,pret5ti\s expressions #faj4 ,contractions #faa4 ,editorial we #fab4 ,simple pron\ns #fac4 ,speak+ ( husb& or wife #fad4 ,illit]ate usage #fae4 ,reputable words #faf4 ,pres5t words #fag4 ,national words #fah4 ,plural ab/ract n\ns ,spell+ #gjj4 ,d\bl+ consonants #gja4 ,s+le consonants #gjb4 ,f9al sil5t -e #gjc4 -ce & -ge #gjd4 ,s+le consonant aft] d\ble v[el #gje4 ,,cei #gjf4 ,,ei z & z #gjg4 ,,ie #gjh4 ,plurals 9 v[el & -y #gji4 ,v]bs 9 v[el & -y #gaj4 ,plurals 9 consonants & -y #gaa4 ,plurals 9 -ves #gab4 ,=eign plurals #gac4 ,don't1 won't1 c't #gad4 ,x's #gae4 ,its1 y\rs1 h]s #gaf4 ,spell+ li/ ,punctuation ,use p]iod aft]3 #hjj4 ,decl>ative & imp]ative s5t5ces #hja4 ,abbreviations ,no p]iod aft]3 #hjb4 ,incomplete s5t5ce elem5ts ,use "q m>k aft]3 #hjc4 ,direct que/ions #hjd4 ,d\btful expressions ,no "q m>k aft]3 #hje4 ,indirect que/ions ,use exclamation po9t aft]3 #hjf4 ,exclamatory expressions ,use commas )3 #hjg4 ,co-ord9ate clauses ) & or b #hjh4 ,conjunction = #hji4 ,p>allel clauses #haj4 ,dep5d5t clause prec$+ #haa4 ,descriptive clauses #hab4 ,int]*angeable adjectives #hac4 ,words1 phrases1 clauses 9 s]ies #had4 ,& 9 a s]ies #hae4 ,confus$ elem5ts #haf4 ,names 9 direct address #hag4 ,appositives #hah4 ,geographical names #hai4 ,dates #hbj4 ,absolute phrases #hba4 ,int]jections & p>5!tical expressions #hbb4 ,direct quotations ,nev] use a comma3 #hbc4 ,betwe5 n\n & its adjective #hbd4 ,ar\nd limit+ clauses or phrases #hbe4 ,) s]ies ( non-int]*angeable adjectives #hbf4 ,to indicate a pause #hbg4 ,be=e t 9 indirect disc\rse #hbh4 ,betwe5 unjo9$ ma9 clauses ,use a semicolon betwe53 #hbi4 ,unjo9$ ma9 clauses #hcj4 ,clauses jo9$ by h[ev]1 etc4 #hca4 ,long or complicat$ clauses ,nev] use a semicolon3 #hcb4 ,betwe5 clauses n co-ord9ate #hcc4 ,aft] salutation 9 a lett] ,use a colon to introduce3 #hcd4 ,=mal li/ ( words1 etc4 ,use a hyph5 )3 #hce4 ,fractions or numb]s less ?an #ajj #hcf4 ,titles ( two or m words #hcg4 ,divid$ words #hch4 ,comp\nd adjectives #hci4 ,prefixes l co- etc4 ,use a da% )3 #hdj4 ,brok5 ?\ght #hda4 ,in=mal p>5!tical mat]ial #hdb4 ,summ>iz+ expressions ,nev] use a da%3 #hdc4 ,in/ead ( a p]iod #hdd4 ,in/ead ( a comma ,use quotation m>ks )3 #hde4 ,direct disc\rse #hdf4 ,borr[$ mat]ial #hdg4 ,quotation ( m ?an "o p>agraph #hdh4 ,quotation )9 quotation #hdi4 ,quotation )9 second quotation #hej4 ,quotation end+ ) comma or p]iod ,nev] use quotation m>ks )3 #hea4 ,names ( books1 etc4 ,use an apo/rophe3 #heb4 ,9 contractions #hec4 ,) s+ul> possessives #hed4 ,) plural possessives ,nev] use an apo/rophe3 #hee4 ,) possessive pron\ns ,use p>5!ses to inclose3 #hef4 ,mat]ial =eign to unit ( composition #heg4 ,confirmatory figures ,nev] use p>5!ses to inclose3 #heh4 ,cancell$ words ,use brackets to inclose3 #hei4 ,explanatory mat]ial 9 quotation #hfj4 ,practice ,me*anics #ijj4 ,"o side ( pap] #ija4 ,place ( title #ijb4 ,blank second l9e #ijc4 ,write legibly #ijd4 ,numb] pages #ije4 ,spac+ #ijf4 ,divid$ words #ijg4 ,place ( hyph5 #ijh4 ,m>g9s #iji4 ,ind5tion #iaj4 ,bel[ la/ l9e #iaa4 ,und]scor+ #iab4 ,und]scor+ = emphasis #iac4 ,to indicate footnote #iad4 ,place ( footnote #iae4 ,no abbreviation ,capitalization #iaf4 ,prop] n\ns & pron\ns #iag4 ,fir/ ^w 9 s5t5ce #iah4 ,fir/ ^w 9 l9e ( v]se #iai4 ,direct quotation #ibj4 ,names ( social bodies1 etc4 #iba4 ,ref]5ce to ,deity #ibb4 ,i & ,o #ibc4 ,titles ( books1 etc4 #ibd4 ,titles ) names #ibe4 ,names ( mon?s1 etc4 ,figures #ibf4 ,^w d\ble numb]s #ibg4 ,^w sums 9 d\ble numb]s #ibh4 ,numb] sums 9 doll>s & c5ts #ibi4 ,^w sums less ?an "o doll> #icj4 ,^w numb]s z names #ica4 ,beg9n+ ) figures #icb4 ,sums z adjectives ,lett]s #icc4 ,lett] head+ #icd4 ,bus9ess lett] salutation #ice4 ,p]sonal lett] salutation #icf4 ,close ( bus9ess lett] #icg4 ,close ( p]sonal lett] #ich4 ,envelope address #ici4 ,punctuation ( address #idj4 ,=mal note #ida4 ,signature ,,writ+ ,,& ,,rewrit+ ,,*apt] ,i ,,:y ,,le>n ,,to ,,write ,! f\r ma9 reasons = le>n+ to write are3 #a4 ,writ+ is "o ( ! be/ ways to make o!r p]sons ?9k or feel z y d4 #b4 ,e educat$ p]son is judg$ frequ5tly & sev]ely by ! correctness & skill display$ 9 8 writ+4 #c4 ,! m y le>n ab\t writ+ ! m y w enjoy read+4 #d4 ,good writ+ gives pleasure1 n only to ! read] b also to ! writ]4 99 99 99 99 99 #a4 ,! ability to write cle>ly & conv9c+ly w be ( great help to y aft] y leave college4 ,:atev] y\r field ( activity1 y\r ultimate success w dep5d 9 "s degree on y\r ability to make o!r p]sons ?9k or feel z y d4 ,writ+ is "o ( ! be/ ways to atta9 ?is end4 ,_m pr(essional m5 & wom5 f9d t success dep5ds n only on _! k1 b ev5 m on ! skill & cle>ness ) :i* !y c pres5t _! k4 ,lawy]s write briefs & argum5ts4 ,judges write op9ions4 ,cl]gym5 write s]mons4 ,tea*]s1 doctors1 & eng9e]s get _! new ideas be=e memb]s ( _! pr(essions by writ+ pap]s = publications ( v>i\s k9ds4 ,! results ( _! exp]im5ts & rese>*es are almo/ inv>iably pres5t$ to _! colleagues 9 writ+4 ,to atta9 em95ce 9 "o ( ! le>n$ pr(essions x is necess>y = a man's colleagues to ?9k highly ( 8 pr(essional k & atta9m5ts4 ,x is n always possible = ! lead]s 9 y\r pr(ession to "k y p]sonally1 b if y c write !y soon "k :at mann] ( man y are4 ,! s*ol>ly articles t a "y pr(essional man gets pr9t$ correspond to ! home runs t are knock$ by a bu% league baseball play]1 b !re is ?is diff]5ce4 ,! s& lot baseball play] may h made 8 impressive look+ records aga9/ s& lot pit*+ & may fail dismally :5 he faces bett] opposition1 b if a "y pr(essional man has ! m5tal ability & ! skill to produce contributions to k 9 8 field x makes no diff]5ce :]e he lives or "u :at conditions he has done 8 "w4 ,z he moves up to 8 big league he f9ds conditions m & m favorable = 8 cont9u$ gr[? & developm5t4 ,college graduates ev]y:]e are be+ expect$ m & m to assume positions ( lead]%ip 9 all matt]s t p]ta9 to community bett]m5t4 ,sometimes !y are c&idates = (fice2 m (t5 !y are directors ( ! *amb] ( comm]ce ( _! city1 or ( "s simil> civic ent]prise4 ,writt5 /atem5ts1 annual reports1 appeals = public support = a wor?y cause1 lett]s to newspap]s1 circul>s1 & bullet9s are almo/ ! only way a public spirit$ citiz5 c get 8 ideas be=e ! o!r memb]s ( ! community4 ,if he c write cle>ly & conv9c+ly he gets ?+s done t w\ld n be done if he express$ himself halt+ly & incoh]5tly :5 he took p5 9 h&4 ,up-to-date f>m]s & bus9ess m5 use pr9t$ & typewritt5 matt] to get new bus9ess1 to hold & increase old bus9ess1 to adju/ compla9ts1 & to collect money4 ,e salesman has to write reports to 8 firm4 ,=mal bids = all k9ds ( bus9ess are submitt$ 9 writ+4 ,mo/ busy executives pref] to receive ! ideas ( _! subord9ates 9 writ+1 & ! subord9ate :o submits ! l>ge/ numb] ( good ideas 9 ?is way is ! "o :o is likely to be promot$ mo/ rapidly4 ,_m executives h to dep5d on lett]s & bullet9s 9 direct+ l>ge numb]s ( subord9ates or 9 direct+ subord9ates :o _c frequ5tly be br\ght toge!r4 ,if y want to be paid = :at y "k r ?an = :at y d1 le>n to write4 ,o!r ?+s be+ any:]e ne>ly equal ! man :o c write gets ahead fa/e/ 9 ! bus9ess1 political1 or pr(essional _w4 ,! man ) a new idea--:e!r x is a new type ( automobile eng9e or a plan = insur+ hogs--c make a success ( x f> m quickly if he c write cle>ly & conv9c+ly4 ,! next "t y see a copy ( ,:o's ,:o 9 ,am]ica note ! li/ ( publications t foll[s ! "n ( ! successful man4 ,! ability to write has doll> & c5ts value :e!r or n y ev] wi% to sell any ( y\r manuscripts4 ,y mu/ be able to write to get to ! top4 99 99 99 99 99 #b4 ,:y d y suppose t almo/ e help want$ adv]tisem5t t (f]s a sal>y ( m ?an #abjj or #aejj a ye> conta9s ! phrase1 8,apply by lett] only08 ,! answ] is t f "o hundr$ lett]s x is easy to select ! half doz5 or s t come f p]sons qualifi$ = a position r ?an = a job4 ,applicants :o write poor lett]s are nev] consid]$ = good positions4 ,! activities ( ! social _w cont9ually call = lett]s--lett]s ( invitation1 ( acceptance or decl9ation1 lett]s to a ho/ess ?ank+ h] = h] hospitality1 lett]s ( congratulation & ( condol5ce4 ,any new p]son to :om y write w judge :at sort ( man or woman y are f y\r fir/ lett]4 ,un$ucat$ p]sons may h well furni%$ h\ses 9 ! exclusive resid5tial di/ricts ( ! city1 & !y may we> ?\s&-doll> fur coats1 b _! writt5 words betray ! fact t !y are n accu/om$ to associat+ ) educat$ p]sons4 ,/ud5ts :o c write get bett] grades 9 college c\rses ?an d /ud5ts :o _c express !mselves ) p51 p5cil1 or typewrit]4 ,writt5 reports1 t]m pap]s1 & exam9ations all call = ability to write4 ,x is ess5tial n only to h ! in=mation t %\ld be includ$ 9 su* compositions b also to be able to express y\r k s t ! in/ructor involv$ w "k t y "k4 99 99 99 99 99 #c4 ,! bett] y write ! m y w enjoy read+4 ,y c actually "k p]sonally only a few p]sons1 & !y w = ! mo/ "p be y\r neighbors & bus9ess associates4 ,a love = good read+ is ! be/ fri5d y c h4 ,read+ w make y intimate ) all ! great m5 & wom5 :o are n[ alive or :o h ev] liv$4 ,^! great ones ( e>?--! clev]1 ! ent]ta9+1 ! ?\ghtful1 ! lovable1 ! brilliant1 ! c\rage\s--h set d[n 9 books a p]man5t record ( :at !y obs]v$1 ?\ght1 & dream$4 ,to get ! fulle/ flavor & greate/ b5efit f ! words !y h put on pap] y ne$ to be some?+ ( a writ] y\rself4 ,! writ] be/ appreciates ! good writ+ ( o!rs1 j z ! amateur musician gets m pleasure f a symphony conc]t ?an does ! av]age p]son 9 ! audi5ce4 ,! football play] sees f9e po9ts 9 a football game t are lo/ on ! spectator :o nev] tri$ to box a tackle or elude an end4 ,! girl :o makes h] own clo!s c see di/9ctions 9 g[ns t all look alike to h] bro!r4 ,x takes ! craftsman 9 any field ( endeavor to appreciate ! "w ( a ma/]4 99 99 99 99 99 #d4 ,y\r "m has1 at ! bottom ( a trunk or bureau draw]1 a bundle ( lett]s t y\r fa!r wrote to h] :5 !y 7 "y4 ,e little :ile %e reads !m all aga94 ,%e also keeps ! lett]s he writes h] n[ :5 he is away f home4 ,y\r lett]s to y\r "m w n be de/roy$ ei!r4 ,! bett] y write1 ! m pleasure y w give to ! p]sons y love4 ,lett]s ( comm5dation1 congratulation1 or condol5ce :5 done well are treasur$ = ye>s1 & are a nev] fail+ s\rce ( pleasure to ^? :o receive !m4 ,x is wor? some?+ to give pleasure ( ?is sort4 99 99 99 99 99 ,b ! greate/ pleasure ( all 9 writ+ is ! pleasure t comes to y y\rself4 ,to get real enjoym5t f writ+ y %\ld write on a subject y "k ?or\ghly or on "o t int]e/s y--pref]ably bo?4 ,write )\t res]ve2 call ?+s by _! "r names4 ,use c>e 9 select+ ! exact ^w to express y\r mean+4 ,write cle>ly1 concisely1 & vividly4 ,be def9ite & p>ticul> r ?an indef9ite & g5]al4 ,use incid5ts freely to illu/rate y\r po9ts4 ,be =ceful & picturesque4 ,write s t anyone :o kn[s y c\ld pick y\r writt5 creation out ( a ?\s& writt5 by o!rs on ! same subject4 ,write some?+ y are pr\d ( & y w get m pleasure f x ?an f almo/ any?+ else y ev] did4 ,ev5 ?\gh y may n yet h realiz$ x1 writ+ is a great deal m fun ?an go+ to ! !at]1 danc+1 or wat*+ a football game4 ,! greate/ ?rill 9 life comes f see+ "o :om y love create some?+4 ,! next greate/ comes f creat+ some?+ y\rself4 ,create some?+ 9 writ+ t truly repres5ts y & y too w exp]i5ce ?is joy4 ,,*apt] ,,ii ,,h[ ,,to ,,write ,! successive /eps 9 writ+ are3 #a4 ,h a subject t appeals to y1 & write = an actual read]4 #b4 ,ga!r all ! mat]ial y\r subject dem&s4 #c4 ,arrange y\r mat]ial 9 ! mo/ effective ord]4 #d4 ,write z fa/ z y c4 #e4 ,revise1 reca/1 rewrite :at y h writt54 99 99 99 99 99 #a4 ,write on a subject :i* int]e/s y & "o t y "k some?+ ab\t4 ,good writ+ w n result m]ely f try+ to satisfy an in/ructor4 ,y c write well only if y h a compell+ reason = writ+2 if y desire to conv9ce1 in=m1 or ent]ta9 a def9ite read]4 ,"k ! /ate ( m9d y want y\r read] to be 9 :5 he f9i%es read+ y\r composition4 ,write = a def9ite read] su* z a college fre%man1 a high s*ool /ud5t1 an automobile own]1 a t5-ye>-old boy1 a proprietor ( a retail /ore 9 a t[n ( f #ae1jjj to #bj1jjj inhabitants4 ,x w (t5 be helpful if1 aft] y *oose ! g5]al class to :om y\r writ+ is address$1 y select "o individual y "k & keep him con/antly 9 m9d :ile y write4 ,?us in/ead ( writ+ = a t5-ye>-old boy write = y\r bro!r ,rob]t4 ,*oose a subject t c be cov]$ 9 ! numb] ( words at y\r disposal4 ,if y are writ+ a f\r-hundr$-^w !me1 8,! ,am]ican ,high ,s*ool0 is a poor subject4 ,x w\ld take a s]ies ( volumes to exhau/ ! possibilities 9 t title4 ,ev5 elim9at+ a l>ge portion ( x by tak+ ! topic 8,high ,s*ool ,newspap]s10 8,high ,s*ool ,debat+10 8,high ,s*ool ,dramatics10 or 8,high ,s*ool ,a?letics10 helps b little4 ,n>r[+ any "o ( ^! subjects s t x applies only to y\r own high s*ool /ill leaves y ) m mat]ial ?an c well be put into a %ort !me4 ,good subjects = su* !mes are 8,! ,fir/ ,"t ,i ,fac$ an ,audi5ce10 8,! ,be/ ,play ,i ,ev] ,made10 8,h[ ,i ,felt ,:5 ,my ,/ory ,appe>$ 9 ! ,s*ool ,pap]10 & 8,! ,mo/ ,excit+ ,play ,i ,ev] ,saw 9 a ,baseball ,game40 ,to take ano!r example1 8,cook+0 is a subject broad en\gh = a ,mrs4 ,ral/on1 a ,mrs4 ,l9coln1 or a ,miss ,f>m]4 8,mak+ ,dess]ts0 is too compreh5sive = any b an exhau/ive treatise4 8,mak+ ,ice ,cream0 requires at lea/ a booklet4 ,good %ort !me subjects w\ld be 8,h[ ,i ,make ,my ,favorite ,%]bet10 8,h[ to ,make ,*ocolate ,ice ,cream )\t ,cream10 or 8,h[ to ,make ,ice ,cream ,roll ) a ,froz5 ,:ipp$ ,cream ,c5t]40 99 99 99 99 99 #b4 ,reflect1 read1 ask que/ions1 obs]ve 9 ord] to ga!r mat]ial :i* w enable y to c>ry out y\r design4 ,ga!r1 z appli$ to mat]ial = writ+1 implies a g-&-get-x attitude4 ,ga!r+ mat]ial requires a physical z well z a m5tal se>*4 ,d n expect mat]ial to come to y2 g aft] x4 ,talk ) p]sons :o "k4 ,read :at !y h writt54 ,good writ+ is mo/ likely to result :5 ! writ] fuses 8 own exp]i5ce & obs]vation ) ! exp]i5ce & obs]vation ( o!rs4 ,ga!r all ! mat]ial possible )\t try+ to decide1 :ile y are gett+ x1 :at is important & :at is n4 ,keep y\r m9d1 y\r eyes1 & y\r e>s wide op54 ,get details & get pl5ty ( !m4 ,/eep1 saturate y\rself 9 y\r subject4 99 99 99 99 99 #c4 ,aft] y h ga!r$ ! mat]ial1 disc>d ev]y?+ t w n help y to produce ! effect y are try+ =4 ,!n if !re are any gaps 9 y\r composition1 ga!r m mat]ial to fill !m up4 ,"s writ]s get ! be/ results by putt+ a plan on pap] be=e />t+ to write2 o!rs let a plan take m or less def9ite %ape 9 _! m9ds1 b d n try to set d[n any h>d & fa/ outl9e4 ,! reason = n mak+ a h>d & fa/ outl9e is t a curi\s ?+ (t5 happ5s to any writ] :o has writt5 mu*4 ,he f9ds--on occasion--t 8 composition seems to write itself4 ,! *>act]s he ?\ght he _h creat$ h m9ds ( _! own & refuse to let him treat !m l puppets4 ,8 ?\ghts seem to be alive & to exi/ ap>t f him4 ,!y insi/ on express+ !mselves 9 _! own way4 ,an exp]i5c$ writ] does "s ( 8 be/ "w :5 he seems to be m]ely ! m$ium ?r\gh :i* ideas are seek+ to translate !mselves f :atev] _w x is !y inhabit to ?is "o4 ,if1 on ! o!r h&1 a writ] is cont9ually consult+ a plan1 8 ideas & *>act]s nev] take ?+s into _! own h&s4 ,write = someone to read4 ,put y\rself 9 t read]'s place & see if y\r writ+ is produc+ ! desir$ effect4 ,beg9 y\r composition ) ! details t w mo/ effectively attract 8 att5tion & ar\se 8 int]e/4 ,cont9ue writ+ s t y w reta9 8 att5tion & int]e/4 ,/op :5 y h said all y h to say4 99 99 99 99 99 #d4 ,write rapidly & at :ite heat4 ,if p]t95t ideas keep com+ to y =get ab\t y\r plan4 ,get y\r inspiration on pap] be=e x cools4 ,if y f9ally f9d a sy/em--or ev5 a lack ( "o--t enables y to write fa/ & at ! same "t to feel t y are creat+ some?+1 d n let anyone talk y into try+ "s o!r plan4 ,/ick to y\r own4 99 99 99 99 99 #e4 ,revise at leisure1 b ru?lessly1 9 cold blood1 & cont9ue to revise1 re>range1 & rewrite indef9itely until ! f9i%$ product satisfies y4 ,make ! f9al draft absolutely correct4 ,avoid especially ! common faults t d5ote ! semi-illit]ate man or woman4 ,if y make errors t w\ld n be made by a twelve-ye>-old *ild1 y\r composition w get scant consid]ation f an intellig5t read]4 ,:ile revis+1 "q ev]y?+1 spell+1 gramm>1 *oice ( words1 punctuation2 "q ! usefulness ( ea* idea1 & ! arrangem5t ( ! p>ts ( ! complet$ composition4 ,/>t writ+ soon en\gh to give y\rself ample "t = revision4 ,let ! fir/ draft get cold be=e y look at x aga94 ,if y wait sev]al days aft] ! fir/ draft is f9i%$ y c approa* y\r own writ+ z objectively z if x _h be5 done by someone else4 ,x w !n be mu* easi] to "q e lett]1 e ^w1 e phrase1 e s5t5ce1 e p>agraph1 e idea1 besides ! :ole composition & ea* ( its p>ts4 ,make ev]y?+ 9 y\r composition ju/ify itself4 ,:5ev] y are satisfi$ to d m$iocre "w ! re/ ( ! _w is satisfi$ ) ! valuation y h set on y\rself4 ,be y\r own sev]e/ critic4 ,%[ y\r own writ+ no m]cy4 ,"s ( ! _w's mo/ successful writ]s ( adv]tisem5ts z well z ( novels h rewritt5 _! be/ "w "t & aga9 be=e giv+ x to ! public4 ,:at reads smoo?ly takes h\rs ( toil to produce4 ,_m good in/ructors insi/ on receiv+ two copies ( e composition f ea* /ud5t2 "o a r\gh1 lead p5cil draft1 & ! o!r ! f9i%$ manuscript4 ,,*apt] ,,iii ,,ideas ,,= ,,compositions ,my fir/ play1 circus1 fun]al1 visit to a d5ti/'s1 dance1 c\nty fair1 ,f\r? ( ,july1 airplane ride1 sleigh ride1 or meal 9 a sorority h\se4 ,extracts f ! real di>y ( a real fre%man4 ,my favorite newspap] arti/1 c>toon1 or comic /rip4 ,e>n+ money :ile go+ to college or dur+ ! summ]4 ,write ! *apt] ( y\r autobiography t w be head$ 8,e>ly ,ye>s40 ,my hobbies or av]sions4 ,h[ ,i won a prize or compet$ at a c\nty or /ate fair4 ,:at is ! well-dress$ "y man or woman we>+ ?is season8 ,my favorite magaz9e4 ,my favorite recipe4 ,write an acc\nt ( a /ud5t mass meet+4 ,h[ does any organization to :i* y belong comp>e ) rival organizations8 ,h[ does x feel to belong to a frat]nity or h[ does x feel n to belong8 ,write an article = y\r high s*ool pap] tell+ :y y\r college is ! be/4 ,write a lett] home ask+ = money4 ,write a hi/ory ( y\r read+4 ,describe "s locality y "k intimately su* z y\r neighborhood or y\r home t[n4 ,:]e ,i eat4 ,:5 ,i made my big mi/ake4 ,tak+ a psy*ological intellig5ce te/4 ,! secret ( mak+ good fudge4 ,h[ ,i sp5d my sp>e "t4 ,give directions = mak+ some?+ su* z a radio receiv+ set1 an apron out ( an old %irt1 or any?+ t y c make t mo/ p]sons c n4 ,! joys ( hunt+1 camp+ out1 canoe+1 go+ to ! !at]1 danc+1 sitt+ ar\nd & talk+1 or any?+ else t y enjoy do+4 ,h[ ,i le>n$ to swim or h[ ,i taught someone to swim4 ,an emb>rass+ situation4 ,:5 ! joke 0 on me4 ,my nice/ complim5t4 ,fre%man regi/ration4 ,my favorite movie />4 ,:at is ! be/ outdoor sport8 ,my mo/ hat$ in/ructor4 ,a railroad /ation at tra9 "t4 ,m5 or wom5 ,i h work$ =4 ,runn+ a high s*ool pap]1 a?letic team1 or annual4 ,:at w y d :5 y leave college8 ,an excit+ mom5t4 ,:at is "o important ?+ t ought to be *ang$ 9 ! way y\r college is conduct$8 ,if y 7 ! pr9cipal ( ! high s*ool f :i* y 7 graduat$1 :at *anges w\ld y make8 ,h[ does x feel to be r$-head$1 left-h&$1 bald1 or fat8 ,:y ,i am or am n a *ur* memb]8 ,describe h[ to give a d9n] p>ty = eight p]sons4 ,are prices "h high] ?an !y are at home8 ,! mo/ int]e/+ p]son ,i "k4 ,! p]fect roommate4 ,! happie/ p]son ,i "k4 ,my idea ( a good "t4 ,g to *ur* ,sunday & write an acc\nt ( ! s]mon4 ,write an acc\nt ( ! next a?letic conte/1 banquet1 or public lecture y att5d4 ,write an acc\nt ( an int]e/+ recitation4 ,"o ( y\r in/ructors ?is week w sp5d "p ( ! class "t discuss+ a problem ( college1 city1 /ate1 nation1 or _w int]e/4 ,write an acc\nt ( :at he says4 ,:at d y ?9k ( dogs1 cats1 or rabbits = pets8 ,a day's fi%+4 ,:y %\ld anyone /udy ,lat91 ,greek1 ma!matics1 or any subject y l or dislike8 ,:at is ! matt] ) ! college pap]8 ,:at d y ?9k ( ! c\ntry1 ! city1 or ! small t[n z a place 9 :i* to live8 ,h[ %\ld a liv+ room be furni%$8 ,h[ c\ld y decrease y\r exp5ses "o-f\r?8 ,draw a r\gh floor plan ( ! sort ( h\se 9 :i* y w\ld l to live & expla9 its advantages4 ,h[ to di/+ui% fifte5 k9ds ( trees1 birds1 or automobiles4 ,:at is y\r pet extravagance or economy8 ,tell h[ to dress on #ajj1 on #bjj1 & on #ejj a ye>4 ,an automobile camp+ trip4 ,a backy>d g>d54 ,a ,sunday s*ool picnic4 ,:o are ! half doz5 greate/ m5 or wom5 :o h ev] liv$8 ,h[ %\ld a kit*5 be laid out8 ,:at are ! te/s ( a good national frat]nity8 ,h[ c\ld m /ud5ts be int]e/$ 9 debat+8 ,write an acc\nt ( an int]e/+ college tradition = y\r high s*ool pap]4 ,if y 7 ,santa ,claus1 :at w\ld y give y\r home city = ,*ri/mas8 ,pick a football team f ! h]oes ( fiction or ( hi/ory4 ,write a good siz$ adv]tisem5t t c\ld be sold to "s m]*ant :o does n adv]tise 9 "o ( ! college publications4 ,:at are ! t5 lead+ colleges 9 ! c\ntry8 ,:at is an educat$ man8 ,my al>m clock4 ,write a plea to induce "y m5 & wom5 to /ay on ! f>m or 9 ! community :]e !y 7 re>$4 ,%\ld ! high] grade g to ! /ud5t :o does well 9 8 daily "w or to ! /ud5t :o does well 9 an exam9ation8 ,a woman's place is 9 ! home4 ,h[ mu* money w x take to satisfy y five or t5 ye>s aft] graduation8 ,d college a?letes get too mu* publicity8 ,if y c\ld arrange x1 w\ld y h y\r bro!r or si/] e>n "s1 all1 or none ( 8 or h] exp5ses :ile go+ ?r\gh college8 ,e high s*ool graduate %\ld e>n 8 own liv+ = at lea/ "o ye> be=e he is all[$ to ent] college4 ,describe ! conditions "u :i* y\r fa!r & "m />t$ h\sekeep+4 ,recomm5d t5 books = a classmate :o has nev] be5 accu/om$ to read = pleasure4 ,:at d college /ud5ts read 9 ! newspap]s8 ,rules ( etiquette und]graduates ought to foll[4 ,if y 7 a vocational advis]1 :at vocations w\ld y advise ! t5 classmates y "k be/ to foll[8 ,if y c\ld sp5d ! summ] 9 travel1 :]e w\ld y g8 ,:at advice w\ld y give to a boy or a girl :o is go+ to ent] y\r college next fall8 ,be+ afraid4 ,a gloomy holiday4 ,h[ to furni% & decorate a nor? room4 ,:at are ! advantages ( a small or ( a l>ge college8 ,buy+ a new c>4 ,:at %\ld be consid]$ 9 criticiz+ an amateur dramatic p]=mance or a spee*8 ,:at is ! lead+ honor an und]graduate c w9 at y\r college8 ,h[ _m ?+s w y buy be=e y buy a c>8 ,if y _h an assur$ income = ! re/ ( y\r life1 h[ w\ld y sp5d y\r "t8 ,%\ld a wa%+ ma*9e be 9 e home8 ,:at is a g5tleman8 ,:at are ! te/s ( a good t[n8 ,describe "s ecc5tric p]son y "k4 ,describe ! appe>ance ( a fri5d s well t a /rang] c\ld pick him out ( a cr[d4 ,write a %ort /ory bas$ on a movie4 ,write a movie bas$ on a %ort /ory4 ,h[ d ! frat]nity *apt]s at y\r college comp>e ) "o ano!r8 ,write a lett] to y\r "m to rea* h] on ,"m's ,day4 ,write a lett] to y\r fa!r invit+ him to att5d ,homecom+4 ,my "m's fl[] g>d54 ,our bird %elf4 ,h[ to keep cool 9 hot wea!r4 ,pick an 8all0 team f ! football play]s y h se5 ?is fall4 ,s\nds t keep me awake at night4 ,tak+ c>e ( ! baby4 ,! tribulations ( a l&lady4 ,describe a scale by :i* /ud5ts c\ld rate _! pr(essors4 ,:at are ! advantages ( mak+ y\r own clo!s8 ,write 9 play =m an acc\nt ( a family qu>rel or an acc\nt ( :at happ5s betwe5 ! halves ( a close football or basketball game4 ,9 praise ( idl5ess4 ,take ?ree small boys to a soda f\nta9 & h an ice cream eat+ conte/4 ,*ildr5 %\ld be se5 & n he>d4 ,tell :y y\r fa!r1 "m1 bro!r1 or si/] ought to be *os5 mayor1 sup]9t5d5t ( s*ools1 ca%i] ( ! bank1 or any?+ else4 ,h[ w\ld x be possible = y to be elect$ presid5t ( y\r class1 w9 a lett] 9 a?letics1 make ,phi ,beta ,kappa1 run #ajj miles 9 #dh h\rs total "t1 e>n #b1jjj )9 ! next ye>1 or some?+ else t n[ looks improbable8 ,:at w\ld happ5 if y c\ld see a copy ( a newspap] t w\ld n be pr9t$ = ano!r mon?8 ,:at w\ld y say if call$ on to speak at a college mass meet+8 ,tipp+ ought to be aboli%$4 ,:at w t5 ( y\r mo/ intimate fri5ds be do+ t5 ye>s f n[8 ,,*apt] ,,iv ,,! ,,:ole ,,composition 8,:ole composition0 is ! "n giv5 to a complet$ piece ( writ+4 ,,prelim9>ies ,g out & ga!r ! mat]ial4 ,write ! fir/ draft z fa/ z y c4 ,revise ev]y?+ y h writt5 until ! foll[+ requirem5ts h be5 met4 #ajj4 ,indicate )9 ! fir/ few s5t5ces :at ! composition is ab\t4 ,"s ( ! m common devices us$ by exp]i5c$ writ]s 9 beg9n+ a composition are li/$ bel[4 ,y c beg9 almo/ any?+ y w be call$ ^u to write 9 "o ( ^! ways or 9 a comb9ation ( two or m ( !m4 ,use a diff]5t beg9n+ = ea* composition y write until y h tri$ a consid]able numb] ( !m4 ,aft] "s practice y c quickly select ! "o beg9n+ t is mo/ appropriate bo? to y\r mat]ial & to y\r read]4 #a4 ,make "o or m />tl+ ass]tions4 #b4 ,ask "o or m que/ions4 #c4 ,say some?+ clev]4 #d4 ,make "o or m suppositions4 #e4 ,contra/ "o ?+ ) ano!r4 #f4 ,use direct disc\rse4 #g4 ,use an incid5t4 #h4 ,sket* 9 ! backgr\nd4 #i4 ,introduce "o ( ! *>act]s4 #aj4 ,employ a prelim9>y summ>y4 #aa4 ,plunge y\r read] into susp5se4 #ab4 ,/ate ! conclusion ! read] is to rea*4 #ac4 ,give p]sonal details ab\t y\rself4 #ad4 ,talk ab\t y\r read]4 #ae4 ,/ate y\r reflections on ! subject4 #af4 ,expla9 :y y are writ+4 #ag4 ,invoke aid 9 accompli%+ y\r purpose4 #ah4 ,quote a famili> say+4 #ai4 ,p>ody a famili> say+4 #bj4 ,quote :at someone has said or writt54 #ba4 ,quote :at purports to be :at someone has said or writt54 #aja4 ,keep ! same po9t ( view ?r\gh\t4 ,wrong4 ,if "o wi%es to ent] a canoe safely1 he %\ld grasp bo? gunwales & l[] himself to ! seat4 ,y %\ld !n pu% (f f ! %ore4 ,bett]4 ,to ent] a canoe safely1 grasp bo? gunwales & l[] y\rself to ! seat be=e pu%+ (f f ! %ore4 ,wrong4 ,z he /ood look+ d[n ! riv] he saw a h\se-boat pl[+ along2 :ile beh9d him a fleet ( coal b>ges s5t ripples t[>d ! %ore4 ,bett]4 ,z he /ood look+ d[n ! riv] he saw a h\se-boat pl[+ along4 ,turn+ ar\nd he notic$ a fleet ( coal b>ges s5d+ ripples t[>d ! %ore4 ,wrong4 ,! taxi driv] has an excell5t opportunity to obs]ve ! life ab\t him4 ,all k9ds & conditions ( m5 & wom5 make use ( him at all h\rs ( ! day & night4 ,"s ?9k him m]ely a "p ( ! ma*9e he drives1 "s consid] him no bett] ?an ! dirt "u _! feet1 & "s--to be sure !y are n _m--treat him z if he 7 a liv+1 brea?+ human be+ l !mselves4 ,bett]4 ,! taxi driv] has an excell5t opportunity to obs]ve ! life ab\t him4 ,all k9ds & conditions ( m5 & wom5 make use ( him at all h\rs dur+ ! day & night4 ,he f9ds t "s treat him z if he 7 no bett] ?an ! dirt "u _! feet1 & "s--to be sure !y are n _m--z if he 7 a liv+1 brea?+ human be+ l !mselves4 #ajb4 ,include ev]y?+ t ! read] w ne$ = a ?or\gh und]/&+ ( y\r subject4 ,wrong4 ,,! ,,!at] ,,9 ,,am]ica ,betwe5 ! ye>s #agej & #ahad _m ev5ts took place :i* ei!r help$ or h9d]$ ! e/abli%m5t ( a p]man5t !at] 9 ,am]ica4 ,"o ( ! big ev5ts t help$ e/abli% ! !at] 9 ,am]ica 0 ! com+ ( ! ,hallam company ( actors4 ,?is company 0 made up ( ,engli% actors :o came f ! ,we/ ,indies4 ,! company consi/$ ( twelve adult memb]s & ?ree *ildr54 ,e memb] ( ! gr\p _h ability z an actor1 &1 consequ5tly1 ! company 0 successful4 ,!y fir/ play$ at ,yorkt[n1 ,virg9ia1 9 #ageb4 ,!n1 aft] a season 9 ,philadelphia1 !y w5t to ,new ,york4 ,aft] a ?ree mon?s' /ay 9 ,new ,york1 !y return$ to ! ,we/ ,indies1 :]e ,mr4 ,hallam di$4 ,"h a ,mr4 ,d\glas reorganiz$ ! company & ) !m return$ to ?is c\ntry4 ,d\glas1 (t5 call$ ! 8!at] build]10 did mu* = ! future !at]4 ,he 0 a man ( great /r5g? & c\rage4 ,besides be+ a capable manag]1 he 0 also a good actor4 ,d\glas built ! fir/ !at] 9 ,am]ica at ,williamsburg1 ,virg9ia1 & ! fir/ p]man5t !at] at ,philadelphia4 ,he also built !at]s at ,annapolis & at ,newport4 ,! greate/ difficulty :i* ! play companies _h to ov]come 0 ! increas+ opposition ( "s ( ! p t[>d ! !at]4 ,?r\gh\t ! c\ntry p 7 fight+ aga9/ ! !at]4 ,especially 0 ?is true ( ! p ( ! ,nor?4 ,! ,s\!rn]s 7 fun-lov+ & pleasure-seek+1 & ! !at] (f]$ !m a place ( amusem5t4 ,9 _m t[ns1 h[ev]1 laws 7 pass$ aga9/ act+4 ,! opposition ( ! p 0 n direct$ s mu* t[>d ! !at] itself z t[>d ! gambl+ & immorality :i* accompani$ ! !at] ( t day4 ,fold]s 7 di/ribut$ among ! p expla9+ :y ! !at] 0 n approv$ ( & gradually ! gambl+ & immorality disappe>$4 ,aft] ?is ! !at] improv$ & !at]-go+ became bett] ?\ght ( ?r\gh\t ! c\ntry4 ,bett]4 ,,an ,,e>ly ,,influ5ce ,,9 ,,! ,,am]ican ,,!at] ,9 ! ye> #ageb ! !at] 9 ,am]ica receiv$ a great aid ?r\gh ! com+ ( ! ,hallam company ( actors4444 ,! condition ( ! !at] prior to ?is "t left mu* to be desir$4444 ,! nature ( ! company 0 su* t its influ5ce 0 decid$ly good4444 ,naturally ! effect ( ?is k9d ( play] 0 t[>d ! bett]m5t ( ! !at]4444 #ajc4 ,omit any?+ t w di/ract ! read]'s att5tion4 ,wrong4 ,,scor+ ,,9 ,,basketball ,a score 9 basketball is made e "t a play] ?r[s ! ball into "o ( ! baskets plac$ at ea* end ( ! c\rt4 ,9 ! ,we/ ,bran* ,high ,s*ool ! gymnasium is well equipp$ ) ev]y?+ ! /ud5ts ne$ = _! a?letic conte/s4444 ,bett]4 ,a score is made 9 basketball e "t a play] succe$s 9 ?r[+ ! ball into ! basket gu>d$ by 8 oppon5ts4 ,if ?is goal1 z x is call$1 is made f ! field1 x c\nts two po9ts4 ,sometimes1 h[ev]1 "o team is giv5 a free ?r[ at ! basket z ! result ( a f\l's be+ made4 ,if ! ball is cag$ "u ?is circum/ance1 ! f\l goal1 z x is call$1 c\nts "o po9t4 #ajd4 ,writ+ t is s]i\s 9 tone or purpose %\ld include no?+ t w de/roy its s]i\sness4 ,wrong4 ,gypsies are a peculi>1 w&]+ race ( p t appe>$ 9 ea/]n ,europe 9 ! f\rte5? 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t gr[ 9 my g>d5 is ! sweet pea1 *iefly1 ,i ?9k1 because ( ! delicacy ( its color1 =m1 & fragrance4 #aai4 ,give ea* idea ! space x des]ves4 ,wrong4 ,z ! sun climb$ high]1 ! spell ( ! dawn 0 brok51 & ! camp came to life4 ,soon ! surface ( ! lake 0 dott$ ) bobb+ heads4 ,^u ! cre/s ( ! l[ hills f>m]s 7 se5 beg9n+ to pl[4 ,milk c>ts rattl$ along ! roads t[>d ! cream]y4 ,all 0 9 h>mony to =etell a p]fect day4 ,bett]4 ,z ! sun climb$ high]1 ! spell ( ! dawn 0 brok51 & ! camp began to come to life4 ,soon ! surface ( ! lake 0 dott$ ) bobb+ heads z ! camp]s spla%$ ab\t tak+ _! dip be=e breakfa/4 ,!re 0 mu* laught] & m]ry %\t+2 ev]ybody 0 ready to h z mu* fun z he c\ld4 ,across ! lake ! f>m]s 7 comm5c+ to pl[4 ,& f ! road beh9d came ! rattle ( milk c>ts on _! way to ! cream]y4 ,x 0 morn+2 ! _w 0 awake4 #abj4 ,give ea* idea ! position x des]ves4 ,wrong4 ,"h & !re ! long1 %9y body ( a fi% %ot out ( ! wat] & fell back ) a fa9t spla%4 ,! lake *ang$ f ! deep blue reflect$ f ! cle> sky to all ! brilliant colors ( ! sunset4 ,! sun began to set long be=e x %\ld h1 accord+ to ! camp]s' ideas4 ,canoes crept out )\t a s\nd f ! %ore1 & ! camp]s enjoy$ to ! fulle/ _! favorite "t ( ! day4 ,gulls call$ back & =? & settl$ = ! night on jutt+ s& b>s4 ,bett]4 ,! sun began to set long be=e x %\ld h1 accord+ to ! camp]s' ideas4 ,! lake *ang$ 9 color f ! deep blue t _h be5 reflect$ f ! cle> sky to all ! brilliance ( ! sunset4 ,"h & !re ! long1 %9y body ( a fi% %ot out ( ! wat] & fell back ) a g5tle spla%4 ,gulls call$ back & =? to "o ano!r & began to settle = ! night on jutt+ s& b>s4 ,n[ canoes crept f ! %ore )\t a s\nd1 & ! camp]s enjoy$ to ! full ?is _! favorite h\r ( ! day4 #aba4 ,end ) :atev] w give an impression ( a well-r\nd$ :ole4 444 ,) all ^! h9ts ( prospective fun1 h[ easy x is to bang ! books back ^u ! table & let ! _w g hang--on ,friday night4 #abb4 ,*oose a title t w indicate 9 a ^w or a phrase :at ! composition is ab\t4 ,be sure n to ref] to ! title 9 ! body ( ! composition z if x 7 an integral "p ( ! composition4 ,wrong4 ,,friday ,,night ,?is is ! night ( all ! week to :i* ,i look$ =w>d ) ! mo/ pleasure4 ,bett]4 ,,! ,,be/ ,,night ,,9 ,,! ,,week ,!re is "o night 9 ! week t is1 to me1 m pleasant ?an any o!r4 ,y "k :i* "o x is z well z ,i d1 = x is y\r be/ fri5d1 too4 #abc4 ,plan long compositions z y ga!r ! mat]ial4 ,use c>ds or slips ( pap] ( uni=m size = mak+ notes :ile read+4 ,dur+ ! e>ly /ages ( y\r read+1 ! v>i\s topics :i* y w discuss w beg9 to make _! appe>ance4 ,make only "o note on ea* c>d4 ,aft] writ+ ! note1 write "o or two words 9 ! upp] left-h& corn] to indicate ! topic treat$ 9 t note4 ,z y accumulate notes1 keep !m sort$ accord+ to ! topics4 ,:5 all ! available s\rces ( mat]ial h be5 utiliz$ & all ! notes tak51 arrange ! v>i\s /acks--"o /ack = ea* topic--by fir/ spread+ !m out ^u a table s t y c see readily all ! topics at once4 ,!n move ! /acks ab\t1 ?us try+ out v>i\s arrangem5ts until y h made "o :i* seems logical & complete4 ,y w !n h a plan = y\r composition4 #abd4 ,revise = arrangem5t & developm5t by mak+ a plan ( ! composition aft] x is f9i%$4 ,by outl9+ ! composition y h writt51 y w be able to see j h[ c]ta9 ideas be> ^u ! subject & are relat$ to "o ano!r4 ,aga91 ! outl9e w %[ y :e!r or n ! ideas foll[ any ord]ly sequ5ce4 ,b be/ ( all1 p]haps1 x w enable y to judge :e!r ! composition omits any?+ t is vital = complete und]/&+1 or conta9s some?+ t di/racts ! read]'s att5tion4 ,foll[+ is a me?od = mak+ a plan ( ! composition3 ,,/rokes ,,mo/ ,,commonly ,,us$ ,,9 ,,t5nis ,idea to be develop$3 ,9 ord] to be a good t5nis play] "o mu/ ma/] c]ta9 /rokes4 ,i4 ,! s]vice /roke ,a4 ,position ( body #a4 ,pois$ s t weight be add$ to /roke a4 ,leans away f toss b4 ,foll[s racket 9 /rik+ ,b4 ,toss+ ball #a4 ,ball at arm's l5g? f %\ld] #b4 ,held some:at be=e body #c4 ,?r[n lightly ?ree or f\r feet 9 air ,c4 ,/rik+ ball #a4 ,racket rais$ to /rike z ball desc5ds #b4 ,=ce necess>y #c4 ,accuracy necess>y a4 ,ball mu/ /rike c\rt )9 b\nds ,i4 ,dim5sions ( receiv]'s c\rt4 ,etc4 #abe4 ,ex]cise4 ,foll[+ is a composition t is v poorly put toge!r4 #a4 ,make an outl9e ( ! :ole1 us+ only ! topic s5t5ce 9 ea* p>agraph4 #b4 ,/rike out any topic :i* does n help to express ! c5tral idea4 ,reword any topic :i* c be made to s]ve its purpose bett]4 ,add any o!r topics :i* w aid 9 develop+ m fully ! c5tral idea4 ,comb9e topics t expla9 almo/ ! same ?+4 #c4 ,make *anges 9 ! arrangem5t ( topics s t ea* topic w /& 9 its prop] relation%ip to e o!r4 #d4 ,make an outl9e ( e p>agraph1 us+ e s5t5ce4 #e4 ,%ift s5t5ces into positions :]e !y w s]ve bett] to develop ! topic4 ,/rike out any t d n directly apply4 ,reword any t c be improv$ by reword+4 ,ins]t additional s5t5ces :]e !y are ne$$4 #f4 ,%ift s5t5ces f "o p>agraph to ano!r if !y c ?us be made to s]ve _! purpose bett]4 #g4 ,copy ! mat]ial 9 ! regulation =m = a composition1 tak+ c>e t !re is prop] transition f s5t5ce to s5t5ce1 & f p>agraph to p>agraph4 #h4 ,apply ^! admonitions to "o ( y\r own compositions & rewrite accord+ly4 ,,:y ,,take ,,box+8 ,box+ is a v int]e/+ sport4 ,:5 ! *ild ( k9d]g>t5 age fir/ att5ds s*ool he has 8 fir/ exp]i5ce ) fight+4 ,?is happ5s at e meet+ ( boys & cont9ues into ! te5s4 ,ne>ly e real ,am]ican boy wants to le>n h[ to protect himself1 & a c\rse 9 box+ is ! be/ way to le>n def5se4 ,9 box+1 ! individual le>ns :]e ! be/ bl[s are plant$ & also h[ to w>d (f ^! bl[s4 ,if a boy kn[s ^! pun*es he w n be impos$ ^u by 8 companions4 ,ev5 9 lat] life m5 (t5 become qu>relsome & come to bl[s1 b ! man :o has le>n$ ! fundam5tals ( box+ always comes out 9 ! lead4 ,if e man knew h[ to box1 robb]ies w\ld be less frequ5t because ! victims w\ld be less timid & w\ld give battle to ! b&its in/ead ( all[+ !mselves to be held up by highwaym54 ,?us1 def5se is an important elem5t 9 box+4 ,moreov]1 box+1 besides aid+ 9 def5se1 is a heal?ful sport4 ,! body is develop$ greatly aft] "o goes out = box+ z is %[n by ! increase or decrease 9 weight1 z ! case may be4 ,! weight decreases if "o has be5 9 ! habit ( tak+ no ex]cise z he beg9s tra9+1 b ! weight soon increases aga9 z ! body makes ! prop] readju/m5ts4 ,p]sons :o are fle%y soon lose _! sup]flu\s fat4 ,) ! adju/m5t ( weight ! muscles are develop$4 ,! arms & %\ld]s ) _! cont9u\s ex]cise 9 deliv]+ pun*es & w>d+ (f bl[s are highly develop$4 ,! muscles ( ! body are develop$ to a great ext5t by ! cont9u\s twi/+ & b5d+ ( ! body4 ,! legs become firm] & c>ry ! body ) ease aft] practice 9 box+ because ( ! rapid =w>d1 backw>d1 & side movem5ts necess>y4 ,aga91 ! body is develop$ 9 quickness by ! practice ( box+4 ,! box]'s m9d is made m al]t by ! habitual practice4 ,! muscles ( ! body also increase 9 quickness4 ,!y respond in/antly to ! w ( ! m9d & !reby increase ! ability to advance & retreat rapidly1 to deliv] & w>d (f pun*es4 ,:5 ! box] has develop$ ?is quickness ( s5sory & muscul> organs1 he c grasp ! int5t ( 8 oppon5t's actions m quickly & gov]n himself accord+ly4 ,box+ is a v well-kn[n sport4 ,x is widely popul> bo? 9 ,europe & 9 ,am]ica4 ,x orig9at$ sev]al c5turies ago4 ,! ma9 reason = ! popul>ity ( box+ is t x is a v int]e/+ sport4 ,! spectator is held by ! rapid action ( ! box]s4 ,9 ! e>ly days ( box+ ! m5 7 sl[ & reli$ *iefly ^u /r5g?1 b ! mod]n box] has develop$ spe$ & uses %ort1 quick bl[s4 ,if ! box] ( ! pa/ %\ld fight ! box] ( ! pres5t1 ! affair w\ld be v "o-sid$1 because ! latt] w\ld soon tire out 8 oppon5t by 8 quickness4 ,besides be+ int]e/+ because ( ! viol5t action t is a natural "p ( ! sport1 x is also int]e/+ f ! po9t ( view ( ! money-mak]4 ,?\s&s ( doll>s are sp5t e ye> 9 develop+ w9n]s4 ,?is 0 %[n 9 our late/ mat*1 ! ,dempsey-,c>p5ti] fight1 9 :i* _m ?\s&s ( doll>s 7 involv$4 ,an int]national _s also prevails :5 box]s f two c\ntries meet4 ,?is 0 indicat$ 9 ! same mat* :5 all ! ,am]icans yell$ = ,jack & all ! =eign]s = ,georges4 ,box+ has gr[n 9 popul>ity ?r\gh ! ages because ( its aid to heal? & because ( its int]e/+ features4 ,,*apt] ,v ,,! ,,p>agraph ,a p>agraph is an ind5t$ division ( ! :ole composition4 ,beg9n+ ) an ind5tion1 & usually end+ ) a p>tly blank la/ l9e1 x con/itutes a visible block ( mat]ial on ! page4 ,! successive blocks relieve ! /ra9 on ! read] & enable him to m>k ea* /ep 9 ! advance f division to division ( ! ?\ght4 ,9 l5g? 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"r-h& m>g9 ( ! page is rea*$4 ,9 ?is case ! la/ l9e ( ! p>agraph may be left p>tly blank4 ,all o!r l9es mu/ be fill$ cle> to ! m>g94 #bjb4 ,d n ind5t e s5t5ce z if x 7 a new p>agraph4 ,wrong4 ,at t "t !y reorganiz$ a girls' basketball team :i* _h be5 dropp$ two ye>s be=e1 & !y made me jump+ c5t]4 ,al?\gh our high s*ool 0 n a l>ge "o1 we play$ "s v good games1 & manag$ to make a good record = ! f\r ye>s4 ,9 my la/ ye> we _h a new sup]9t5d5t :o 0 int]e/$ 9 a?letics1 & we !n _h teams 9 basketball1 football1 baseball1 & track4 ,"r4 ,at t "t !y reorganiz$ a girls' basketball team :i* _h be5 dropp$ two ye>s be=e1 & !y made me jump+ c5t]4 ,al?\gh our high s*ool 0 n a l>ge "o1 we play$ "s v good games1 & manag$ to make a good record = ! f\r ye>s4 ,9 my la/ ye> we _h a new sup]9t5d5t :o 0 int]e/$ 9 a?letics1 & we !n _h teams 9 basketball1 football1 baseball1 & track4 #bjc4 ,9 repres5t+ conv]sation1 beg9 a new p>agraph ) e *ange ( speak]4 ,wrong4 8,%all we g swimm+ aft] s*ool tonight80 ,i ask$4 8,no1 ,i h to "w10 ,john repli$4 8,:5 c we g1 !n80 8,tomorr[ night aft] s*ool1 or any "t ,saturday4 ,i don't h to "w next ,saturday at all40 8,all "r2 let's g tomorr[40 ,"r4 8,%all we g swimm+ aft] s*ool tonight80 ,i ask$4 8,no1 ,i h to "w10 ,john repli$4 8,:5 c we g1 !n80 8,tomorr[ night aft] s*ool1 or any "t ,saturday4 ,i don't h to "w next ,saturday at all40 8,all "r2 let's g tomorr[40 #bjd4 ,=m "o p>agraph out ( two %ort p>agraphs :i* actually con/itute "o division ( ! :ole composition4 ,wrong4 ,he always has a smile & a k9d ^w = ev]yone4 ,he tries to lift ev]yone ) :om he comes 9 contact to a high] plane ( liv+4 ,mu* sorr[ has come into 8 life1 b x seems to h made him only k9d] & m g5tle4 ,bett]4 ,he always has a smile & a k9d ^w = ev]yone4 ,he tries to lift ev]yone ) :om he comes 9 contact to a high] plane ( liv+4 ,mu* sorr[ has come into 8 life1 b x seems to h made him only k9d] & m g5tle4 #bje4 ,break up a p>agraph t is too long into two or m p>agraphs4 ,! subject matt] ( ea* ( ! new p>agraphs ?us =m$ %\ld con/itute a natural subdivision ( :at 0 orig9ally "o p>agraph4 ,t$i\s4 ,j l all *ildr51 ,*>lotte 0 n p]fect1 ei!r 9 s*ool or out4 ,:ile %e 0 9 ! second grade1 %e 0 s5t home = mak+ pap] boats dur+ /udy "t1 a fasc9at+ pa/ime :i* ! tea*] did n approve (2 & :ile %e 0 9 ! f\r? grade1 %e & a fri5d 7 s5t to ! sup]9t5d5t = a lecture because out ( curiosity !y look$ ?r\gh ! w9d[ ( ! s*ool room "o ev5+ aft] clos+ "t to wat* a naughty s*oolmate get 8 paddl+4 ,! gramm> s*ool days arriv$ at la/1 & ) !m came ! habit ( giggl+ & play+1 at ! exp5se ( lessons & ! try+ ( ! tea*]'s pati5ce & temp]4 ,dur+ ! fir/ ye> 9 high s*ool %e calm$ d[n & work$ h>d to e/abli% a reputation4 ,%e 0 always v en?usia/ic ov] a?letics & yell$ h]self ho>se at basketball or football games4 ,a great deal ( h] "t 0 sp5t 9 read+ books ( v>i\s types & 9 out-(-doors sports4 ,:ile %e 0 a junior & also dur+ ! la/ ye> ( h] high s*ool c>e]1 %e help$ h] fa!r ) ! book "w 9 8 (fice1 ?us gett+ a little exp]i5ce along t l9e & also e>n+ = h]self "s exp5se money4 ,comm5cem5t f9ally came1 & %e 0 graduat$ 9 a class ( ?irty-?ree ) all ! ?rills & excitem5t :i* usually accompany t occasion4 ,bett]4 ,j l all *ildr51 ,*>lotte 0 n p]fect1 ei!r 9 s*ool or out4 ,:ile %e 0 9 ! second grade1 = in/ance1 %e 0 once s5t home = mak+ pap] boats1 a fasc9at+ pa/ime = h]1 b "o1 h[ev]1 ( :i* ! tea*] did n approve1 especially dur+ /udy h\rs4 ,aga91 :5 %e 0 9 ! f\r? grade1 "o ev5+ aft] s*ool _h clos$ = ! day %e & a fri5d peep$ ?r\gh ! s*ool room w9d[ out ( curiosity to see a naughty s*oolmate get 8 paddl+4 ,! result 0 a lecture f ! sup]9t5d5t ! next day4 ,gramm> s*ool days arriv$ at la/1 & ) !m came ! habit ( giggl+ & play+1 at ! exp5se ( lessons & ( try+ ! tea*]'s pati5ce & temp]4 ,dur+ h] fir/ ye> 9 high s*ool1 h[ev]1 %e calm$ d[n & work$ h>d to e/abli% a reputation4 ,%e 0 v en?usia/ic ov] a?letics & frequ5tly yell$ h]self ho>se at basketball or football games4 ,mu* ( h] "t at ?is p]iod ( h] life 0 sp5t 9 read+ books ( v>i\s types & 9 out-(-door sports4 ,nev]!less1 :ile %e 0 a junior & also dur+ h] s5ior ye>1 %e f\nd "t to help h] fa!r ) ! book "w 9 8 (fice1 & s acquir$ a little bus9ess exp]i5ce & also e>n$ "s exp5se money4 ,& f9ally1 :5 comm5cem5t came1 %e 0 graduat$ along ) ?irty-?ree o!rs amid all ! ?rills & excitem5t t usually accompany ?is memorable occasion4 #bjf4 ,avoid a viol5t break 9 ?\ght )9 ! p>agraph4 ,wrong4 ,at ! age ( five ,i ent]$ ! public s*ool4 ,! second day 9 s*ool began ! happie/ days ( my life ) a good :ipp+4 ,?is :ipp+ br\ght into my life ! be/ fri5d ,i ev] _h4 ,aft] eight ye>s ( ! close/ fri5d%ip he pass$ out ( my life4 ,x 0 !n t ! realization ( :at a "m c\ld be swept ov] me4 ,until ?is "t my "m _h be5 a p]son to g to :5 9 tr\ble4 ,%e n[ appe>$ to me 9 ! new light ( a pal4 ,bett]4 ,at ! age ( five ,i ent]$ ! public s*ool4 ,a good :ipp+1 :i* ,i receiv$ my second day 9 s*ool1 n only u%]$ 9 ! happie/ days ( my life1 b also br\ght me "o ( ! be/ fri5ds ,i h ev] _h1 ,mr4 ,cl>k1 ! sup]9t5d5t4 ,dur+ my eight ye>s 9 t s*ool he rema9$ my close/ fri5d1 & x 0 n until ,i _h f9i%$ !re & ,mr4 ,cl>k _h pass$ out ( my life t ,i began to realize :at a real fri5d my "m c\ld be4 ,until ?is "t my "m _h be5 only a p]son to :om ,i c\ld g :5 ,i 0 9 tr\ble2 n[ %e appe>$ m l a pal4 #bjg4 ,disc>d any mat]ial t does n belong 9 ! p>agraph4 ,wrong4 ,:5 ev5+ comes & 8 day's "w is complet$1 he hurries home to 8 family4 ,he is n extravagant 9 8 home1 b has x neatly furni%$4 ,if ! wea!r is favorable1 he takes !m all = a drive 9 ! c\ntry1 or !y g visit+1 or d some?+ else :i* he arranges = ! pleasure ( ^? he loves4 ,bett]4 ,:5 ev5+ comes & 8 day's "w is complet$1 he hurries home to 8 family4 ,if ! wea!r is favorable1 he takes !m all = a drive 9 ! c\ntry1 or !y g visit+1 or d some?+ else :i* he arranges = ! pleasure ( ^? he loves4 #bjh4 ,! sub/ance ( a good p>agraph c usually be summ$ up 9 a s+le s5t5ce4 ,x is (t5 advantage\s to put su* a s5t5ce1 call$ a topic s5t5ce1 at or ne> ! beg9n+ ( ! p>agraph4 ,example4 ,( all ! places = summ] dreams ! be/ is a ,cali=nia bea*4 ,!re ! bl5d$ sights & s\nds =m a quiet sett+ = fanciful ?\ghts4 ,! old ,pacific rolls 9 its oily swells ) only a rippl+ murmur2 ! dron+ ro> ( ! surf a half mile d[n ! %orel9e rises f ! tug ( waves on tons ( pebbles2 ! :ite hull ( a laun* is dipp+1 dipp+ f> out ^u ! wat]1 its regul> exhau/s s\nd+ fa9t & ?94 ,^! sights & s\nds are dreamy & f> (f2 "u ! mood ( !m ! quiet m9d builds sweet1 lazy air ca/les1 to be =gott5 & r5ew$4 #bji4 ,arrange ideas 9 "s def9ite ord] )9 ! p>agraph4 7,see #ajf-aac47 ,example4 ,a f5ce has be5 ! evil g5ius ( my life4 ,x 0 n a rem>kable f5ce1 ei!r2 j a neat picket f5ce pa9t$ :ite4 ,x surr\nd$ a beautiful1 well-kept lawn & gu>d$ an old1 pretty h\se :i* ov]fl[$ ) books & toys4 ,b ! toys w\ld sometimes become tiresome1 & ,i w\ld look wi/fully ?r\gh ! f5ce at ! *ildr5 play+ across ! /reet4 ,i w\ld h lik$ to jo9 !m or to h !m come ov]--b !re /ood ! f5ce4 ,i le>n$ to read & gradually built up a play _w ( my own until "o day ,i realiz$ t ,i lik$ ! f5ce4 ,i no long] c>$ to play ) ! o!r *ildr51 & :5 ,i w5t to s*ool ,i f\nd t ,i c\ld n play ) !m4 ,! f5ce _h foll[$ me4 ,! ye>s outside ! f5ce h *ang$ me some:at1 b /ill :5ev] ,i am 9 a gr\p ( "y p ,i h a feel+ t ,i am n "o ( !m4 ,i want to /& back & wat* !m play4 ,"s p call my backw>dness %yness or timidity1 o!rs call x p\t+ & attribute x to a disagreeable disposition1 b ,i "k :at x is3 x is a neat picket f5ce pa9t$ :ite4 #baj4 ,l9k s5t5ce to s5t5ce )9 ! p>agraph by us+ words & phrases ( ref]5ce1 su* z he1 ?is1 !n1 h[ev]1 ( c\rse4 ,example4 ,!re is a delicacy ab\t sweet peas t makes !m m attractive to me ?an any o!r fl[] 9 my g>d54 ,notice ! way ! blossom is jo9$ to ! /em4 ,x is pois$ !re ) su* nice balance t at ! lea/ puff ( air ! fl[] sways on its long gre5 /alk ) ! rhy?m ( ! w9d4 ,&1 too1 _! delicacy ( color is beyond t ( mo/ fl[]s4 ,really1 ! only ?+ ,i c ?9k ( to comp>e ) !m is ! cl\ds at sunrise4 ,if y h notic$1 ! colors !n are fre% & vivid f ! light beh9d ! cl\ds1 ?\gh a fa9t mi/ makes !m m elusive ?an ! colors ( broad day4 ,9 ! sweet peas ! same airy1 transluc5t color is repeat$--! wan :ite1 ! sob] purple bl5d+ into lav5d]1 ! rose 9 inf9ite v>iety4 ,& !re are o!r ?+s1 besides--! dewy fre%ness t cl+s to !m all day1 ! coolness ( !m1 ! fa9t p]fume--:i* make me ?9k !m diff]5t f ! re/ ( ! fl[]s 9 my g>d5 & :i* set !m ap>t f all ! o!rs 9 delicacy4 #baa4 ,l9k s5t5ce to s5t5ce )9 ! p>agraph by caus+ ea* to gr[ out ( ! "o prec$+4 ,example4 ,a univ]sity is an in/itution ( high] le>n+4 ,= purposes ( m9i/]+ ! bett] to ! v>i\s dem&s made ^u x1 x is made up ( a numb] ( colleges1 z ! college ( m$ic9e1 ! college ( law1 t ( eng9e]+1 ( lib]al arts1 ( comm]ce1 = in/ance1 ea* college be+ 9 *>ge ( an (fic] call$ ! dean4 ,! colleges1 9 turn1 are compos$ ( v>i\s dep>tm5ts1 su* z ! dep>tm5t ( ,romance languages1 ( art1 & ( home economics2 ^! are "u ! *>ge ( (fic]s call$ dep>tm5t heads or pr(essors4 ,& f9ally1 ea* dep>tm5t pres5ts _m c\rses ( in/ruction1 l ,fr5*1 rhetoric1 ,european hi/ory1 & ar*itectural draw+1 ea* c\rse be+ taught directly by an (fic] call$ an in/ructor or pr(essor4 ,h5ce1 al?\gh f ! v>iety ( its int]e/s & ! complexity ( its activities x w\ld seem t a univ]sity is an awkw>d1 unga9ly organism1 nev]!less1 if "o exam9es x closely1 "o f9ds t x is a highly organiz$ & smoo?ly runn+ ma*9e4 #bab4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange 9 numb] )9 ! p>agraph4 ,wrong4 ,"h we f9d :at amusem5ts occupy 8 or h] "t4 ,?is is :]e _! *ief *>act]i/ics c be po9t$ out4 ,!n a ^w "h1 an oddly writt5 phrase !re1 or a lack ( words gives u a clue to ! nature ( ! /ud5t4 ,bett]4 ,"h we f9d :at amusem5ts occupy 8 "t4 ,?is is :]e 8 *ief *>act]i/ics c be po9t$ out4 ,!n a ^w "h1 an oddly writt5 phrase !re1 or a lack ( words gives u a clue to ! nature ( ! /ud5t4 #bac4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange 9 p]son )9 ! p>agraph4 ,wrong4 ,"o le>ns to l "s /ud5ts1 ( :om !re are too few ^u ! campus4 ,o!rs ,i dislike1 & ( ^! !re are too _m4 ,bett]4 ,"o le>ns to l "s /ud5ts1 ( :om !re are too few ^u ! campus4 ,o!rs "o dislikes1 & ( ^! !re are too _m4 #bad4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange 9 t5se )9 ! p>agraph4 ,wrong4 ,my fl[] g>d5 9 ,june is a mo/ int]e/+ & beautiful sight4 ,on a bright sunny morn+ "o w\ld /op 9 amazem5t2 ! fl[]s 7 s happy :5 ! sun rea*$ _! faces1 /ill wet ) dew1 t !y fairly sp>kl$4 ,bett]4 ,my fl[] g>d5 9 ,june is a mo/ int]e/+ & beautiful sight4 ,on a bright sunny morn+ "o /ops 9 amazem5t2 ! fl[]s are s happy :5 ! sun rea*es _! faces1 /ill wet ) dew1 t !y fairly sp>kle4 #bae4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange 9 voice )9 ! p>agraph4 ,wrong4 ,8 directions 7 brief & to ! po9t4 ,e "q ,i ask$ 0 answ]$ by j ! in=mation ,i desir$--no m1 no less4 ,:5 dictat+ he us$ only ! simple/ words4 ,all inquiries 9 lett]s 7 answ]$ pla9ly4 ,bett]4 ,8 directions 7 brief & to ! po9t4 ,he answ]$ my que/ions ) j ! in=mation ,i desir$--no m1 no less4 ,:5 dictat+ he us$ only ! simple/ words & always answ]$ pla9ly all inquiries 9 lett]s4 #baf4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange 9 mood )9 ! p>agraph4 ,wrong4 ,if y 7 to visit ! libr>y on ,saturday aft]noon1 y w\ld f9d x ne>ly des]t$4 ,! tables w\ld be empty & ! read+ room v quiet4 ,! /ud5ts are ^u ! riv] or are enjoy+ !mselves ^u ! campus4 ,someone1 h[ev]1 :o has a pap] to get 9 may be busy at ! ref]5ce %elves4 ,bett]4 ,if y 7 to visit ! libr>y on ,saturday aft]noon1 y w\ld f9d x ne>ly des]t$4 ,! tables w\ld be empty & ! read+ room v quiet4 ,! /ud5ts w\ld be ^u ! riv] or enjoy+ !mselves ab\t ! campus4 ,someone1 h[ev]1 :o _h a pap] to get 9 might be busy at ! ref]5ce %elves4 #bag4 ,put ! mo/ significant idea ne> ! beg9n+ or ! end ( ! p>agraph4 ,example4 ,f> z he c\ld see ?r\gh ! ga!r+ d>k !re 0 quiet1 ! reaction aft] trem5d\s ex]tion4 ,%apes ( m5 surr\nd$ him4 ,"h lay "o flat ^u 8 back1 8 features sket*$ 9 %>p focus by ! fad+ light4 ,?ree y>ds to "o side sat two bodies lean+ back to back1 heads ^u brea/s1 helmets ov] eyes4 ,beyond !m huddl$ an indi/+ui%able mass4 ,on ! o!r side1 s close he c\ld h t\*$ !m1 an arm & a leg /rung along 9 a l9e--no torso )9 a rod ( !m4 ,! _w lay desolate & sil5t except = ! yell[+ moon & ! f> (f1 int]mitt5t fir+4 ,example4 ,my "o worry & regret1 h[ev]1 0 ! fact t my fa!r 0 ! presid5t ( ! s*ool bo>d4 ,"p ( my tea*]s gave me good grades because !y 7 afraid !y w\ld lose _! positions if !y did o!rwise1 & ! re/ ( !m tri$ to flunk me because !y ?\ght !y 7 n be+ paid highly en\gh4 ,among !m all ,i manag$ to make ab\t a ,b av]age1 & ! problem :i* n[ rema9s = ! univ]sity to solve is1 did ,i receive m or less ?an ,i des]v$ :ile 9 high s*ool4 #bah4 ,give mo/ space to ! mo/ significant idea4 ,example4 ,s9ce man's progress ?r\gh ! 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"m be giv5 a :ole p>agraph8 #d4 ,is x possible to =m m ?an "o good p>agraph ( ?is ?\ght8 ,:y1 or :y n8 #e4 ,does a break occur 9 ! ?\ght8 ,:]e8 #f4 ,%\ld any?+ be disc>d$8 ,:at8 #g4 ,c y f9d a topic s5t5ce1 or mu/ y compose "o8 #h4 ,:at ab\t ! arrangem5t ( ideas8 #i4 ,c y improve ! l9ks betwe5 s5t5ces8 ,h[8 #aj4 ,c y give m prom95ce to significant ideas8 ,h[8 ,p]haps x 0 f h] fa!r t %e got h] re/lessness4 ,accid5tally %e put h] f+] on ! label ( :at look$ to be ! top ( an ord9>y hat1 & ! flat %ape %e held imm$iately took ! =m ( a hat4 ,h] only ideas reg>d+ him came ?r\gh an incid5t t happ5$ :5 %e 0 ab\t f\rte54 ,%e _h nev] se5 him1 & h] "m nev] m5tion$ 8 "n4 ,h] fa!r liv$ 9 h] m9d z an ideal4 ,%e ru%$1 fill$ ) que/ions1 to h] "m1 = z long z %e c\ld rememb] !re _h nev] be5 a man 9 ! h\se1 & %e _h nev] se5 su* a hat except 9 pictures4 ,h] "m 0 any?+ b romantic4 ,%e & h] "m _h be5 giv+ _! h\se its fall clean+1 & %e _h f\nd1 wrapp$ up 9 an old silk com=t]1 :at %e took to be a hat--x 0 %ap$ l "o except t x _h no cr[n4 8,y\r fa!r's10 _h be5 ! "m's laconic answ]1 h] lips draw+ into a h>d1 /raight l9e t =bade fur!r que/ion+4 ,,*apt] ,,vi ,,gramm> ,9 ?is %ort discussion ( gramm> ! attempt is n made to discuss exhau/ively all ! features ( ,engli% gramm>4 ,! purpose is only to survey & to id5tify all ! elem5ts ( an ord9>y s5t5ce4 ,! def9itions are few1 & are descriptions r ?an =mal def9itions4 ,! p>ts ( spee* are treat$ z !y become important 9 ! /ructure ( ! s5t5ce4 ,su* a treatm5t ( ess5tials z ?is is necess>y p>tly z a review1 b especially because a tea*] & a /ud5t _c discuss _m ( ! commone/ s5t5ce faults unless !y h a mutually intelligible t]m9ology4 ,a /ud5t mu/ be able to recognize su* grammatical elem5ts z a subject or an object1 a p>ticiple or an inf9itive1 a phrase or a clause1 9 ord] to produce correct & effective s5t5ces4 ,!re is a m9imum am\nt ( grammatical k )\t :i* a writ] _c rewrite 8 compositions s z to avoid ! commone/ errors & imp]fections4 ,:at ,gramm> ,is ,gramm> is ! /udy ( ! /ructure ( s5t5ces1 & ( ! =ms & functions ( words & ^w-gr\ps )9 s5t5ces4 ,9 simple t]ms1 gramm> is ! exam9ation ( ! ma*9]y ( language4 ,s5t5ces ,s5t5ces make ass]tions 7decl>ative s5t5ces71 or ask que/ions 7int]rogative s5t5ces71 or give comm&s 7imp]ative s5t5ces71 or express emotion 7exclamatory s5t5ces74 ,writt5 s5t5ces beg9 ) a capital lett] & end ) a p]iod1 a "q m>k1 or an exclamation po9t4 ,! mo/ common k9d ( writt5 s5t5ce is t :i* makes an ass]tion4 ,?is k9d1 call$ decl>ative1 may well be tak51 !re=e1 z ! mo/ available basis = ! discussion ( ! ma*9]y ( ! s5t5ce4 ,! ^w s5t5ce 9 ?is *apt] w accord+ly mean a decl>ative s5t5ce4 ,! ,p>ts ( a ,s5t5ce--,subject & ,pr$icate ,a s5t5ce has at lea/ two p>ts--a subject & a pr$icate4 ,! subject is t "p :i* designates :at ! ass]tion is ab\t4 ,! pr$icate is t "p :i* makes ! ass]tion4 ,_m /ud5ts e>n _! way ?r\gh college4 ,x is obvi\s t ,_m /ud5ts designates :at ! ass]tion is ab\t1 & is !re=e ! subject4 ,e>n _! way ?r\gh college makes ! ass]tion ab\t ,_m /ud5ts1 & is1 !re=e1 ! pr$icate4 ,al?\gh ! s5t5ce may conta9 o!r elem5ts1 al?\gh ! subject or ! pr$icate or bo? may be long & complicat$1 & al?\gh ! elem5ts mak+ up ! subject & ! pr$icate may be v>i\sly arrang$1 nev]!less e normal decl>ative s5t5ce conta9s ^! two p>ts1 & c be divid$ into ^! two p>ts4 ,subjects ,! fundam5tal ^w or elem5t 9 ! subject is a n\n1 a pron\n1 a g]und1 an inf9itive1 or a clause4 ,a n\n is simply a "n ^w4 ,x may signify a p]son or an animate be+ 7,frank1 boy1 dog71 an object 7tree1 box71 a color 7r$71 an action 7walk+1 /ep1 discussion71 a quality 7goodness71 an ab/ract idea 7tru?1 space71 a g5]al idea 7spe$1 ?+71 to "n only a few k9ds ( n\ns4 ,b x is always ! "n ( an individual or ( a class ( p]sons or ?+s4 ,a pron\n is a sub/itute or symbol ^w :i* signifies a n\n :i* is ei!r express$ ne> ! pron\n or impli$ by ! circum/ances 7he1 x1 :o1 anyone1 ,i1 y74 ,a g]und is a n\n made by add+ ! suffix -+ to a v]b 7walk+1 hop+1 sitt+1 be+74 ,an inf9itive is a =m ( a v]b1 usually prec$$ by ! ^w to1 (t5 us$ to "n ! action signifi$ by ! v]b 7to ?9k1 to h gone74 ,a clause is a s5t5ce elem5t consi/+ ( a subject 79 ! nom9ative case7 & a pr$icate 7) ! v]b 9 a f9ite =m--t is1 n an inf9itive or a p>ticiple74 #a4 ,n\n3 ,"t flies4 #b4 ,pron\n3 ,he arriv$ late4 ,ev]ybody 0 late4 ,i c d x4 #c4 ,g]und3 ,/&+ on ! corn] made him cold4 #d4 ,inf9itive3 ,to tell ! tru? 0 easy4 #e4 ,clause3 ,t he ha? wrong$ me do? appe> 9 ?is4 ,:]e he /ood makes no diff]5ce4 ,pr$icates ,! fundam5tal ^w 9 ! pr$icate is ! v]b4 ,a v]b is a ^w--or a ^w-gr\p--! function ( :i* is to ass]t some?+ ab\t ! subject4 ,! tide rises4 ,! sun %one4 ,i b\ght a book4 ,! box is small4 ,! v]b may consi/ ( "o ^w--z 9 ! examples giv5--or x may consi/ ( a gr\p ( words1 call$ a v]b-gr\p1 conta9+ sometimes z _m z five words4 ,?is v]b gr\p consi/s ( "o1 two1 ?ree1 or f\r auxili>y v]bs1 foll[$ by a =m ( ! v]b express+ ! mean+ or s5se4 ,! =m ( ! s5se-v]b is an inf9itive1 a pres5t p>ticiple1 or a pa/ p>ticiple4 ,! moon w rise4 ,! moon is ris+4 ,! moon has ris54 ,he may light ! lamp4 ,he is go+ to light ! lamp4 ,! lamp at la/ 0 light$4 ,! lamp has be5 light$4 ,! lamp may h be5 light$4 ,he may h be5 go+ to light ! lamp4 ,/ructural ,p>ts ( ! ,pr$icate--,objects ,intransitive v]bs are ^? :i*1 l rise1 make ass]tions ! action ( :i* does n involve any p]son or ?+ o!r ?an ! subject4 ,transitive v]bs are ^? :i*1 l light1 make ass]tions :i* involve "s p]son or ?+ o!r ?an ! subject 9 ! action ( ! v]b4 ,9 ! s5t5ce ,he light$ ! lamp1 lamp is su* an object4 ,! same v]b may sometimes ass]t "o1 & sometimes ! o!r k9d ( action4 ,! door op5$4 ,he op5$ ! door4 ,"s transitive v]bs make an ass]tion :i* involves two n\ns1 bo? signify+ ! same ?+ or p]son4 ,! club elect$ ,frank presid5t4 ,"s transitive v]bs make an ass]tion :i* involves two diff]5t objects or p]sons4 ,i gave ,frank an apple4 ,%e b\ght ,frank an apple4 ,i told him a /ory4 ,"h apple or /ory is ! object directly affect$ by ! action ( ! v]b1 & is1 !re=e1 call$ ! direct object4 ,frank or him designates ! p]son = ^: b5efit ! action ( ! v]b affects ! direct object1 & is call$ ! indirect object4 ,copulas & ,complem5ts ,/ill ano!r k9d ( v]b1 call$ a copula1 ?\gh x does n take a direct object1 makes only "p ( ! ass]tion4 ,! re/ is made by means ( ano!r ^w 7or elem5t7 :i* *>act]izes ! subject b :i* is an ess5tial "p ( ! ass]tion4 ,9 fact1 ! complem5t1 z ! elem5t complet+ ! v]b is call$1 is ! mo/ significant "p ( ! pr$icate2 ! v]b is m]ely a bit ( ma*9]y by means ( :i* ! complem5t is turn$ into an ass]tion4 ,! sky is r$4 ,! d>k %ape 0 a h\se4 ,! c> looks *eap4 ,he is 9 ! h\se4 ,home is :]e ! he>t is4 ,9 ^! s5t5ces1 r$1 a h\se1 *eap1 9 ! h\se1 & :]e ! he>t is1 are p>ts ( ! pr$icate1 ?\gh !y *>act]ize ! subject4 ,su* elem5ts are call$ complem5ts because !y complete ! ass]tion ( ! v]b2 if adjectives1 !y are call$ adjective complem5ts1 or bett]1 pr$icat$ adjectives2 if n\ns1 !y are call$ n\n complem5ts1 or pr$icat$ n\ns2 if clauses or phrases1 !y are call$ complem5ts1 or pr$icat$ phrases or clauses4 ,! v]bs by means ( :i* ^! complem5ts are pr$icat$ are call$ copulas4 ,modifi]s ,almo/ e ^w 9 ! s5t5ce is capable ( hav+ its mean+ describ$1 re/rict$1 emphasiz$1 or ton$ d[n 9 "s way--t is1 any mean+ 9 ! s5t5ce may be *>act]iz$ or modifi$4 ,heavy automobiles run smoo?ly4 ,heavy bo? describes & re/ricts automobiles4 ,words :i* *>act]ize n\ns 9 ?is way are call$ adjectives4 ,smoo?ly describes & re/ricts run4 ,words :i* *>act]ize v]bs are call$ adv]bs4 ,v heavy automobiles run mu* m smoo?ly4 ,v emphasizes heavy4 ,a ^w :i* ?us *>act]izes an adjective is call$ an adv]b4 ,m *>act]izes smoo?ly4 ,mu* *>act]izes m4 ,a ^w :i* *>act]izes an adv]b is call$ an adv]b4 ,prepositional ,phrases ,n\ns1 pron\ns1 v]bs1 adjectives1 & adv]bs are also frequ5tly describ$ or limit$ 9 ! same way by an elem5t or gr\p ( words call$ a prepositional phrase4 ,?is usually consi/s ( a n\n1 pron\n1 or g]und ^: exact relation%ip to ! modifi$ ^w is %[n by means ( a preposition4 ,! preposition is plac$ be=e ! modify+ n\n or pron\n & its adjective modifi]s4 ,at home ,9 ! h\se ,) l>ge tires ,ov] r\gh roads ,heavy automobiles ) l>ge tires run smoo?ly ov] r\gh roads4 ,) l>ge tires is a prepositional phrase1 consi/+ ( ! preposition ) & its object tires2 ! phrase modifies or *>act]izes automobiles4 ,ov] r\gh roads is a prepositional phrase :i* *>act]izes run4 ,a prepositional phrase *>act]iz+ a n\n is call$ an adjective prepositional phrase4 ,"o *>act]iz+ a v]b is call$ an adv]bial prepositional phrase4 ,subord9ate ,clauses ,a clause is any "p ( a s5t5ce consi/+ ( a subject 9 ! nom9ative case & a pr$icate conta9+ a v]b 9 a f9ite =m 7n a p>ticiple or an inf9itive74 ,"s clauses are us$ z n\ns2 o!rs are us$ to *>act]ize or modify n\ns1 pron\ns1 v]bs1 adjectives1 or adv]bs4 ,clauses us$ z n\ns are call$ n\n clauses4 ,^? us$ z adjectives are call$ adjective or relative clauses4 ,^? us$ to modify v]bs1 adjectives1 or adv]bs are call$ adv]b clauses4 ,n\n ,clauses ,n\n clauses may be us$ 9 practically any con/ruction 9 :i* a n\n is us$4 ,subject3 ,t he is a good workman is cle> en\gh4 ,appositive3 ,! fact t ! pap] is new disproves 8 claim4 ,pr$icat$ n\n3 ,! wea!r w be :at fate det]m9es4 ,object ( v]b3 ,i saw t he _h f9i%$4 ,object ( preposition3 ,! book is satisfactory except t x omits "o ess5tial feature4 ,adjective ,clauses ,adjective clauses are ^? :i* modify a n\n or a pron\n4 ,heavy automobiles :i* c>ry l>ge loads run smoo?ly4 ,adv]b ,clauses ,adv]b clauses usually modify a v]b4 ,!y *>act]ize ! v]b 9 sev]al diff]5t ways4 ,"t3 ,he hurt 8 wri/ :5 he fell4 ,place3 ,i put ! glass :]e ,i c\ld rea* x4 ,cause3 ,we /opp$ ! c> because x 0 ra9+4 ,concession3 ,al?\gh x 0 /ill d>k ,i awoke4 ,condition3 ,if y read widely y w n be ignorant4 ,purpose3 ,he broke ! /one t he might f9d a fossil4 ,result3 ,he /ruck ! vase s t x fell ov]4 ,mann]3 ,!y "w z !y please4 ,adv]b clauses ( degree1 & sometimes ^? ( mann] & ( result modify an adv]b or an adjective4 ,! *]ries ta/$ sweet] ?an !y look$4 ,he saw$ ! plank z c>efully z he c\ld4 ,we travel$ s sl[ly t ,i despair$ ( rea*+ our de/9ation4 ,p>ticiples ,! p>ticiple is any =m ( ! v]b us$ z an adjective4 ,!re are sev]al =ms3 ris+1 ris51 hav+ ris52 rais+1 rais$1 hav+ rais$1 be+ rais$1 hav+ be5 rais$4 ,! ris+ sun awak5$ me4 ,! fall5 tree lay across ! rav9e4 ,! w9d1 h[l+ a gale1 swept ! sea4 ,twi/+ out ( my h&s1 he escap$ 9 ! d>kness4 ,! tree1 twi/$ & brok51 rott$ away4 ,inf9itives ,! inf9itive is usually prec$$ by its sign1 to1 b aft] "s v]bs 7d1 %all1 w1 may1 c1 d>e1 help1 ne$1 see1 he>1 feel1 let1 make1 bid7 & aft] ! expressions _h bett]1 _h r1 x is usually ! pure or root inf9itive )\t to4 ,!re are six =ms ( ! inf9itive3 ,simple ,progressive ,passive ,pres4 to take to be tak+ to be tak5 ,p]f4 to h tak5 to h be5 tak+ to h be5 tak5 ,! inf9itive has v>i\s uses3 ,subject3 ,to comm& is 8 ambition4 ,pr$icat$ n\n3 ,to "k is to act4 ,object ( v]b3 ,i pref] to travel sl[ly4 ,aft] n\ns3 ,we h "w to d4 ,aft] v]bs3 ,he fail$ to pass 8 exam9ations4 ,he seem$ to be 9 tr\ble4 ,*ildr5 _h bett] be sil5t4 ,aft] v]bs 7) n\n or pron\n subject73 ,our neighbors help$ u move4 ,aft] adjectives3 ,!y are glad to he> ! news4 ,he is s fooli% z to believe ! tale4 ,conjunctions ,x is (t5 necess>y or desirable to jo9 toge!r two or m simil> words1 elem5ts1 or clauses 9 a s5t5ce4 ,two n\ns con/itut+ ! subject1 = example1 may h ! same ass]tion made ab\t !m4 ,"t & tide wait = no man4 ,&1 :i* jo9s "t & tide1 is a conjunction4 ,two adjectives1 two v]bs1 two adv]bs1 two prepositional phrases1 or two clauses may be jo9$ toge!r ) a conjunction4 ,! flag is color$ r$ & blue4 ,"t came & w5t4 ,m5 & wom5 laugh$ & cri$4 ,! ra9s desc5d$1 & ! floods came4 ,! automobile is fa/1 b ! airplane is fa/]4 ,words l & & b are conjunctions4 ,conjunctions :i* connect words1 phrases1 or clauses ( equal grammatical value are call$ co-ord9at+ conjunctions4 ,! mo/ frequ5t are &1 b1 or1 nor1 =4 ,subord9at+ conjunctions are us$ to jo9 a subord9ate clause--n\n1 adjective1 or adv]b--to ano!r clause or to "s ^w 9 ano!r clause4 ,at ! same "t !y %[ ! exact significance & be>+ ( ! subord9ate clause4 ,we he>d t ! tra9 0 wreck$4 ,he came because ,i call$ him4 ,he rema9$ ?\gh he want$ to g4 ,if x ra9s ,i %all /ay at home4 ,subord9at+ conjunctions are also sometimes us$ to jo9 p>ticiples or adjectives to ! re/ ( ! s5t5ce4 ,9 su* cases1 ! p>ticiple or ! adjective modifies a n\n4 ,?\gh mov+ sl[ly1 ! tra9 0 ga9+4 ,?\gh fai?ful to 8 ma/]1 ! dog 0 %ot4 ,/ructure ( ,s5t5ces ,accord+ to c]ta9 features ( _! /ructure1 s5t5ces are classifi$ z simple1 comp\nd1 or complex4 ,a simple s5t5ce is "o consi/+ ( a s+le clause or ass]tion4 ,"t flies4 ,"t came & w5t4 ,"t & tide wait = no man4 ,m5 & wom5 laugh$ & cri$4 ,! subject ( a simple s5t5ce may consi/ ( "o n\n or pron\n ) its modifi]s1 or ( two or m n\ns ) _! modifi]s4 ,9 ! latt] case1 ! subject is call$ a comp\nd subject4 ,simil>ly1 ! pr$icate may conta9 "o v]b or two or m v]bs4 ,occasionally a s5t5ce w h a comp\nd subject & a comp\nd pr$icate1 z 9 ! la/ example giv54 ,comp\nd ,s5t5ces ,a comp\nd s5t5ce is "o :i* consi/s ( two or m ass]tions ( equal grammatical value--t is1 nei!r ass]tion is grammatically subord9ate to ! o!r or to any "p ( ! o!r4 ,! ra9 desc5d$1 & ! floods came4 ,! automobile is fa/1 b ! airplane is fa/]4 ,complex ,s5t5ces ,a complex s5t5ce is "o :i* conta9s n only a ma9 ass]tion 7or m ?an "o71 b also "o or m subord9ate ass]tions--t is1 x conta9s "o or m ass]tions :i* are grammatically incorporat$ z a n\n or an adjective or an adv]b into ! ma9 clause or into ano!r subord9ate clause4 ,i saw t he _h f9i%$4 ,heavy automobiles :i* c>ry l>ge loads run smoo?ly4 ,! wea!r w be :at fate det]m9es4 ,he broke ! /one t he might f9d a fossil4 ,absolute ,elem5ts ,mo/ ( ! elem5ts ( a s5t5ce h a cle> grammatical relation to "o ano!r4 ,b !re are pieces ( /ructure :i* h no evid5t relation%ip to any?+ else4 ,n\n absolute3 ,he lay d[n1 8 he>t heavy ) sorr[4 ,hat 9 h&1 he came d[n /airs4 ,! p>ticiple absolute is m frequ5t4 ,p>ticiple absolute3 ,?is said1 he sat d[n4 ,"o ( !m hav+ fall51 ! re/ ran away4 ,! tea*] abs5t+ himself1 !re 0 no s*ool4 ,p>5!tical ,elem5ts ,p>5!tical elem5ts1 l s to speak1 x is hop$1 x is report$1 !y rem>k1 :i* h no grammatical connection ) ! re/ ( ! ass]tion1 occur frequ5tly4 ,sometimes !y are inclos$ )9 da%es1 sometimes )9 p>5!ses1 sometimes )9 commas4 ,?is action1 x is expect$1 w produce results4 ,flexibility ( ! ,s5t5ce ,elem5ts ,al?\gh ! s5t5ce has a normal ord]--subject1 v]b1 object2 or subject1 v]b1 complem5t--x is ri* & v>i$ 9 ! possibilities x possesses ( v>iety & re>rangem5t1 especially 9 ! position ( adjective1 p>ticipial1 & adv]bial elem5ts1 & 9 ! case ( adv]b clauses4 ,adjective3 ,! gloomy & port5t\s m\nta9s t[]$ above him4 ,gloomy & port5t\s1 ! m\nta9s t[]$ above him4 ,! m\nta9s1 gloomy & port5t\s1 t[]$ above him4 ,adv]b3 ,! build+ may h be5 ent]$ imm$iately4 ,! build+ may h be5 imm$iately ent]$4 ,! build+ may h imm$iately be5 ent]$4 ,imm$iately ! build+ 0 ent]$4 ,! build+ 0 imm$iately ent]$4 ,! build+ 0 ent]$ imm$iately4 ,adv]b ,clauses3 ,z soon z he _h knock$1 he op5$ ! door4 ,he op5$ ! door z soon z he _h knock$4 ,inflections ,n\ns1 pron\ns1 v]bs1 & two adjectives %[ *anges 9 function & mean+ by means ( *anges 9 =m1 by end+s1 or1 sometimes 9 ! case ( v]bs1 by prefix+ auxili>y v]bs4 ,n\n ,decl5sion ,n\ns are decl9$ to %[ case & numb]4 ,s+ul> ,plural ,common boy boys ,possessive boy's boys' ,common man m5 ,possessive man's m5's ,common *ild *ildr5 ,possessive *ild's *ildr5's ,pron\n ,decl5sion ,pron\ns are decl9$ to %[ case & numb]4 ,s+ul> ,plural ,nom9ative ,i we ,possessive my our ,objective me u ?\ y ?y y\r !e y he %e x !y 8 h] its _! him h] x !m :o ^: :om ,adjective ,decl5sion ,two adjectives %[ diff]5ces 9 numb]4 ,s+ul> ,plural ?is ^! t ^? ,v]b ,conjugation ,v]bs are conjugat$ to %[ p]son1 numb]1 t5se1 mood1 & voice4 ,mo/ ( ^! *anges are %[n by ! use ( auxili>y v]bs1 :i* are plac$ be=e ! inf9itive or ! pa/ or pres5t p>ticiple ( ! s5se-v]b4 ,! comb9ations are call$ v]b-gr\ps4 ,indicative ,mood ,,pres5t 7,simple or habitual7 ,active ,passive ,i take ,i am tak5 ,y take ,y are tak5 ,he takes ,he is tak5 ,we take ,we are tak5 ,,pres5t 7,progressive or def9ite7 ,i am tak+ ,i am be+ tak5 ,,pa/ 7,simple7 ,i took ,i 0 tak5 ,,pa/ 7,progressive or def9ite7 ,i 0 tak+ ,i 0 be+ tak5 ,,future 7,=mal7 ,i %all take ,i %all be tak5 ,y w take ,y w be tak5 ,he w take ,he w be tak5 ,we %all take ,we %all be tak5 ,y w take ,y w be tak5 ,!y w take ,!y w be tak5 ,,future 7,colloquial7 ,i am go+ to take ,i am go+ to be tak5 ,y are go+ to take ,y are go+ to be tak5 ,he is go+ to take ,he is go+ to be tak5 ,we are go+ to take ,we are go+ to be tak5 ,,pres5t ,,p]fect 7,simple7 ,i h tak5 ,i h be5 tak5 ,he has tak5 ,he has be5 tak5 ,we h tak5 ,we h be5 tak5 ,,pres5t ,,p]fect 7,progressive or def9ite7 ,i h be5 tak+ 7,want+7 ,,pa/ ,,p]fect 7,simple7 ,i _h tak5 ,i _h be5 tak5 ,,pa/ ,,p]fect 7,progressive or def9ite7 ,i _h be5 tak+ 7,want+7 ,,future ,,p]fect ,i %all h tak5 ,i %all h be5 tak5 ,,colloquial ,,passive ,,) ,,get ,,pres5t ,x is gett+ brok5 ,,pa/ ,x got brok5 ,,future ,x w get brok5 ,subjunctive ,mood ,,pres5t ,active ,passive ,i may take ,i may be tak5 ,i c take ,i c be tak5 ,i mu/ take ,i mu/ be tak5 ,,pa/ ,i might take ,i might be tak5 ,i %\ld take ,i %\ld be tak5 ,he w\ld take ,he w\ld be tak5 ,i c\ld take ,i c\ld be tak5 ,conjugation ( ,be ,be is an extremely irregul> composite v]b4 ,x is made up ( ?ree v]bs1 is 7am1 are1 art71 be1 & 0 7774 ,indicative ,pres5t ,pa/ ,i am ,i 0 ,y are ,y 7 ,he is ,he 0 ,we are ,we 7 ,y are ,y 7 ,!y are ,!y 7 ,subjunctive ,pres5t ,pa/ ,i be ,i 7 ,y be ,y 7 ,he be ,he 7 ,we be ,we 7 ,y be ,y 7 ,!y be ,!y 7 ,,*apt] ,,vii ,,s5t5ce ,,correctness ,! language spok5 & writt5 by educat$ p]sons & by tra9$ writ]s 9 all p>ts ( ! ,engli%-speak+ _w has c]ta9 =ms & usages to :i* ev]yone mu/ con=m if he wi%es to be recogniz$ z a well-educat$ man or woman4 ,con=mity to ! ^w-=ms & to ! s5t5ce /ructure ( ?is widespread language is call$ correctness4 #cjj4 ,use ! nom9ative case = ! subject ( e f9ite v]b4 ,i1 ?\1 he1 %e1 we1 !y1 :o1 are nom9atives4 ,wrong4 ,him & ,i graduat$ la/ ye>4 ,"r4 ,he & ,i graduat$ la/ ye>4 ,revise4 ,u & h] w5t by ourselves4 #cja4 ,use ! nom9ative =m :o = ! subject1 ev5 if a p>5!tical he says1 he ?9ks1 etc41 int]v5es betwe5 subject & v]b4 ,wrong4 ,%e 0 ! tea*] :om we ?\ght _h se5 u4 ,"r4 ,%e 0 ! tea*] :o we ?\ght _h se5 u4 ,revise4 ,he :om ev]ybody ?\ght w\ld w9 ! prize came out second4 #cjb4 ,use ! nom9ative =ms :o1 :oev] = ! subject ( a subord9ate clause1 ev5 if a v]b or a preposition imm$iately prec$es :o1 :oev]4 ,wrong4 ,i %all believe :omev] has ! be/ argum5t4 ,"r4 ,i %all believe :oev] has ! be/ argum5t4 ,wrong4 ,a rew>d 0 (f]$ to :omev] return$ ! lo/ book4 ,"r4 ,a rew>d 0 (f]$ to :oev] return$ ! lo/ book4 ,revise4 ,! decision z to :om %\ld be puni%$ no long] re/s ) me4 #cjc4 ,use ! nom9ative case = a pr$icat$ pron\n aft] is1 are1 01 71 etc4 ,wrong4 ,x 0 me4 ,"r4 ,x 0 ,i4 ,wrong4 ,! be/ fri5ds ,i h are h] & him4 ,"r4 ,! be/ fri5ds ,i h are %e & he4 ,revise4 ,x is n :om y ?9k x is4 #cjd4 ,put a pron\n us$ z an appositive into ! same case z ! n\n ) :i* x is 9 apposition4 ,wrong4 ,let's y & ,i g4 ,"r4 ,let's y & me g4 ,wrong4 ,! pr9cipal call$ 9 sev]al pupils1 ,jack & ,m>y & ,i4 ,"r4 ,! pr9cipal call$ 9 sev]al pupils1 ,jack & ,m>y & me4 ,revise4 ,= :om did y ask--!y & %e8 #cje4 ,aft] ! conjunctions z & ?an1 put ! pron\n into ! same case z t ( ! n\n or pron\n ) :i* ! comp>ison is made4 7,exception3 ,! =m :om is usually us$ aft] ?an47 ,wrong4 ,he swims bett] ?an me4 ,"r4 ,he swims bett] ?an ,i4 ,wrong4 ,%e is z ri* z him4 ,"r4 ,%e is z ri* z he4 ,wrong4 ,x improv$ him m ?an ,i4 ,"r4 ,x improv$ him m ?an me4 ,"r4 ,he is a /ud5t ?an :om !re is none bett]4 ,revise4 ,i l him bett] ?an %e4 #cjf4 ,use ! possessive case ( a n\n or pron\n ) a g]und4 ,wrong4 ,i am tir$ ( y go+ away l ?is4 ,"r4 ,i am tir$ ( y\r go+ away l ?is4 ,wrong4 ,_h y n he>d ( him be+ ill8 ,"r4 ,_h y n he>d ( 8 be+ ill8 ,revise4 ,i w n consid] ,h5ry leav+4 ,revise4 ,too mu* att5tion 0 paid to ,e!l be+ rew>d$4 #cjg4 ,put only n\ns indicat+ p]sons or animate be+s into ! possessive case4 ,wrong4 ,biography is hi/ory's mo/ int]e/+ "p4 ,"r4 ,biography is ! mo/ int]e/+ "p ( hi/ory4 ,revise4 ,8 /rik+ appe>ance held ! class's att5tion4 #cjh4 ,use ! objective case ( a pron\n :i* is ! object ( a v]b or ( a preposition4 ,wrong4 ,my fa!r decid$ t ! f>m 0 ! be/ place = my bro!r & ,i4 ,"r4 ,my fa!r decid$ t ! f>m 0 ! be/ place = my bro!r & me4 ,revise4 ,mo/ ( we girls are /udy+ h\sehold art4 #cji4 ,use ! objective case ( a pron\n :i* is ! subject ( an inf9itive aft] a v]b ( say+1 ?9k+1 p]mitt+1 etc4 ,wrong4 ,our p>5ts let my si/] & ,i drive ! horse4 ,"r4 ,our p>5ts let my si/] & me drive ! horse4 ,revise4 ,:o d y want to be capta98 #caj4 ,use ! objective case ( a pron\n :i* is pr$icat$ aft] to be1 to h be51 us$ ) a v]b ( say+1 ?9k+1 etc4 ,wrong4 ,he ?\ght x to be we4 ,"r4 ,he ?\ght x to be u4 ,wrong4 ,!y believ$ h] to h be5 ,i4 ,"r4 ,!y believ$ h] to h be5 me4 ,revise4 ,we wi%$ x to be !y4 #caa4 ,use ?is k9d (1 t k9d (1 ?is sort (1 ev5 if foll[$ by a plural n\n4 ,wrong4 ,y _c use ^? sort ( films4 ,"r4 ,y _c use t sort ( films4 ,revise4 ,did y ev] see ^! k9d ( in/rum5ts8 #cab4 ,ref] a s+ul> pron\n to a s+ul> antec$5t4 ,wrong4 ,he c>efully crat$ & box$ ! se$ to /& wea!r+1 & %ipp$ !m to ,india4 ,"r4 ,he c>efully crat$ & box$ ! se$ to /& wea!r+1 & %ipp$ x to ,india4 ,wrong4 ,ev]yone did ju/ice to _! appetite4 ,"r4 ,ev]yone did ju/ice to 8 appetite4 ,revise4 ,"o c tell :5 !y come to ^! villages because ( ! smell ( ! cod4 #cac4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,wrong4 ,! fir/ five ye>s ( my life 0 sp5t "h4 ,"r4 ,! fir/ five ye>s ( my life 7 sp5t "h4 ,revise4 ,magaz9es1 especially ! ,am]ican1 is :at ,i enjoy read+4 #cad4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,ea*1 ea* "o1 e1 ev]yone1 ev]ybody1 anyone1 anybody1 ei!r1 nei!r1 none1 no "o1 nobody1 are s+ul>4 ,wrong4 ,nei!r ( ^! treat ! subject ?or\ghly4 ,"r4 ,nei!r ( ^! treats ! subject ?or\ghly4 ,wrong4 ,oh1 h[ ,i want$ a bicycle4 ,ev]yone ei!r got "o or 7 go+ to get "o4 ,"r4 ,oh1 h[ ,i want$ a bicycle4 ,ev]yone ei!r got "o or 0 go+ to get "o4 ,revise4 ,= t reason almo/ ev]ybody !re get sleepy4 #cae4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,two or m s+ul> n\ns jo9$ by & =m a plural subject4 ,wrong4 ,across ! /reet is ! eng9e]+ build+ & ! univ]sity heat+ plant4 ,"r4 ,across ! /reet are ! eng9e]+ build+ & ! univ]sity heat+ plant4 ,revise4 ,bo? ! plot & ! /yle 0 v good4 #caf4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,s+ul> n\ns or pron\ns jo9$ by or or nor =m a s+ul> subject4 ,wrong4 ,cl>abell or ,sue are go+4 ,"r4 ,cl>abell or ,sue is go+4 ,wrong4 ,nei!r ,h5ry nor ,h]b]t 7 well treat$4 ,"r4 ,nei!r ,h5ry nor ,h]b]t 0 well treat$4 ,revise4 ,ei!r ! capta9 or ! s]geant h made a mi/ake4 #cag4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,a collective n\n requires a s+ul> v]b if ! gr\p is reg>d$ z a unit1 a plural v]b if x is reg>d$ z a collection ( individuals4 ,wrong4 ,%e drills u on a lesson until %e is sure ! class are famili> ) ev]y?+ 9 ea* assignm5t4 ,"r4 ,%e drills u on a lesson until %e is sure ! class is famili> ) ev]y?+ 9 ea* assignm5t4 ,wrong4 ,sometimes :5 "s memb] ( ! class makes a mi/ake 9 8 spee*1 ! re/ ( ! class laugh & talk ab\t x4 ,"r4 ,sometimes :5 "s memb] ( ! class makes a mi/ake 9 8 spee*1 ! re/ ( ! class laughs & talks ab\t x4 ,revise4 ,ano!r committee1 kn[n z ! advisory committee1 is compos$ ( "o memb] f ea* di/rict1 & are *os5 by ! bo>d ( ! di/rict bank repres5t$4 #cah4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,an int]v5+ n\n mu/ n attract ! v]b into a diff]5t =m4 ,wrong4 ,! numb] ( be>+s 9 a c> v>y4 ,"r4 ,! numb] ( be>+s 9 a c> v>ies4 ,wrong4 ,! gr\nds ^u :i* ! build+ /&s consi/s ( half a city block4 ,"r4 ,! gr\nds ^u :i* ! build+ /&s consi/ ( half a city block4 ,revise4 ,a copy ( ! ord]s are also s5t to ! *eck]4 #cai4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,!re is & !re are mu/ agree ) ! subject :i* foll[s4 ,wrong4 ,!re is always a few m9utes n[ & !n = read+ newspap]s4 ,"r4 ,!re are always a few m9utes n[ & !n = read+ newspap]s4 ,revise4 ,z ,i ?9k ( my subject !re seems to be _m phases op5 = inve/igation4 #cbj4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,phrases introduc$ by besides1 )1 toge!r )1 accompani$ by1 includ+1 z well z1 d n affect ! numb] ( ! v]b4 ,wrong4 ,! major1 z well z all ! lieut5ants1 7 soon out 9 ! op54 ,"r4 ,! major1 z well z all ! lieut5ants1 0 soon out 9 ! op54 ,wrong4 ,m>y1 toge!r ) ,flor5ce1 ,mabel1 & ,pe>l1 are go+ to be !re4 ,"r4 ,m>y1 toge!r ) ,flor5ce1 ,mabel1 & ,pe>l1 is go+ to be !re4 ,revise4 ,! :ole army1 includ+ ! ,fif? & ,sev5? corps1 h receiv$ ord]s to entra94 #cba4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,if bo? s+ul> & plural sub/antives jo9$ by or or nor make up ! subject1 ! numb] ( ! v]b dep5ds ^u t ( ! ne>e/ sub/antive4 ,wrong4 ,nei!r ! directors nor ! presid5t are 9 sympa?y ) ! proposal4 ,"r4 ,nei!r ! directors nor ! presid5t is 9 sympa?y ) ! proposal4 ,revise4 ,! rodmill or ! furnaces goes on d\ble turn today4 #cbb4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,v]bs us$ ) :o1 :i*1 t1 mu/ agree 9 p]son & numb] ) ! antec$5t ( ! pron\n4 ,wrong4 ,ea* man & woman :o 7 pres5t came away disgruntl$4 ,"r4 ,ea* man & woman :o 0 pres5t came away disgruntl$4 ,revise4 ,^! horses t /&s "h are n = sale4 #cbc4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject--n ) a pr$icat$ n\n or n\ns4 ,wrong4 ,! type ( lit]ature ,i enjoy are books ( travel4 ,"r4 ,! type ( lit]ature ,i enjoy is books ( travel4 ,revise4 ,ano!r gr\p ( novels ,i h read are ,ma9 ,/reet1 ,! ,bright ,%awl1 & ,if ,w9t] ,comes4 #cbd4 ,make ! v]b agree ) its subject4 ,! =m don't is correct 9 ! fir/ & second p]sons s+ul> & 9 all p]sons plural4 ,! =m doesn't is ! only correct =m 9 ! ?ird p]son s+ul>4 ,wrong4 ,he don't seem to "k u4 ,"r4 ,he doesn't seem to "k u4 ,revise4 ,! majority don't ?9k4 #cbe4 ,di/+ui% betwe5 ! pa/ t5se & ! pa/ p>ticiple ( irregul> v]bs4 ,pres5t ,pa/ ,pa/ ,p>ticiple ,he beg9s he began he has begun ,he bl[s he blew he has bl[n ,x breaks x broke x has brok5 ,he comes he came he has come ,he does he did he has done ,he draws he drew he has drawn ,he dr9ks he drank he has drunk ,he drives he drove he has driv5 ,he eats he ate he has eat5 ,he falls he fell he has fall5 ,he flies he flew he has fl[n ,x freezes x froze x has froz5 ,x gr[s x grew x has gr[n ,he goes he w5t he has gone ,he kn[s he knew he has kn[n ,he rides he rode he has ridd5 ,x r+s x rang x has rung ,x rises x rose x has ris5 ,he runs he ran he has run ,he sees he saw he has se5 ,x %akes x %ook x has %ak5 ,x %r9ks x %rank x has %runk ,he s+s he sang he has sung ,he speaks he spoke he has spok5 ,he /eals he /ole he has /ol5 ,he swims he swam he has swum ,he takes he took he has tak5 ,x te>s x tore x has torn ,he ?r[s he ?rew he has ?r[n ,revise4 ,i wond] :at he has did8 ,h y saw him8 ,he has ran ! c> into ! dit*4 #cbf4 ,use ! correct pa/ t5se or pa/ p>ticiple ( ! foll[+ v]bs--n ! illit]ate =m4 ,pres5t ,pa/ ,pa/ ,p>ticiple ,x bur/s x bur/ x has bur/ ,he cat*es he caught he has caught ,he dives he div$ he has div$ ,he drags he dragg$ he has dragg$ ,he draws he drew he has drawn ,he dr[ns he dr[n$ he has dr[n$ ,he eats he ate he has eat5 ,he gr[s he grew he has gr[n ,he holds he held he has held ,he kn[s he knew he has kn[n ,he leads he l$ he has l$ ,he proves he prov$ he has prov$ ,he %[s he %[$ he has %[n ,he swe>s he swore he has sworn ,he ?r[s he ?rew he has ?r[n ,he ought he ought 7,_h ought is n 9 good usage7 ,revise4 ,:at has %e ate4 ,i drug x ?ree y>ds4 ,i draw$ him out4 ,he dr[nd$ la/ week4 #cbg4 ,di/+ui% betwe5 lie & lay1 sit & set1 rise & raise4 ,wrong4 ,he laid 9 ! hammock all morn+4 ,"r4 ,he lay 9 ! hammock all morn+4 ,wrong4 ,all "r1 set !re1 !n4 ,"r4 ,all "r1 sit !re1 !n4 ,wrong4 ,we all rais$ up & %\t$4 ,"r4 ,we all rose up & %\t$4 ,revise4 ,i laid on ! c\* :ile ! re/ ( !m set ar\nd wait+ = me to raise up & tell !m to g home4 #cbh4 ,use %all 9 ! fir/ p]son1 w 9 ! second & ?ird1 to express simple futurity4 ,wrong4 ,i feel t ,i h _h m milit>y tra9+ ?an ,i w get "h 9 ! univ]sity4 ,"r4 ,i feel t ,i h _h m milit>y tra9+ ?an ,i %all get "h 9 ! univ]sity4 ,wrong4 ,y %all fail unless y get to "w4 ,"r4 ,y w fail unless y get to "w4 ,revise4 ,he %all nev] be f\nd if we d n hurry4 #cbi4 ,use %\ld 9 ! fir/ p]son1 w\ld 9 ! second & ?ird1 to express relative futurity4 ,wrong4 ,i w\ld l to give x to y4 ,"r4 ,i %\ld l to give x to y4 ,wrong4 ,he %\ld be glad to help y1 ,i'm sure4 ,"r4 ,he w\ld be glad to help y1 ,i'm sure4 ,revise4 ,y %\ldn't d t1 %\ld y8 #ccj4 ,9 que/ions1 use %all 9 ! fir/ p]son4 ,9 ! second & ?ird p]sons1 use t auxili>y :i* w be correctly us$ 9 ! answ]4 ,wrong4 ,w ,i help y8 ,"r4 ,%all ,i help y8 ,wrong4 ,w y be at home tonight8 ,"r4 ,%all y be at home tonight8 ,revise4 ,%all %e be ask$8 #cca4 ,to express det]m9ation on ! "p ( ! speak]1 use w 9 ! fir/ p]son1 %all 9 ! second & ?ird p]sons4 ,wrong4 ,he w tell y2 ,i am det]m9$4 ,"r4 ,he %all tell y2 ,i am det]m9$4 ,wrong4 ,y w g2 ,i h decid$4 ,"r4 ,y %all g2 ,i h decid$4 ,revise4 ,i %all d x2 nobody c prev5t me4 #ccb4 ,make ! t5ses ( p>allel v]bs con=m to "o ano!r4 ,wrong4 ,i w\ld g d[n to ! libr>y e ,saturday & !re ,i got a book ab\t radio4 ,"r4 ,i w\ld g d[n to ! libr>y e ,saturday & !re ,i w\ld get a book ab\t radio4 ,revise4 ,i travel$ all ov] ! /ate until ,i _h se5 ev]y?+ or until ,i became tir$4 #ccc4 ,use ! pres5t t5se = ass]tions t are univ]sally true4 ,wrong4 ,m>s 0 ! mo/ ne>ly r$ ( all ! planets4 ,"r4 ,m>s is ! mo/ ne>ly r$ ( all ! planets4 ,revise4 ,! e>? 0 eight ?\s& miles 9 diamet]4 #ccd4 ,make ! t5se ( a v]b 9 a subord9ate clause relative to t ( ! v]b 9 ! ma9 clause4 ,wrong4 ,i also read new1 popul> novels t ,i w\ld f9d 9 ! public libr>y4 ,"r4 ,i also read new1 popul> novels t ,i f\nd 9 ! public libr>y4 ,revise4 ,i probably w\ld nev] h read su* l[1 vulg> /uff if x 7 n = ! w>4 #cce4 ,use ! pres5t t5se ( ! inf9itive unless its action is e>li] ?an t ( ! ma9 v]b4 ,wrong4 ,x 0 wrong = y to h gone4 ,"r4 ,x 0 wrong = y to g4 ,wrong4 ,i ought to answ] be=e t _h happ5$4 ,"r4 ,i ought to h answ]$ be=e t _h happ5$4 ,revise4 ,i int5d$ to h told y4 #ccf4 ,use an adv]b ( "t to %[ t ! subord9ate clause diff]s 9 "t f ! ma9 clause4 ,wrong4 ,! reason = ! f]tility ( ,i[a f>m l& is t an ice %eet spread ov] almo/ ! entire area ( ! /ate4 ,"r4 ,! reason = ! f]tility ( ,i[a f>m l& is t an ice %eet once spread ov] almo/ ! entire area ( ! /ate4 ,revise4 ,"o little corn] ( ,i[a conta9s _m /eep hills because ! ice did n rea* x4 #ccg4 ,use ! subjunctive mood 9 contr>y to fact conditions4 ,wrong4 ,if ,i 0 y1 ,i %\ld n d t4 ,"r4 ,if ,i 7 y1 ,i %\ld n d t4 ,revise4 ,if he 0 n ill1 he might w9 today4 #cch4 ,use h1 ! correct auxili>y1 n (1 c>elessly writt5 = ! unacc5t$ h4 ,wrong4 ,y %\ld ( se5 him run4 ,"r4 ,y %\ld h se5 him run4 ,revise4 ,if x _h n ra9$ today1 we might ( gone away4 #cci4 ,_h ought & hadn't ought are n /&>d ,engli%2 ought has no pa/ p>ticiple & no pa/ p]fect t5se4 ,wrong4 ,y hadn't ought to h come s soon4 ,"r4 ,y ought n to h come s soon4 ,revise4 ,i _h ought to h told y b ,i didn't h ! c\rage4 #cdj4 ,make a complete s5t5ce out ( a fragm5t c>elessly punctuat$ z if x 7 a s5t5ce4 ,wrong4 ,i took "t to make fri5ds & ev5tually enjoy$ myself 9 ! same way z any o!r little girl4 ,my favorite sport be+ skat+4 ,"r4 ,i took "t to make fri5ds & ev5tually enjoy$ myself 9 ! same way z any o!r little girl4 ,my favorite sport 0 skat+4 ,revise4 ,at sev5 o'clock e morn+ ,i he> ! fa9t t9kl+ ( a bell :i* soon becomes an insi/5t r+1 & ano!r day has begun4 ,!n a da% d[n ! cold /airs foll[$ by a hurri$ wa%1 !n d[n to breakfa/4 #cda4 ,atta* a phrase1 c>elessly punctuat$ z if x 7 a s5t5ce1 to ! s5t5ce to :i* x belongs4 ,wrong4 ,?is 0 plac$ 9 a *emical solution1 call$ develop]1 = fifte5 or tw5ty m9utes4 ,sometimes ev5 long]4 ,"r4 ,?is 0 plac$ 9 a *emical solution1 call$ develop]1 = fifte5 or tw5ty m9utes1 & sometimes ev5 long]4 ,revise4 ,my (fice h\rs 7 unlimit$ dur+ ! summ] mon?s4 ,usually f sev5 9 ! morn+ until aft] six o'clock at night on week days4 #cdb4 ,atta* a p>ticipial phrase1 c>elessly punctuat$ z if x 7 a s5t5ce1 to ! s5t5ce to :i* x belongs4 ,wrong4 ,we arriv$ on ! peak be=e sunrise4 ,?is be+ ! be/ "t to arrive4 ,"r4 ,we arriv$ on ! peak be=e sunrise1 ?is be+ ! be/ "t4 ,revise4 ,a%] won ! mile 9 #d3cb4 ,?us break+ ! record4 #cdc4 ,atta* a subord9ate clause1 c>elessly punctuat$ z if x 7 a s5t5ce1 to ! s5t5ce to :i* x belongs4 ,wrong4 ,soon aft] x is pl[$4 ,x %\ld be h>r[$ sev]al times 9 ord] to cru% out all ! lumps ( dirt4 ,"r4 ,soon aft] x is pl[$ x %\ld be h>r[$ sev]al times 9 ord] to cru% out all ! lumps ( dirt4 ,revise4 ,:5 ! gra9 is dry en\gh to be ?re%$4 ,! own] issues invitations = a ?re%+ bee4 #cdd4 ,atta* "p ( a comp\nd subject1 c>elessly punctuat$ z if x 7 a s5t5ce1 to ! s5t5ce to :i* x belongs4 ,wrong4 ,john1 we>+ a /raw hat4 ,!n 8 bro!r1 g>b$ 9 a dress suit1 ent]$ ! hall4 ,"r4 ,john1 we>+ a /raw hat1 foll[$ by 8 bro!r1 g>b$ 9 a dress suit1 ent]$ ! hall4 ,revise4 ,! memorial /adium & ! *emi/ry build+4 ,! new adm9i/ration build+ & ! wom5's gymnasium h all be5 built s9ce #aiaj4 #cde4 ,atta* "p ( a comp\nd pr$icate1 c>elessly punctuat$ z if x 7 a s5t5ce1 to ! s5t5ce to :i* x belongs4 ,wrong4 ,! beacon fl>$4 ,& light$ up ! d>kness = miles4 ,"r4 ,! beacon fl>$ & light$ up ! d>kness = miles4 ,revise4 ,:o has ev] he>d ( ,dolliv]8 ,mu* less has ev] be5 !re4 #cdf4 ,complete a con/ruction begun b left unf9i%$4 ,wrong4 ,!y r$isc\nt notes :i* arise out ( & ! proce$s ( :i* are employ$ = agricultural1 indu/rial1 & comm]cial purposes4 ,"r4 ,!y r$isc\nt notes :i* arise out ( agricultural1 indu/rial1 & comm]cial transactions & employ ! proce$s 9 simil> transactions4 ,revise4 ,anybody :o c\ld design an eng9e l t1 ! l>ge/ automobile manufactur]s 9 ! c\ntry w\ld compete = 8 s]vices4 #cdg4 ,give e f9ite v]b a subject4 ,wrong4 ,x has be5 ab\t fifte5 mon?s s9ce ,i left high s*ool1 & h n done any /udy+ s9ce4 ,"r4 ,x has be5 ab\t fifte5 mon?s s9ce ,i left high s*ool1 & ,i h n done any /udy+ s9ce4 ,revise4 ,! t[n has n yet built a v l>ge high s*ool build+1 because !re are n en\gh citiz5s to defray ! exp5se & h n yet be5 able to obta9 ! co-op]ation ( ! f>m]s4 #cdh4 ,ins]t a ^w or words :i* h be5 c>elessly omitt$4 ,wrong4 ,_! complexion is a r$di% color4 ,"r4 ,_! complexion is ( a r$di% color4 ,wrong4 ,hundr$s ( small creeks 7 con/ruct$ by ! association1 = ! b5efit ( an individual4 ,"r4 ,hundr$s ( small creeks 7 con/ruct$ by ! association1 ea* = ! b5efit ( an individual4 ,revise4 ,i consid] him my favorite poet n because ( 8 /yle b ( ! feel+ 9 8 v]se4 #cdi4 ,ins]t mat]ial necess>y to make evid5t :at is impli$4 ,wrong4 ,mr4 ,t4's me?od ( tea*+ is /imulat+1 b 8 lack ( ! ,engli% language makes him an undesirable in/ructor4 ,"r4 ,mr4 ,t4's me?od ( tea*+ is /imulat+1 b 8 lack ( k ( ! ,engli% language makes him an undesirable in/ructor4 ,revise4 ,d\glas ,fairbanks is tru] to life ?an ! book4 #cej4 ,give e s5t5ce elem5t "s grammatical con/ruction4 ,wrong4 ,9 my ,am]ican lit]ature class ! in/ructor ?\ght t x 0 ess5tial = u to /udy1 at lea/ once a week1 t _h to d ) curr5t happ5+s4 ,"r4 ,9 my ,am]ican lit]ature class ! in/ructor ?\ght t x 0 ess5tial = u to /udy1 at lea/ once a week1 some?+ t _h to d ) curr5t happ5+s4 ,revise4 ,y %\ld select ! e>s t h m$ium-siz$ k]nels & fill$ out well at ea* end4 #cea4 ,use t to introduce n\n clauses aft] v]bs ( say+1 ?9k+1 or feel+1 unless ! con/ruction is obvi\s4 ,wrong4 ,i h decid$ ! topic = my long !me w be ,prehi/oric ,man4 ,"r4 ,i h decid$ t ! topic = my long !me w be ,prehi/oric ,man4 ,revise4 ,fa!r felt a secondh& c> 0 b5ea? our dignity4 #ceb4 ,make ! comp>ison accurate by ins]t+ a demon/rative pron\n3 t (1 ^? (1 ^! :i*1 etc4 ,wrong4 ,our condition is f> bett] ?an ! /ud5ts ( ! ,ea/4 ,"r4 ,our condition is f> bett] ?an t ( ! /ud5ts ( ! ,ea/4 ,revise4 ,! hi/ory ( ! ,book ( ,mormon is v mu* l ! ,bible4 #cec4 ,ins]t z aft] ! positive ( an adjective or an adv]b :5 x is foll[$ by a conjunction & ! comp>ative ) ?an4 ,wrong4 ,i am at lea/ z tall or a little tall] ?an anyone 9 ! fir/ squad4 ,"r4 ,i am at lea/ z tall z1 or a little tall] ?an1 anyone 9 ! fir/ squad4 ,revise4 ,i enjoy biography z well if n bett] ?an fiction4 #ced4 ,ins]t mu* or greatly betwe5 v & a pa/ p>ticiple4 ,wrong4 ,i 0 v disappo9t$4 ,"r4 ,i 0 v mu* disappo9t$4 ,revise4 ,8 table mann]s %[$ t !y _h be5 v neglect$ up to ! "t we took him 9 h&4 #cee4 ,repeat ! v]b 9 a diff]5t p]son or numb] if necess>y to make x agree ) ! second ( two alt]native subjects4 ,wrong4 ,ei!r he or ,i goes4 ,"r4 ,ei!r he goes or ,i g4 ,revise4 ,if he or ,i w9 ! pole vault1 ,pet]%am w f9i% among ! fir/ ?ree 9 ! meet4 #cef4 ,repeat ! auxili>y v]b if necess>y to make x agree ) a second subject 9 a diff]5t p]son or numb]4 ,wrong4 ,:e!r y or ,jim is elect$ makes no diff]5ce to me4 ,"r4 ,:e!r y are elect$ or ,jim is1 makes no diff]5ce to me4 ,revise4 ,if y or any o!r /ud5t is caught *eat+ x means j "o ?+--expulsion ( ! guilty p]son4 #ceg4 ,repeat is1 are1 01 71 etc41 if ! v]b is us$ bo? z a copula & z an auxili>y4 ,wrong4 ,_! gov]nm5t 0 rude & f\nd$ solely ^u cu/om4 ,"r4 ,_! gov]nm5t 0 rude & 0 f\nd$ solely ^u cu/om4 ,revise4 ,our h\se is small & built to live 94 #ceh4 ,use ! correct =m ( ! v]b aft] ea* ( two auxili>ies :i* require two diff]5t =ms4 ,wrong4 ,i h always & always %all l c[boy /ories4 ,"r4 ,i h always lik$ & always %all l c[boy /ories4 ,revise4 ,i hope ,i may 9 ! future1 z ,i h always 9 ! pa/1 play fair1 :atev] may be ! provocation to d o!rwise4 #cei4 ,use ! correct conjunction1 ?\gh or b r ?an :ile2 z soon z r ?an imm$iately2 if r ?an s4 ,wrong4 ,imm$iately ,i receiv$ ! telegram ,i w5t home4 ,"r4 ,z soon z ,i receiv$ ! telegram ,i w5t home4 ,wrong4 ,x 0 9 ! latt] "p ( my high s*ool days :5 ,i did mo/ ( my read+4 ,"r4 ,x 0 9 ! latt] "p ( my high s*ool days t ,i did mo/ ( my read+4 ,revise4 ,i _h n gone to s*ool long until x burn$ d[n4 #cfj4 ,use a transitional ^w1 phrase1 or clause to c>ry ! read] f "o unrelat$ idea to ano!r4 ,wrong4 ,i want$ to be popul>2 h[ c\ld ,i />t8 ,"r4 ,i want$ to be popul>1 b ! "q 01 h[ c\ld ,i />t4 ,revise4 ,(fic]s w be elect$1 & a good att5dance is desir$4 #cfa4 ,avoid %ift+ f "o con/ruction to ano!r4 ,wrong4 ,consid] ! football season j end$1 ,m]rill did m = ! success ( ! team ?an any o!r capta9 ,ohio ev] _h4 ,"r4 ,9 ! football season j end$ ,m]rill did m = ! success ( ! team ?an any o!r capta9 ,ohio ev] _h4 ,revise4 ,i enjoy$ ! fre%man ye> ) its essays & !mes1 s9ce x prov$ to be a subject :i* ,i did n f9d difficult4 #cfb4 ,9 ! =mula "o ( ! mo/ 444 if n ! mo/ 444 put ! n\n 9 ! fir/ elem5t ( ! =mula4 ,wrong4 ,x 0 "o ( ! sl[e/ if n ! sl[e/ game ev] play$ on ! ,oval4 ,"r4 ,x 0 "o ( ! sl[e/ games1 if n ! sl[e/1 ev] play$ on ! ,oval4 ,revise4 ,z a /atesman he des]ves to rank z "o ( ! mo/1 if n ! mo/1 contemptible figures 9 our hi/ory4 #cfc4 ,phrase ! subject s t x exactly fits ! pr$ication requir$ by ! v]b4 ,wrong4 ,mr4 ,sw9n]ton's novel1 ,nocturne1 takes place 9 "o night4 ,"r4 ,! action 9 ,mr4 ,sw9n]ton's novel1 ,nocturne1 takes place 9 "o night4 ,revise4 ,! "* ( ,mr4 ,pickwick is a funny creature4 #cfd4 ,use ! precise v]b :i* is idiomatically requir$ to pr$icate ! subject4 ,wrong4 ,only "o h\r ( relaxation exi/$ = ! noon meal4 ,"r4 ,only "o h\r ( relaxation 0 all[$ = ! noon meal4 ,revise4 ,! fre%man lecture la/ week consi/$ ( f\r speak]s4 #cfe4 ,use ! idiomatic preposition requir$ aft] ! n\n4 ,wrong4 ,i w5t to ! libr>y 9 se>* = mat]ial4 ,"r4 ,i w5t to ! libr>y 9 se>* ( mat]ial4 ,revise4 ,8 p]sonality is "o ( ! greate/ factors = 8 success4 #cff4 ,use diff]5t prepositions aft] n\ns1 adjectives1 or v]bs :i* idiomatically require diff]5t prepositions4 ,wrong4 ,am ,i includ$ or exclud$ f ?is li/8 ,"r4 ,am ,i includ$ 9 or exclud$ f ?is li/8 ,revise4 ,am]ican lit]ature is dep5d5t or at lea/ d]iv$ f ,engli% lit]ature4 #cfg4 ,use a m idiomatic con/ruction4 ,wrong4 ,i h (t5 _h ! desire ( "s day tak+ a vacation into ! ,rocky ,m\nta9s ( ! ,we/4 ,"r4 ,i h (t5 want$ "s "t to sp5d a vacation among ! ,rocky ,m\nta9s 9 ! ,we/4 ,revise4 ,c>rie ,/ev5s f ,wilton pass$ ?ree days visit+ ! p>5tal home la/ week4 ,revise4 ,i spoke ) him = some?+ m ?an t5 m9utes4 #cfh4 ,use a less awkw>d con/ruction4 ,wrong4 ,dr4 ,otto's automobile 0 badly damag$ 9 ! collision1 b ,mrs4 ,otto1 driv+1 0 unhurt1 =tunately4 ,"r4 ,dr4 ,otto's automobile 0 badly damag$ 9 ! collision1 b ,mrs4 ,otto1 :o 0 driv+1 0 =tunately unhurt4 ,revise4 ,dur+ my s5ior ye> ,i _h "s exp]i5ce 9 dramatics by tak+ "p 9 ! class play4 #cfi4 ,use a pr$icat$ n\n r ?an a pr$icat$ clause beg9n+ ) :5 or :]e4 ,wrong4 ,a ,b4,a4 is :]e y are graduat$ 9 a lib]al arts c\rse4 ,"r4 ,a ,b4,a4 is a degree giv5 to graduates ( a lib]al arts c\rse4 ,revise4 ,golf is :]e y try to get ! ball into ! hole 9 ! fewe/ possible numb] ( /rokes4 #cgj4 ,use t to introduce a pr$icat$ clause ( reason4 ,wrong4 ,! reason ,i h n read m is due to ! fact t ,i h _h no "t4 ,"r4 ,! reason ,i h n read m is t ,i h _h no "t4 ,revise4 ,my reason = read+ ?is book 0 because ,i _h previ\sly se5 ! same /ory 9 ! movies4 #cga4 ,use ! =mula ! fact t 444 to introduce a clause ( reason us$ z ! subject4 ,wrong4 ,s9ce y insi/ =ces me to yield4 ,"r4 ,! fact t y insi/ =ces me to yield4 ,revise4 ,because he look$ s weak made me (f] him a ride4 #cgb4 ,use due to1 ow+ to1 & caus$ by only z adjectives1 obvi\sly modify+ a n\n4 7,see #dah47 ,wrong4 ,?is "q is v difficult to answ] due to ! small am\nt ( in=mation available4 ,"r4 ,! difficulty ab\t answ]+ ?is "q is caus$ by ! sc>city ( in=mation available4 ,"r4 ,?is "q is v difficult to answ] because little in=mation is available4 ,revise4 ,ow+ to ! high w9d ,port]'s punts 9 ! second half av]ag$ only tw5ty-eight y>ds4 #cgc4 ,use because ( & on acc\nt ( only z prepositions to introduce adv]bial phrases atta*$ to v]bs4 ,wrong4 ,purdue's victory 0 because ( ! wet field4 ,"r4 ,purdue won because ( ! wet field4 ,"r4 ,purdue's victory 0 due to ! wet field4 ,revise4 ,8 k9dness to me 0 on acc\nt ( 8 fri5d%ip = my fa!r4 #cgd4 ,atta* a modify+ ^w1 phrase1 or clause directly to ! modifi$ elem5t )\t an int]v5+ & or b4 ,& or b %\ld be us$ to jo9 only co-ord9ate elem5ts4 ,wrong4 ,! village prie/s 7 ( a l[] class & liv$ l peasants1 & prea*+ only to ! peasants4 ,"r4 ,! village prie/s 7 ( a l[] class & liv$ l peasants1 prea*+ only to ! peasants4 ,revise4 ,! /udy ( musical appreciation is v int]e/+1 & especially :5 "o beg9s to f9d out h[ little he kn[s ab\t x4 #cge4 ,disc>d completely any "p ( a s5t5ce :i* has no?+ to d ) y\r ?\ght4 ,wrong4 ,we arriv$ 9 ,bo/on be=e noon1 & ! corn 0 fully six in*es high4 ,"r4 ,we arriv$ 9 ,bo/on be=e noon4 ,revise4 ,hugh ,walpole is an ,engli%man1 b ,poe wrote ,! ,rav54 #cgf4 ,disc>d a r$undant t4 ,wrong4 ,i really ?9k t ^u inve/igation t we are %[n ! %all[ness ( ! objections4 ,"r4 ,i really ?9k t ^u inve/igation we are %[n ! %all[ness ( ! objections4 ,revise4 ,i knew t if ,i did n read "s ( my outside read+s be=e ,*ri/mas t ,i probably %\ld n be up ) my "w 9 "t to pass ! c\rse4 #cgg4 ,*ange ! pres5t p>ticipial phrase into a p>allel v]b or into a p>allel clause if ! 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nights s ,i decid$ ,i w\ld quit4 ,"r4 ,aft] ,i _h _h to run to supp] bo? nights ,i decid$ ,i w\ld quit4 ,revise4 ,be=e s*ool & on ,saturdays ,i work$ ei!r 9 a re/aurant or 9 a clo?+ /ore1 s my read+ has be5 limit$ = ! la/ two ye>s4 #chc4 ,place simil> modifi]s ( ! same ^w toge!r4 ,wrong4 ,we saw an old h\se pa9t$ :ite4 ,"r4 ,we saw an old :ite h\se4 ,revise4 ,he _h a /]n face1 =bidd+ & ugly4 #chd4 ,use only "o negative 9 a clause4 ,wrong4 ,y hav5't se5 no?+ yet4 ,"r4 ,y h se5 no?+ yet4 ,"r4 ,y hav5't se5 any?+ yet4 ,revise4 ,%e _h n gone no f>!r ?an ! po/ (fice :5 %e he>d a %ot4 #che4 ,use or z a conjunction--n nor--:5 ! fir/ ( ! connect$ elem5ts c>ries a negative4 ,wrong4 ,"s se$s d n ne$ to be v deep 9 ! gr\nd nor v f> ap>t4 ,"r4 ,"s se$s d n ne$ to be v deep 9 ! gr\nd or v f> ap>t4 ,revise4 ,a favorite son is n necess>ily kn[n ?r\gh\t ! :ole c\ntry1 nor ev5 9 ! neighbor+ /ates4 #chf4 ,omit ! negative z a suppos$ re9=c] ( h>dly1 sc>cely1 only1 & b4 ,wrong4 ,i c't sc>cely realize x yet4 ,"r4 ,i c sc>cely realize x yet4 ,revise4 ,i d n l b two k9ds ( read+ matt]3 novels & %ort /ories4 #chg4 ,use an adv]b--n an adjective--to modify a v]b1 an adjective1 or ano!r adv]b4 ,adv]bs =m$ f adjectives end 9 -ly4 ,wrong4 ,i work$ /eady all vacation4 ,"r4 ,i work$ /eadily all vacation4 ,revise4 ,i nev] expect to become a real pr(ici5t /ud5t 9 ?is subject4 #chh4 ,pr$icat$ adjectives are us$ correctly aft] ! v]bs is1 are1 01 71 become1 seem1 feel1 appe>1 look1 s\nd1 ta/e1 smell1 /&1 & r+ :5 ! adjective *>act]izes ! subject & n ! action4 ,wrong4 ,?is orange ta/es sweetly4 ,"r4 ,?is orange ta/es sweet4 ,revise4 ,8 spee* r+s falsely4 #chi4 ,relative pron\ns :o1 :i*1 t1 are correctly us$ z foll[s3 :o if ! antec$5t is a p]son2 :i* if ! antec$5t is an animal or a ?+2 t if ! antec$5t is a p]son1 an animal1 or a ?+4 ,wrong4 ,i once work$ = a f>m] :i* work$ f sunrise to sunset4 ,"r4 ,i once work$ = a f>m] :o work$ f sunrise to sunset4 ,revise4 ,i h a dog :o is almo/ z intellig5t z a man4 ,,practice #a4 ,!m & u 7 n invit$4 7#cjj7 #b4 ,:om d y ?9k ought to g8 7#cja7 #c4 ,z to :om is be/ qualifi$1 consult ! dean4 7#cjb7 #d4 ,x 0 nev] !m4 7#cjc7 #e4 ,:o is go+1 him & h]8 7#cjd7 #f4 ,he made me z /rong z !y4 7#cje7 #g4 ,h[ c\ld y consid] ,m>y go+8 7#cjf7 #h4 ,he is "o ( art's greate/ contributors4 7#cjg7 #i4 ,! greate/ duty lies t[>d ! p>5ts ( ! boy or girl :o !y s5d to college4 7#cjh7 #aj4 ,:o did y ?9k h] to be8 7#cji7 #aa4 ,i ?\ght ! p]son to h be5 he4 7#caj7 #ab4 ,:at ab\t ^! sort ( se$s8 7#caa7 #ac4 ,:5 "o goes back to "w !y feel l accompli%+ some?+4 7#cab7 #ad4 ,8 explanations are v mu* 9 detail b does n hit ! m>k4 7#cac7 #ae4 ,if ei!r are late to class1 bo? receive a setback4 7#cad7 #af4 ,scrap+ & v>ni%+ is necess>y 9 ?is case4 7#cae7 #ag4 ,he ?9ks nei!r ,byron nor ,%elley are great poets4 7#caf7 #ah4 ,a numb] has already ga!r$ ab\t ! jail4 7#cag7 #ai4 ,! l9+ ( blankets keep ! cold air out4 7#cah7 #bj4 ,!re is too _m op5 w9d[s 9 ! h\se4 7#cai7 #ba4 ,! football team1 9 addition to z _m graduate play]s z c be rea*$1 are invit$4 7#cbj7 #bb4 ,nei!r ,frank nor ! ,holliwells kn[s h]4 7#cba7 #bc4 ,ev]ybody :o 7 !re 0 pleas$4 7#cbb7 #bd4 ,! fruit ,i l be/ are /rawb]ries4 7#cbc7 #be4 ,rob]t don't read any?+4 7#cbd7 #bf4 ,i wond] :at he has drank4 7#cbe7 #bg4 ,he _h ought to g4 7#cbf7 #bh4 ,i rais$ up & %\t$ at !m ei!r to set d[n or lay d[n2 x didn't matt] :i* !y did4 7#cbg7 #bi4 ,i w nev] =get ! pleasant "t we _h at graduation4 7#cbh7 #cj4 ,!y %\ld h gone1 b x ra9$4 7#cbi7 #ca4 ,%all he be able to come8 7#ccj7 #cb4 ,i %all speak to him ab\t x2 ,i insi/ ^u x4 7#cca7 #cc4 ,he told me "t aft] "t & w\ld insi/ t ,p]cival _h told ! :ole tru?4 7#ccb7 #cd4 ,he said ! sun 0 #ic1jjj1jjj miles f ! e>?4 7#ccc7 #ce4 ,i seldom rememb] ! "n ( ! book or ( ! au?or until ,i w\ld see ! book aga94 7#ccd7 #cf4 ,%e want$ me to h gone be=e y came4 7#cce7 #cg4 ,vanadium /eel is us$ to make _m p>ts ( ! ,=d c> :i* 7 made ( v>i\s o!r k9ds4 7#ccf7 #ch4 ,if %e 0 able to g1 we %\ld h a good "t4 7#ccg7 #ci4 ,x w\ld ( be5 bett] if ! pa9t _h dri$ sl[ly4 7#cch7 #dj4 ,!y hadn't ought to h tri$ t4 7#cci7 #da4 ,! v>sity basketball outlook is mu* bright] ?an 0 ! case = football4 ,six lett] m5 on ! squad1 f\r o!r c&idates ( out/&+ ability1 & a coa* :o says t he w /op at no?+ %ort ( a *ampion%ip4 7#cdj7 #db4 ,!y 7 a wond]ful six weeks4 ,j full ( happ5+s ( all k9ds4 7#cda7 #dc4 ,9 ! fir/ ye> anci5t hi/ory is tak5 up once or twice a week4 ,! re/ ( ! "t be+ devot$ to ! /udy ( rhetoric & composition4 7#cdb7 #dd4 ,i arriv$ home late 9 ! aft]noon4 ,aft] ,i _h be5 rid+ an h\r & a half4 7#cdc7 #de4 ,9 ! ,ea/1 ,bo/on1 ,new ,york1 ,brooklyn1 & ,philadelphia4 ,9 ! ,we/1 ,*icago1 ,/4 ,l\is1 ,c9c9nati1 & ,pittsburgh make up ! league4 7#cdd7 #df4 ,fright5$ ne>ly to dea?1 my fri5d ran into ! h\se4 ,& hid !re = a long "t be=e %e 0 will+ ev5 to look out ! w9d[4 7#cde7 #dg4 ,! condition t arose1 ,i 0 unable to meet my obligation4 7#cdf7 #dh4 ,up 9 ! m\nta9s !re w\ld be v few p to bo!r y1 & w\ld ?us enable y to sp5d _m h\rs alone4 7#cdg7 #di4 ,danc+ 0 ! next on ! program4 7#cdh7 #ej4 ,?is hi/orical ev5t has _h a great deal to d ) ! books ,i h read & also _m o!r /ud5ts & p]sons ( my age4 7#cdi7 #ea4 ,x 0 d>k & no o!r possible way to get !re4 7#cej7 #eb4 ,we he>d some?+ excit+ 0 sure to happ5 be=e ! night 0 ov]4 7#cea7 #ec4 ,! next "t ov]1 ! corn is pl[$ 9 ! opposite direction f :i* x 0 plant$4 7#ceb7 #ed4 ,b>nes is z good a hitt] & a mu* m consi/5t "o ?an anyone else on ! team4 7#cec7 #ee4 ,he 0 v surpris$ to see u4 7#ced7 #ef4 ,:at y or he ?9ks makes no diff]5ce "h4 7#cee7 #eg4 ,if y or he is go+1 x is "t to />t n[4 7#cef7 #eh4 ,! sci5ce build+ is ?ree /ories high & con/ruct$ ( brick4 7#ceg7 #ei4 ,dr9k+ ,i h always avoid$ & always w4 7#ceh7 #fj4 ,i w5t1 :ile my fa!r object$4 7#cei7 #fa4 ,m votes 7 ca/ ?an !re 7 vot]s1 & a new election 0 ord]$4 7#cfj7 #fb4 ,= in/ance1 "o !at] we 7 91 ev]y?+ inside ( x 0 :ite4 7#cfa7 #fc4 ,"o ( ! sadde/ if n ! sadde/ sight ,i ev] saw met my eyes :5 ,i op5$ ! door4 7#cfb7 #fd4 ,%iloh 0 a crucial mom5t 9 ! ,civil ,w>4 7#cfc7 #fe4 ,! /ory 0 made up ( ! hills ( ,h+ham4 7#cfd7 #ff4 ,frat]nities 7 n includ$ ) my ?\ghts ( college4 7#cfe7 #fg4 ,! dem& & popul>ity ( ! gladiatorial games result$ 9 a numb] ( upris+s aga9/ ! gov]nm5t4 7#cff7 #fh4 ,i l read+ books1 b ,i enjoy ev5 m to see a good play4 7#cfg7 #fi4 ,! honors = high scor+ = ! aft]noon sp5t 9 play+ bridge 7 aw>d$ to ,m>y ,devoe4 7#cfh7 #gj4 ,ju/ice is :]e ea* man gets 8 des]ts4 7#cfi7 #ga4 ,! reason ,i h = lik+ x 0 because ( ! way ! "p ( ,portia 0 play$4 7#cgj7 #gb4 ,because y are ignorant is no excuse 9 ! eyes ( ! law4 7#cga7 #gc4 ,due to ^! facts1 my read+ 0 neglect$4 7#cgb7 #gd4 ,! size ( my feet is because ( :at happ5$ "o summ] :5 ,i 0 a bell hop4 7#cgc7 #ge4 ,! obs]v] turns to ! ea/1 & look+ d[n a %ort resid5tial /reet :i* leads to a well-kept cemet]y4 7#cgd7 #gf4 ,!y say t fools' names z well z faces are (t5 se5 9 public places1 b ,i pref] prose to poetry4 7#cge7 #gg4 ,i felt t ( all ! c\rses ,i ev] took t ! "o 9 civics did ! mo/ = me4 7#cgf7 #gh4 ,p>ad+ up ,jeff]son /reet 9 ! morn+1 we _h a record-break+ cr[d = ! ev5+ p]=mance4 7#cgg7 #gi4 ,*icago's burn+ prov$ to be ! mak+ ( ! middle we/]n metropolis4 7#cgh7 #hj4 ,! con/ant (f]+ excuses enrag$ me4 7#cgi7 #ha4 ,e morn+ except "o ,i h ei!r milit>y drill or physical tra9+1 ^! s]ve to break ! monotony ( be+ coop$ up 9 a class room ! re/ ( ! "t4 7#chj7 #hb4 ,i also l sc\t books & detective /ories1 also a good love /ory once 9 a :ile4 7#cha7 #hc4 ,we /ay$ a few days 9 ,bo/on & a day 9 ,*icago1 !n we arriv$ at our de/9ation on a ra9y ,monday morn+ two h\rs be=e breakfa/ "t4 7#chb7 #hd4 ,/rong is he & brave4 7#chc7 #he4 ,i w\ldn't take no insol5ce f him4 7#chd7 #hf4 ,! vassal _h to swe> t he w\ld n injure 8 "l nor betray 8 secrets4 7#che7 #hg4 ,i don't h>dly see :at else ,i c\ld h done4 7#chf7 #hh4 ,he does n g s deep into details z to bore 8 /ud5ts4 7#chg7 #hi4 ,! new bell s\nds h>%ly4 7#chh7 #ij4 ,among ! eight in/ructors :i* ,i h are two :i* ,i abhor4 7#chi7 ,,*apt] ,,viii ,,s5t5ce ,,cle>ness ,s5t5ces exi/ = ! purpose ( convey+ ?\ght f "o m9d to ano!r4 ,! mann] ( _! expression mu/1 !re=e1 be su* t ! ?\ght express$ is obvi\s & unmi/akable4 ,o!rwise1 s5t5ces n only fail ( _! purpose b (t5 lead to confusion1 to misund]/&+1 & ev5 to disa/]4 ,! quality :i* r5d]s _! mean+ obvi\s & unmi/akable is call$ cle>ness4 #djj4 ,def9ite pron\ns 7he1 %e1 x1 ?is1 t1 :o1 :i*7 mu/ h obvi\s antec$5ts4 ,insuffici5t4 ,!y say t ! timb] supply 9 ! ,unit$ ,/ates w soon be exhau/$4 ,bett]4 ,=e/ exp]ts say t ! timb] supply 9 ! ,unit$ ,/ates w soon be exhau/$4 ,revise4 ,ye/]day ,i saw ,mr4 ,jona?an ,oldca/le4 ,%e has j return$ f ,europe1 y "k4 #dja4 ,make an ambigu\s pron\n cle> by plac+ x ne>] its antec$5t4 ,confus+4 ,fa!r told u ( a mead[ ne> 8 old home1 :i* 0 n[ "u wat]4 ,unmi/akable4 ,fa!r told u t ne> 8 old home !re us$ to be a mead[ :i* is n[ "u wat]4 ,revise4 ,9 ord] to succe$ at football "o mu/ be will+ to live up to all ! rules ( tra9+1 to refra9 f smok+1 to %un society1 & to put "o's :ole s\l into x4 #djb4 ,*ange indirect disc\rse to direct disc\rse to make an antec$5t obvi\s4 ,equivocal4 ,cl>k told ,&rews he _h made an error4 ,cle>4 ,cl>k said1 8,&rews1 y made an error40 ,revise4 ,george1 talk+ ) ,bill1 said t he ought to be a%am$ ( himself4 #djc4 ,nev] designate ! antec$5t ( a pron\n by repeat+ x )9 p>5!ses4 ,wrong4 ,john told ,tom t he 7,john7 _h n made ! team4 ,"r4 ,john said to ,tom1 8,i h n made ! team40 ,revise4 ,john told ,tom t he 7,tom7 _h n made ! team4 #djd4 ,repeat a di/ant n\n or supply a new "o r ?an use an obscure pron\n4 ,n good4 ,i felt sure t ! p>ade w\ld n be ready to />t = an h\r yet1 z !re 7 no soldi]s ab\t1 & x 0 only "o o'clock2 s ,i decid$ to walk out t[>d ! edge ( t[n1 tak+ c>e1 h[ev]1 to rema9 ^u ! /reet along :i* ,i knew x w\ld pass4 ,bett]4 ,i felt sure t ! p>ade w\ld n be ready to />t = an h\r yet1 z !re 7 no soldi]s ab\t1 & x 0 only "o o'clock2 s ,i decid$ to walk out t[>d ! edge ( t[n1 tak+ c>e1 h[ev]1 to rema9 ^u ! /reet along :i* ,i knew ! p>ade w\ld pass4 ,revise4 ,! m5 9 my company :o _h dissipat$ be=e ent]+ ! army f\nd1 dur+ ! long m>*es necess>y 9 ! ,argonne ,=e/1 t x 0 h>d to keep up ) x4 #dje4 ,repeat ! n\n r ?an use a pron\n t ref]s to an unemphatic antec$5t4 ,unimpressive4 ,ye/]day ,i saw ,mrs4 ,haml9 9 a new c> design$ by ! ,fi%] company4 ,almo/ all c>s design$ by !m are di/9ctive4 ,bett]4 ,ye/]day ,i saw ,mrs4 ,haml9 9 a new c> design$ by ! ,fi%] company4 ,almo/ all c>s design$ by t company are di/9ctive4 ,revise4 ,silos made ( concrete are ( great] value ?an any o!r k9d because !y la/ long]4 ,?is is easy to use & is *eap] 9 ! end ?an any o!r mat]ial4 #djf4 ,place adv]bs l only1 almo/1 ev]1 ne>ly1 j1 h>dly1 sc>cely1 m]ely1 q next to & usually be=e ! words !y modify4 ,mislead+4 ,he w\ld only l5d me five doll>s4 ,accurate4 ,he w\ld l5d me only five doll>s4 ,revise4 ,i don't ev] want to see him aga94 #djg4 ,place negatives be=e ! words !y modify4 ,untaught4 ,ev]ybody has n read ! ,bible4 ,bett]4 ,n ev]ybody has read ! ,bible4 ,revise4 ,all m5 7 n born to be hang$4 #djh4 ,use correlative conjunctions to connect only co-ord9ate expressions4 ,wrong4 ,i knew ,i w\ld be compell$ ei!r to salute him or he w\ld h me put 9 ! gu>d h\se4 ,"r4 ,i knew ,i w\ld be compell$ ei!r to salute him or to sp5d a week 9 ! gu>d h\se4 ,revise4 ,x 0 n only necess>y = me to save all ! money ,i c\ld1 b ,i knew ,i %\ld h to e>n m ?an ,i _h ev] e>n$ be=e4 #dji4 ,place correlative conjunctions z close z possible to ! expressions !y connect4 ,faulty4 ,he 0 n only an exp]t m>ksman b he also 0 a skill$ horseman4 ,improv$4 ,he 0 n only an exp]t m>ksman b also a skill$ horseman4 ,revise4 ,milit>y tra9+ bo? tea*es a man to ?9k quickly & to comm& o!rs4 #daj4 ,place e subord9ate clause s t its relation to ! ma9 clause is imm$iately evid5t4 ,unc]ta94 ,he knew :5 ! "t came :at he w\ld d4 ,c]ta94 ,:5 ! "t came he knew :at he w\ld d4 ,revise4 ,someone ,i knew w\ld come 94 #daa4 ,place relative clauses imm$iately aft] _! antec$5ts4 ,d\btful4 ,a man came up & spoke to my bro!r :om ,i _h nev] se5 be=e4 ,pla94 ,a man :om ,i _h nev] se5 be=e came up & spoke to my bro!r4 ,revise4 ,! %ip flew a /range flag t came 9 ye/]day4 #dab4 ,place subord9ate clauses s t _! v]bs _c be confus$ ) ! v]bs ( ma9 clauses4 ,absurd4 ,! horse snort$ z ,jackson spoke & kick$ up 8 heels4 ,correct4 ,z ,jackson spoke1 ! horse snort$ & kick$ up 8 heels4 ,revise4 ,! w9d /orm$ across ! des]t :]e ! corpse lay & :i/l$4 #dac4 ,place e modify+ phrase s t ! expression x modifies is unmi/akable4 ,mislead+4 ,! capta9 says t if y\r rifles are n clean day aft] tomorr[ he w put e "o ( y 9 ! gu>d h\se4 ,cle>4 ,! capta9 says t if day aft] tomorr[ y\r rifles are n clean he w put e "o ( y 9 ! gu>d h\se4 ,revise4 ,:5 he took 8 seat mu* to 8 *agr9 ! lights w5t out4 #dad4 ,place co-ord9ate modifi]s "o aft] ano!r4 ,halt+4 ,ev5 ?\gh he _h nev] se5 y be=e1 he w\ld let y "k :o he 0 if he lik$ y\r appe>ance4 ,secure4 ,ev5 ?\gh he _h nev] se5 y be=e1 if he lik$ y\r appe>ance he w\ld let y "k :o he 04 ,revise4 ,if ,friday is a holiday1 ,i %all drive home if ! roads are good4 #dae4 ,make a p>ticipial phrase modify ! n\n or pron\n :i* x ought obvi\sly to modify2 or *ange ! con/ruction4 ,ludicr\s4 ,/&+ ^u ! dome ( ,old ,capitol1 ,i[a av5ue pres5ts an unusual view4 ,bett]4 ,/&+ ^u ! dome ( ,old ,capitol1 "o gets an unusual view ( ,i[a av5ue4 ,bett]4 ,if "o /&s ^u ! dome ( ,old ,capitol1 "o gets an unusual view ( ,i[a av5ue4 ,revise4 ,com+ out on ! tra9 ,pike's ,peak is se54 #daf4 ,*ange a p>ticiple prec$$ by ?us into a clause if ! p>ticiple _c logically modify ! subject ( ! prec$+ v]b4 ,wrong4 ,%e _h to wait until ev]ybody else 9 ! room 0 s]v$1 ?us caus+ h] to be late4 ,"r4 ,%e _h to wait until ev]ybody else 9 ! room 0 s]v$1 & ! delay caus$ h] to be late4 ,revise4 ,! bridges 7 all d[n betwe5 ,/orm ,lake & ,altoona1 ?us mak+ all ! tra9s late4 #dag4 ,make a p>ticiple prec$$ by a conjunction agree ) ! n\n to :i* x obvi\sly belongs2 or *ange ! con/ruction4 ,ridicul\s4 ,tuesday1 :5 we>+ my new hat1 a ra9/orm came up & ru9$ x4 ,correct4 ,tuesday1 :5 ,i 0 we>+ my new hat1 a ra9/orm came up & ru9$ x4 ,revise4 ,:ile eat+ my supp] la/ night1 "o ( ! calves got out & ran into ! corn field4 #dah4 ,a phrase beg9n+ ) ! adjective due c ref] only to a n\n4 7,see #cgb47 ,wrong4 ,he 0 ill1 due to ov]eat+4 ,"r4 ,8 illness 0 due to ov]eat+4 ,revise4 ,! tra9 /opp$1 due to boil] tr\ble4 #dai4 ,make a g]und prepositional phrase modify ! n\n or pron\n :i* x ought obvi\sly to modify2 or *ange ! con/ruction4 ,ludicr\s4 ,9 speak+ to ,sp>ks ye/]day1 he told me t ! team 0 9 excell5t condition4 ,cle>4 ,9 speak+ to ,sp>ks ye/]day1 ,i le>n$ t ! team 0 9 excell5t condition4 ,revise4 ,9 try+ to %[ ,hel5 h[ to />t h] motor1 %e almo/ ran ov] me4 #dbj4 ,9 p>allel subord9ate clauses repeat ! subord9at+ conjunction ) ea* clause aft] ! fir/4 ,unequal4 ,%e _h he>d t h] "m _h di$ sudd5ly aft] a %ort b viol5t illness1 & h] fa!r _h /ruck oil4 ,accurate4 ,%e _h he>d t h] "m _h di$ sudd5ly aft] a %ort b viol5t illness1 & t h] fa!r _h /ruck oil4 ,revise4 ,al?\gh ! wat] rose /eadily dur+ ! spr+ ?aw1 & ! dam 0 on ! po9t ( giv+ way "u ! pressure1 ! eng9e] ob/9ately insi/$ t !re 0 no dang]4 #dba4 ,repeat auxili>y v]b =ms ) _! pr9cipals4 ,improp] co-ord9ation4 ,we %all h to leave t[n & ne$ an automobile4 ,improv$4 ,we %all h to leave t[n & %all ne$ an automobile4 ,revise4 ,a qu>t]back mu/ see :]e ! hole 9 ! l9e is & take advantage ( x4 #dbb4 ,repeat ! to be=e ea* inf9itive 9 a s]ies4 ,n co-ord9ate4 ,he came to see ! h\se1 b>ga9 = x1 & buy x if t]ms c\ld be agre$ ^u4 ,co-ord9ate4 ,he came to see ! h\se1 to b>ga9 = x1 & to buy x if t]ms c\ld be agre$ ^u4 ,revise4 ,n only 0 x necess>y = u to read ! book1 rememb] :at 0 9 x1 & be able to recite ^u x1 b also write a pap] ^u x1 & read ! pap] be=e ! class4 #dbc4 ,repeat ! preposition ) ea* object4 ,obscure4 ,%e w5t to ,*icago & ! capital ( ! /ate4 ,bett]4 ,%e w5t to ,*icago & to ! capital ( ! /ate4 ,revise4 ,! positions 7 (f]$ to soldi]s1 a?letes1 & virile m5 g5]ally4 #dbd4 ,repeat ! article ) ea* n\n 9 a s]ies4 ,confus+4 ,!y ne$$ a m9i/]1 doctor1 & lawy] at once4 ,cle>4 ,!y ne$$ a m9i/]1 a doctor1 & a lawy] at once4 ,revise4 ,i met ! m]*ant & po/ma/] ( ! little t[n z well z ! %]iff & ju/ice ( ! peace4 #dbe4 ,repeat ! possessive ) ea* n\n 9 a s]ies4 ,bad4 ,i ask$ h] ! names ( h] si/] & puppy4 ,bett]4 ,i ask$ h] ! names ( h] si/] & ( h] puppy4 ,revise4 ,he wat*$ 8 horse1 c[1 & pig break ?r\gh into ! :eat4 #dbf4 ,give ! same /ructure only to ideas simil> 9 ?\ght4 ,mislead+4 ,golf is a game t requires skill1 poise1 good temp]1 & clubs t exactly suit y4 ,bett]4 ,golf is a game t requires skill1 poise1 & good temp]4 ,^! qualities1 h[ev]1 w avail little unless "o has clubs t exactly suit him4 ,revise4 ,! new hospital 0 erect$ to ! memory ( ,john ,%ul] & = ! b5efit ( crippl$ *ildr54 #dbg4 ,aft] a long or involv$ s]ies1 use a summ>iz+ ^w be=e cont9u+ ! s5t5ce4 ,inadequate4 ,to live uprightly1 to be amiable always1 & to be consid]ate ( o!rs ev5 to ! po9t ( inconv5i5ce are ! ess5tials ( g5tl5ess4 ,bett]4 ,to live uprightly1 to be amiable always1 & to be consid]ate ( o!rs ev5 to ! po9t ( inconv5i5ce--^! are ! ess5tials ( g5tl5ess4 ,revise4 ,o wise & upright judge1 ,o le>n$ 9 ! law1 ,o guide1 philosoph]1 & fri5d1 be my rock & refuge4 #dbh4 ,use & to connect only ^? expressions :i* are 9 ! same con/ruction4 7,see #cgd47 ,bad4 ,we !n /udi$ *emi/ry1 a subject mu* m int]e/+ ?an hi/ory1 & :i* ,i enjoy$ ?or\ghly4 ,bett]4 ,we !n /udi$ *emi/ry1 a subject mu* m int]e/+ ?an hi/ory1 & "o :i* ,i enjoy$ ?or\ghly4 ,revise4 ,jacob ,/urm 0 a man ( mu* weal?1 & :o came to ?is c\ntry tw5ty ye>s ago4 #dbi4 ,use b to connect only ^? expressions :i* are 9 ! same con/ruction4 ,bad4 ,i />t$ into high s*ool resolv$ to make ! mo/ ( my opportunities1 b 9 no long "t decid+ to h all ! fun ,i c\ld4 ,bett]4 ,i />t$ into high s*ool resolv$ to make ! mo/ ( my opportunities1 b 9 no long "t ,i decid$ to h all ! fun ,i c\ld4 ,revise4 ,! colonel issu$ an ord] ab\t m\nts1 b :i* nobody c\ld und]/&4 #dcj4 ,aft] a comp>ative degree1 exclude ! subject ( comp>ison f ! class ) :i* x is comp>$4 ,wrong4 ,plat9um is m valuable ?an any metal4 ,"r4 ,plat9um is m valuable ?an any o!r metal4 ,revise4 ,morvi* 0 swift] ?an any racehorse ( 8 day4 #dca4 ,aft] a sup]lative degree1 include ! subject ( comp>ison )9 ! class ) :i* x is comp>$4 ,wrong4 ,%akespe>e is ! greate/ ( any o!r poet4 ,"r4 ,%akespe>e is ! greate/ ( all poets4 ,revise4 ,a slave is ! mo/ mis]able ( all o!r m54 #dcb4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange ( p]son )9 ! s5t5ce4 ,wrong4 ,y c lead a horse to wat]1 b nobody c make him dr9k4 ,"r4 ,y c lead a horse to wat]1 b y _c make him dr9k4 ,revise4 ,i h done ! be/ ,i c\ld1 & ,i d n ?9k a p]son %\ld be requir$ to d m4 #dcc4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange ( numb] )9 ! s5t5ce4 ,wrong4 ,tillie1 ,m>g>et1 & ,ann ea* took _! seats4 ,"r4 ,tillie1 ,m>g>et1 & ,ann ea* took h] seat4 ,revise4 ,ev]ybody %\ld save _! money :ile !y are "y4 #dcd4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange ( t5se )9 ! s5t5ce4 ,wrong4 ,z soon z ! tra9 came 91 he hurries home4 ,"r4 ,z soon z ! tra9 came 91 he hurri$ home4 ,revise4 ,no matt] :at he tries1 ?+s nev] came out z he expect$ !m to4 #dce4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange ( mood )9 ! s5t5ce4 ,wrong4 ,unless x is too h>d & take too mu* "t ,i c f9i% by noon4 ,"r4 ,unless x is too h>d & takes too mu* "t ,i c f9i% by noon4 ,revise4 ,s& is all "r 9 ! back y>d1 b keep x out ( ! front y>d4 #dcf4 ,avoid an inconsi/5t *ange ( voice )9 ! s5t5ce4 ,wrong4 ,! troops 7 tak5 up 9 trucks b came back on ! tra94 ,"r4 ,! troops w5t up 9 trucks b came back on ! tra94 ,revise4 ,a mon? ago ,i 0 li/5$ to ) all c\rtesy1 b n[ n ev5 a dog w li/54 ,,practice #a4 ,! poppy c be rais$ 9 ,am]ican g>d5s )\t dang] ( its becom+ a m5ace z a we$1 :i* makes its cultivation possible z a rem9d] ( ! soldi]s :o lie 9 ,fl&]s ,field4 7#djj7 #b4 ,we c use ?is truck to move freight f ! w>eh\se to ! /ore :5ev] we ne$ x4 7#dja7 #c4 ,m>y told ,leona h] co/ume 0 p]fectly becom+4 7#djb7 #d4 ,mrs4 ,fiske said to ,miss ,angl9 t %e 7,miss ,angl97 0 ! greate/ actress 9 ! _w4 7#djc7 #e4 ,/ud5ts :o come to college m]ely to h a good "t or because !y h no?+ else to d1 & ^? :o come )\t any deep seat$ desire = k = its own sake %\ld be d5i$ ! "r to ent] x4 7#djd7 #f4 ,! ,univ]sity ( ,i[a is locat$ "p on "o side ( ! ,i[a ,riv] & "p on ! o!r4 ,_m /ud5ts1 :5 ! wea!r is good1 paddle canoes ^u x4 7#dje7 #g4 ,i h>dly knew anybody4 7#djf7 #h4 ,ev]yone is n m to be piti$ ?an scorn$4 7#djg7 #i4 ,i felt t ,i mu/ ei!r make !m a cake or t !y w\ld ?9k me /+y4 7#djh7 #aj4 ,roque is a game t is nei!r too easy nor is x )\t excitem5t4 7#dji7 #aa4 ,no?+ he said is wor? :ile4 7#daj7 #ab4 ,we cle>$ away :at ! cyclone _h left ( ! h\se1 :i* _h /orm$ ?r\gh ! valley dur+ ! night4 7#daa7 #ac4 ,! fire spread :5 we ent]$ ! village & de/roy$ ev]y?+4 7#dab7 #ad4 ,:5 %e let him 9 mu* to 8 emb>rassm5t %e smil$ broadly4 7#dac7 #ae4 ,at night %e lik$ to walk out 9 ! ra94 7#dad7 #af4 ,swimm+ ar\nd a b5d 9 ! riv]1 ! hospital is se54 7#dae7 #ag4 ,i mi/ook h] = an acqua9tance1 ?us caus+ emb>rassm5t4 7#daf7 #ah4 ,:5 climb+ a wire f5ce1 8 %otgun w5t (f4 7#dag7 #ai4 ,he became ri*1 due to oil 9 ,mexico4 7#dah7 #bj4 ,9 talk+ to ,h5ry ?is morn+1 he said t he _h be5 ill4 7#dai7 #ba4 ,he told me t 8 bro!r 0 an eng9e] & he w\ld look into ! matt]4 7#dbj7 #bb4 ,%e w\ld h _h a great deal ( tr\ble &1 no d\bt1 fail$ 9 ! end if we _h n happ5$ to come along4 7#dba7 #bc4 ,!y le>n$ to read ,fr5*1 ride horseback1 & f5ce be=e !y 7 graduat$4 7#dbb7 #bd4 ,!re 0 no room = weakl+s1 invalids1 or ! disaffect$4 7#dbc7 #be4 ,i 0 =c$ to refuse ! invitation ( ! secret>y & treasur]4 7#dbd7 #bf4 ,johnson knew 8 half bro!r1 nephew1 & c\s9 w\ld be !re4 7#dbe7 #bg4 ,! regim5t 0 rais$ = ! honor ( ,johnson c\nty & to drive ! ,spani>d out ( ,cuba4 7#dbf7 #bh4 ,to live1 to le>n1 to die is ! sum total ( exi/5ce4 7#dbg7 #bi4 ,8 uncle _h an old c> & :i* he us$ to drive to ,solon4 7#dbh7 #cj4 ,! in/ructor made an assignm5t b :i* ev]ybody ?\ght 0 too h>d4 7#dbi7 #ca4 ,solomon 0 wis] ?an any man4 7#dcj7 #cb4 ,mi*ael ,angelo 0 ! greate/ ( all o!r pa9t]s4 7#dca7 #cc4 ,try z y may1 "o _c d x4 7#dcb7 #cd4 ,ev]ybody %\ld save _! money :ile !y are "y4 7#dcc7 #ce4 ,he w h le>n$ bett] by ,sunday unless he nev] tri$ x aga94 7#dcd7 #cf4 ,milit>y tra9+ is all "r = a "y man1 b don't ask me to take any4 7#dce7 #cg4 ,ye/]day he 0 se5 by at lea/ t5 p1 & ,i myself saw him today4 7#dcf7 ,,*apt] ,,ix ,,s5t5ce ,,vigor ,good s5t5ces are *>act]iz$ by correctness & cle>ness1 b ! be/ s5t5ces possess a ?ird quality4 ,effective s5t5ces mu/ ent]ta91 p]suade1 or conv9ce4 ,to d ^! ?+s1 !y mu/ be graceful1 vivid1 =ceful1 & emphatic pres5tations ( ! writ]'s ideas4 ,! quality :i* makes correct & cle> s5t5ces effective is call$ vigor4 #ejj4 ,to emphasize po9t$ly1 place mat]ial 9 a s5t5ce by itself4 ,unemphatic4 ,! city c\ncil is det]m9$ to /op jaywalk+ at ! ea/ entrance ( ! campus1 & to atta9 ?is end has adopt$ a plan t calls = re/rict+ p$e/rians to cle>ly m>k$ lanes t cross ,cl9ton /reet at "r angles4 ,emphatic4 ,! city c\ncil is det]m9$ to /op jaywalk+ at ! ea/ entrance to ! campus4 ,to atta9 ?is end1 ! c\ncil has adopt$ a plan t calls = re/rict+ p$e/rians to cle>ly m>k$ lanes t cross ,cl9ton /reet at "r angles4 ,revise4 ,i us$ to ?9k t sleep+ accommodations at frat]nity h\ses 7 inadequate1 b ,i don't n[4 #eja4 ,divide a s5t5ce t seems too long4 ,repellant4 ,! collections at ! museum1 :i* is ! mo/ important 9 ! _w1 are 9 two divisions1 "o = ! public & ! o!r = ! use ( speciali/s1 "s ( :om come f great di/ances to avail !mselves ( ! unequall$ collections set ap>t = _! use4 ,attractive4 ,! collections at ! museum1 :i* is ! mo/ important 9 ! _w1 are 9 two divisions1 "o = ! public & ! o!r = ! use ( speciali/s4 ,"s speciali/s come f great di/ances to avail !mselves ( ! unequall$ collections set ap>t = _! use4 ,revise4 ,t !re w be no tol]ance ( laxity on ! "p ( ! fre%m5 conc]n+ ! obs]vance ( ?is decree 0 assur$ by ! /rong language ( ! ord]1 :i* fir/ po9t$ out t ! we>+ ( ! gre5 cap by fir/ ye> m5 0 a college tradition & mu/ be upheld1 !n expla9$ t ! we>+ ( ! cap 0 left to ! honor ( e fre%man1 :o 0 expect$ to pur*ase "o & use x accord+ to ! rules ( ! pa/ two ye>s1 :i* /ate t ! cap mu/ be worn e day until six o'clock at night1 :5 x may be *ang$ = ! m common headge>4 #ejb4 ,cond5se wordy s5t5ces4 ,me&]+4 ,at a rec5t meet+ ( ! m5's glee club1 x 0 decid$ to increase ! memb]%ip ( ! organization f ?irty-two m5 to =ty m54 ,succ9ct4 ,! m5's glee club rec5tly decid$ to increase its memb]%ip f ?irty-two to =ty4 ,revise4 ,! names ( ! c&idates = class (fices 7 ann\nc$ ,w$nesday by ! election committee4 ,!re are ?irty-six c&idates = (fice4 #ejc4 ,consolidate two or m %ort1 j]ky s5t5ces into "o smoo? s5t5ce4 ,j]ky4 ,! annual int]frat]nity pajama race 0 run on ,%]idan road ,monday night4 ,! ev5t took place at elev5 o'clock4 ,x 0 hotly conte/$ by five frat]nities4 ,! ,sig ,alphs won a %iv]+ victory4 ,smoo?4 ,! ,sig ,alphs won a %iv]+ victory on ,%]idan road at elev5 o'clock ,monday night1 :5 !y defeat$ f\r rival teams 9 ! annual int]frat]nity pajama race4 ,revise4 ,! natives boil ! *opp$ leaves to a syrup4 ,?is is p\r$ into a monkey sk94 ,! liquid is !n all[$ to cool & h>d54 #ejd4 ,v>y ! /ructure ( successive s5t5ces4 ,monoton\s4 ,ar\nd ! sides ( ! armory on ! floor 7 boo?s sep>at$ by curta9s4 ,9 ea* "o ( ! boo?s 0 susp5d$ a small r$ inc&esc5t light4 ,ar\nd ! hall at v>i\s places 7 j>s conta9+ burn+ inc5se4 ,pleas+4 ,ar\nd ! sides ( ! armory on ! floor 7 boo?s sep>at$ by curta9s4 ,a small r$ inc&esc5t light 0 susp5d$ 9 ea* boo?4 ,inc5se burn$ 9 j>s at v>i\s places ar\nd ! hall4 ,revise4 ,! olde/ book 9 ! univ]sity libr>y1 to ! be/ k ( ! libr>ians1 0 pr9t$ 9 #aeaa4 ,! book 0 writt5 by ,johannes von ,kais]b]g ,geil]1 a prea*] ( ! re=mation :o 0 born ab\t ! middle ( ! fifte5? c5tury4 ,?is old "w is entitl$ ,navicula ,sive ,speculum ,fatuorum1 :i* translat$ means1 ,! ,%ip or ,mirror ( ,fools4 ,x is writt5 9 ,lat9 & conta9s _m curi\s & int]e/+ wood cuts4 ,! book is made up l>gely ( s]mons4 #eje4 ,beg9 successive s5t5ces ) diff]5t words4 ,dre>y4 ,d is ! m9imum /&>d = a pass+ grade4 ,d /ud5ts compose approximately ! l[e/ tw5ty-five p] c5t ( e class4 ,d "w is t "w :i* is n up to av]age1 & yet is cle>ly above failure4 ,pleas+4 ,d is ! m9imum /&>d = a pass+ grade4 ,/ud5ts :o are m>k$ ,d compose approximately ! l[e/ tw5ty-five p] c5t ( e class4 ,! grade ,d means t a /ud5t's "w is n up to ! av]age1 & yet is cle>ly above failure4 ,revise4 ,! milit>y c>nival 0 ! l>ge/ exhibition ( its k9d ev] attempt$ at ! college4 ,! seats 7 all fill$1 & ! cr[d 0 kept at a high po9t ( int]e/ ?r\gh\t ! entire %[4 ,! :ole program 0 arrang$ 9 su* a mann] t at no "t 0 !re a lull 9 ! activities4 ,! op5+ numb] 0 a conc]t by ! milit>y b&4 ,! physical tra9+ ex]cises :i* foll[$ 7 ( ! type 9 :i* ! regim5t itself gives ! comm&s & !n executes !m4 ,! mo/ spectacul> feature ( ! program 0 ! advance to attack4 #ejf4 ,v>y ! l5g? ( successive s5t5ces4 ,monoton\s4 ,! new build+ be+ erect$ s\? ( ! eng9e]+ build+ w be occupi$ ,monday = ! fir/ "t4 ,p>tition sid+ has held up ! "w to "s ext5t4 ,fifte5 hundr$ feet ( p>tition mat]ial is /ill to be laid4 ,pa9t+ is progress+ /eadily4 ,! /eam fitt]s' "w is ne>ly complet$4 ,"w done aft] ,monday w be c>ri$ on by a night %ift4 ,"s "w on ! halls c be done dur+ class h\rs4 ,workm5 say t ! build+ 0 erect$ 9 record break+ "t4 ,x has tak5 less ?an a mon? to complete ! job4 ,pleas+4 ,! new build+ be+ erect$ s\? ( ! eng9e]+ build+ w be occupi$ ,monday = ! fir/ "t4 ,p>tition sid+ has held up ! "w to "s ext5t1 & fifte5 hundr$ feet ( p>tition mat]ial is /ill to be laid4 ,pa9t+ is progress+ /eadily1 & ! /eam fitt]s' "w is ne>ly complet$4 ,"w done aft] ,monday w be c>ri$ on by a night %ift1 al?\gh "s "w on ! halls c be done dur+ class h\rs4 ,workm5 say t ! build+ 0 erect$ 9 record break+ "t4 ,x has tak5 less ?an a mon? to complete ! job4 ,revise4 ,! sev5-hundr$-^w s5t5ce us$ by ! legislature1 h[ev]1 is m]ely an example ( ! preval5t t5d5cy ( p to disreg>d ! elem5t>y pr9ciples ( composition & gramm>4 ,ev]yone may h a fa9t recollection ( hav+ /udi$1 at "s remote p]iod ( 8 c>e]1 ! important rules ( 8unity1 mass1 & coh]5ce40 ,b 9 actual practice "o too (t5 falls into ! habit ( express+ ?\ghts 9 a rambl+ & unconnect$ fl[ ( words1 ) ! expressions embelli%$ by slang & colloquial t]ms4 ,individuals use _m words1 b !y usually say little1 & ! small g]m ( ?\ght is (t5 h>d to f9d4 #ejg4 ,turn a loose s5t5ce into a p]iodic s5t5ce4 ,feeble4 ,! new eng9e w replace ! pres5t eng9e 9 case ( necessity4 ,=ceful4 ,9 case ( necessity1 ! new eng9e w replace ! pres5t eng9e4 ,revise4 ,?is is n a /ud5t organization al?\gh ! majority ( its memb]s are f$]al bo>d /ud5ts4 #ejh4 ,end a s5t5ce ) a /rik+ ^w4 ,lifeless4 ,br+ along a team t w be able to =ce ^! boys to _! utmo/ z no team has yet be5 able to d4 ,/rik+4 ,br+ along a team t w d :at no o!r team has yet be5 able to d1 =ce ^! boys to _! utmo/4 ,revise4 ,we %\ld w9 ,saturday's game :e!r ,m9ot c play or n4 #eji4 ,use climactic ord] 9 a s]ies ( words1 phrases1 clauses1 or s5t5ces4 ,bungl+4 ,i h be5 s (t5 re=m$1 reg5]at$1 reborn1 am5d$1 & correct$ t only ) difficulty c ,i look an hone/ s9n] 9 ! face4 ,brilliant4 ,i h be5 s (t5 am5d$1 correct$1 re=m$1 reg5]at$1 & reborn t only ) difficulty c ,i look an hone/ s9n] 9 ! face4 ,revise4 ,_! clo?+ is n suffici5t = bodily com=t & is also f> f pres5table4 #eaj4 ,put ! mo/ significant idea ne> ! beg9n+ or ! end ( a s5t5ce4 ,weak4 ,! fir/ speak] on ! program 0 ,dean ,will>d ,l4 ,sp]ry1 :o gave a %ort talk4 ,/rong4 ,dean ,will>d ,l4 ,sp]ry op5$ ! program ) a %ort talk4 ,revise4 ,!re are m ?an six hundr$ c\rses (f]$ to /ud5ts 9 ! college ( lib]al arts4 #eaa4 ,keep closely relat$ grammatical elem5ts toge!r4 ,awkw>d4 ,c>ds w be di/ribut$ f eight to elev5 ?is morn+ by memb]s ( ! regi/r>'s /aff at ! ea/ entrance ( ! natural sci5ce build+ to ! hundr$s ( /ud5ts :o h return$ dur+ ! pa/ few days4 ,well-knit4 ,f eight to elev5 ?is morn+1 memb]s ( ! regi/r>'s /aff1 /ation$ at ! ea/ entrance ( ! natural sci5ce build+1 w di/ribute c>ds to ! hundr$s ( /ud5ts :o h return$ dur+ ! pa/ few days4 ,revise4 ,?is w1 x is hop$1 help ! vot] to select ! m5 & wom5 :o are real lead]s on ! campus4 ,revise4 ,i want to mo/ emphatically /ate t ,i d n believe a ,union ( ,s\? ,am]ica is possible4 ,revise4 ,appo9tm5t ( ,george ,hanby & ,walt] ,g4 ,phillips to conf] ) ! presid5t conc]n+ ! loan t is be+ made by ! tru/ees to aid wor?y /ud5ts 9 meet+ _! necess>y college exp5ses 0 made ,w$nesday4 #eab4 ,put ! ma9 idea 9 ! ma9 clause4 ,*>act]less4 ,! fir/ talk ( ! s]ies 0 giv5 ,tuesday morn+1 9 :i* he made ! po9t t x is man's nature to pray4 ,animat$4 ,tuesday morn+ 9 ! fir/ talk ( ! s]ies he made ! po9t t x is man's nature to pray4 ,revise4 ,he _h sav$ #a1ejj1jjj :5 "o day 8 (fice boy u%]$ 9 a man :o %[$ him a diamond ( great value4 #eac4 ,put a subord9ate idea into a subord9ate con/ruction4 ,unga9ly4 ,peet took ,mead's place at halfback la/ night & scor$ two t\*d[ns4 ,graphic4 ,aft] tak+ ,mead's place at halfback la/ night ,peet scor$ two t\*d[ns4 ,revise4 ,great /ress w be laid ^u ! application ( ^! te/s 9 ! future2 ! p ( ?is c\ntry sp5d millions ( doll>s ea* ye> 9 giv+ musical tra9+ to *ildr5 :o h no tal5t = music4 #ead4 ,write simply4 ,affect$4 ,suffice x1 t ,i am sav+ ! be/ = ! la/4 ,natural4 ,i am sav+ ! be/ = ! la/4 ,revise4 ,! riv] is too cold = c>eless plunges1 & dea?-deal+ cramps & *ills may lead to dr[n+s = ^? :o bew>e n ! p]ils t lie 9 ,april wat]s4 #eae4 ,avoid ! use ( f>-fet*$ synonyms4 ,silly4 ,frat]nities c be a great =ce = ! good ( ! college & = ! good ( ! ,greek lett] man4 ,natural4 ,frat]nities c be a great =ce = ! good ( ! college & = ! good ( ! frat]nity man4 ,revise4 ,m int]e/ is be+ %[n 9 ! manly art ?is ye> ?an has be5 %[n 9 any pa/ season4 #eaf4 ,be def9ite & p>ticul>4 ,colorless4 ,_m booklets 7 s5t to fre%m5 be=e !y came to college4 ,vivid4 ,fifte5 hundr$ copies ( ! ,fre%man ,h&book 7 s5t dur+ ,july to z _m prospective fre%m54 ,revise4 ,la/ ye> sev]al frat]nities 7 put on probation4 #eag4 ,use p>allel con/ructions = p>allel ideas4 ,jumbl$4 ,! speak] comp>$ college /ud5ts 9 _! se>* = an education to ! processes us$ by a tree to ga9 its food4 ,cle>-cut4 ,! speak] comp>$ a college /ud5t 9 se>* ( an education to a tree 9 se>* ( food4 ,revise4 ,to be n>r[ is to be a helpless j\rnali/4 #eah4 ,repeat a prom95t ^w or phrase = great] emphasis4 ,weak4 ,f>sight$ citiz5s ( ! t[n are realiz+ m ?an ev] ! possibility ( ! univ]sity's becom+ "o ( ! fir/ univ]sities 9 ,am]ica1 n only 9 enrollm5t b also 9 s*ola/ic /&+4 ,/rong4 ,f>sight$ citiz5s ( ! t[n are realiz+ m ?an ev] ! possibility ( ! univ]sity's becom+ "o ( ! fir/ univ]sities 9 ,am]ica1 fir/ n only 9 enrollm5t b fir/ also 9 s*ola/ic /&+4 ,revise4 ,! progress 9 ,fr5* affairs has always be5 sl[--sometimes too mu* s4 #eai4 ,avoid ! monoton\s repetition ( words1 phrases1 or ev5 syllables4 ,flat4 ,! /iff coll>s t are be+ %[n = =mal ev5+ we> are ! w+ coll>s4 ,skilful4 ,/iff w+ coll>s are be+ %[n = =mal ev5+ we>4 ,revise4 ,9 ! s5ior class ! race = presid5t w be a close "o1 z ,burgess1 ,elwood1 & ,sampson are expect$ to run a close race4 ,revise4 ,! c\nty sup]9t5d5ts :o w ga!r "h = ! conf]5ce w 9 "p comprise ! gr\p ( p>ticipants 9 ! huge bir?day p>ty ( ! college ( education4 #ebj4 ,avoid tautology4 ,unc\?4 ,^! conc]ts are op5 to ! public1 & ev]yone is invit$4 ,pi?y4 ,^! conc]ts are op5 to ! public4 ,revise4 ,dean ,smi? is a native ( ,ohio & 0 born 9 ,c5tral ,city4 ,revise4 ,classes 9 folk danc+ w />t ,monday morn+ at n9e ,a4,m4 ,revise4 ,! co$ucation ( bo? sexes is mak+ rem>kable headway 9 ?is c\ntry4 ,revise4 ,%e is ! wid[ ( ! late ,colonel ,ralph ,h4 ,rob9son4 ,revise4 ,let's u g4 #eba4 ,avoid pleonasm4 ,/upid4 ,z ,i ent] on ?is fam$ pr(ession ,i see ! mi/akes ( o!rs4 ,t]se4 ,z ,i ent] ?is fam$ pr(ession ,i see ! mi/akes ( o!rs4 ,revise4 ,!re is an av]age ( #ee1jjj kil[ats us$ mon?ly4 #ebb4 ,avoid ! use ( ! same ^w 9 two s5ses 9 ! same s5t5ce1 or 9 s5t5ces ne> toge!r4 ,clumsy4 ,because !re is no s*ool available1 s*ool w be dismiss$ next week4 ,graceful4 ,because no build+ is available1 s*ool w be dismiss$ next week4 ,revise4 ,! girls may survive :acks ) hockey clubs & yet n be able to /& ! sev]e te/ ( initiation into ,m4 ,c4 club4 #ebc4 ,keep ! same metaphor ?r\gh\t ! s5t5ce4 ,lame4 ,mrs4 ,mondell _h ! edge 9 ! race until circum/ances =c$ h] to %[ h] h&4 ,sprightly4 ,mrs4 ,mondell _h ! game won until circum/ances =c$ h] to %[ h] h&4 ,revise4 ,pron\ncem5ts aga9/ ! ,league ( ,nations sudd5ly lose _! cloak ( virile ,am]icanism & savor only ( p>ty politics :5 ! /ate dep>tm5t places ! /amp ( its approval on ! ,*e/] oil concessions4 #ebd4 ,avoid incongru\s metaphors4 ,absurd4 ,! two hundr$ fre%m5 took _! new places aft] ! fir/ melee 0 /ag$4 ,picturesque4 ,! two hundr$ fre%m5 took _! new places aft] ! res\nd+ bl[s ( ! fir/ melee ceas$4 ,revise4 ,walt] ,scannell1 sport+ editor ( ! ,news1 w act z ref]ee4 #ebe4 ,s5t5ces %\ld s+4 ,crude4 ,su* a critic fails to consid] ! frat]nity _s ( ! gr\p--! av[$ aim ( ! gr\p4 ,rhy?mical4 ,su* a critic fails to consid] ! av[$ aim ( ! gr\p1 its frat]nal _s4 ,revise4 ,nei!r is x always wrong1 be x rememb]$4 #ebf4 ,put an epigrammatic idea into a balanc$ s5t5ce4 ,unskilful4 ,! ess5tial ?+s 9 life are ! ones t c\nt1 & ! ess5tial ?+ 9 education is to f9d t4 ,adroit4 ,! ess5tial ?+ 9 education is to f9d ! ess5tial ?+s 9 life4 ,revise4 ,t5ure "h dep5ds n ^u ! quality ( fur 9 y\r coat b ^u ! quality ( y\r ?9k+ app>atus4 #ebg4 ,make ! mo/ vivid v]b 9 a s5t5ce ! pr$icate4 ,dull4 ,he 0 f\nd circl+ a piece ( furniture 9 ! c5t] ( ! room4 ,lively4 ,:5 f\nd he 0 circl+ a piece ( furniture 9 ! c5t] ( ! room4 ,revise4 ,!y w5t home1 /umbl+ f "o side ( ! /reet to ! o!r4 #ebh4 ,use ! active voice r ?an ! passive4 ,spiritless4 ,! glucose 0 heat$ & !n appli$ to ! bl9dfold$ fre%m54 ,/irr+4 ,! sophomores heat$ ! glucose & appli$ x to ! bl9dfold$ fre%m54 ,revise4 ,! article appe>+ 9 ! ,fir+ ,l9e column la/ ,sunday above my "n 0 n writt5 by me4 #ebi4 ,sub/itute a clause or a dep5d5t phrase = an awkw>d absolute phrase4 ,involv$4 ,:at he said ab\t ! "w 0 favorable1 he be+ a man :o leans to c5sure r ?an to praise4 ,/raight=w>d4 ,:at he said ab\t ! 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"r synonym w be greatly facilitat$ if y w consult "o ( ! /&>d books :i* li/ synonyms4 ,"s ( ! good books ( ?is sort are ^? compil$ by ,roget1 ,crabbe1 ,smi?1 ,m>%1 & ,s\le4 ,in/ead ( ! ^w say1 = in/ance1 consid] talk1 utt]1 claim1 affirm1 %\t1 :isp]1 /amm]1 speak1 lisp1 giggle1 ma9ta91 /ate1 answ]1 argue1 laugh1 prea*1 reply1 respond4 ,walk is n ! only ^w to express locomotion "u "o's own p[]4 ,consid]1 = in/ance1 amble1 fall1 gambol1 glide1 leap1 pace1 prance1 prom5ade1 ramble1 run1 sl9k1 sl\*1 /eal1 /agg]1 /ride1 /roll1 /umble4 #fjc4 ,avoid newly co9$ words4 ,p>ticul>ly atroci\s examples ( newly co9$ words are to burgle1 to burgl>ize1 & to en?use4 #fjd4 ,avoid us+ v]bs z n\ns & n\ns z v]bs unless su* usage has be5 admitt$ into ! /&>d language4 ,examples ( v]bs t h n yet be5 accept$ z n\ns are comb9e1 invite1 /eal1 try1 & w94 ,examples ( n\ns t h n yet be5 accept$ z v]bs are suicide & suspicion4 #fje4 ,d n use slang 9 =mal composition4 ,bad4 8,?ank y = ! ride 9 y\r auto40 8,y bet40 ,bett]4 8,?ank y = ! ride 9 y\r automobile40 8,don't m5tion x40 #fjf4 ,use words t h>monize ) ! tone ( ! :ole composition4 ,9 ord9>y writ+ avoid su* words z said1 same1 !reby1 !re91 & h]e9be=e4 ,bad4 ,said rule is (t5 brok54 ,bett]4 ,! rule j m5tion$ is (t5 brok54 ,bad4 ,i receiv$ ! wat* & ?ank y = same4 ,bett]4 ,?ank y = ! wat* :i* has j arriv$4 #fjg4 ,avoid poetical words 9 prose4 ,examples are amid1 anew1 dwelt1 ere1 eve1 h5ce1 hi!r1 morn1 'nea?1 o'er1 (t1 'tis1 ?rice1 'twas1 :i!r4 #fjh4 ,use unaffect$ expressions r ?an trite or hackney$ ones4 ,avoid3 a good "t 0 _h by all2 bolt f a cle> sky2 begg>s description2 beyond description2 indescribable2 a royal reception2 *eck]$ c>e]2 disc\rse sweet music2 dull1 sick5+ ?ud2 doom$ to disappo9tm5t2 exception proves ! rule2 fair maid5s2 ! grim reap]2 hungry z be>s2 la/ b n lea/2 me?od 9 8 madness2 nipp$ 9 ! bud2 r5d] 7a vocal solo72 s\ght 8 d[ny c\*2 /ood l s5t9els2 /age 7= any?+ except a !atrical p]=mance72 too full = utt]ance2 took to 8 heels2 w5d$ _! way2 :]e ignorance is bliss4 #fji4 ,use simple r ?an pret5ti\s expressions4 ,pref] get up to arise wife or husb& to bett] half eat to p>take ( dog to can9e cat to fel9e horse to equ9e cl]gyman to div9e give to donate fl[]s to floral (f]+ man to g5tleman woman to lady lett] to k9d favor arm or leg to limb fun]al to la/ sad rites or obsequies (t5 to (t5times body to rema9s live to reside h\se or home to resid5ce g to b$ to retire fri5d to boy fri5d1 girl fri5d1 g5tleman fri5d1 or lady fri5d #faj4 ,use uncontract$ =ms 9 dignifi$ writ+4 ,conv]sational4 ,i c't & won't g4 ,dignifi$4 ,i _c & w n g4 #faa4 ,use ,i1 me1 or my r ?an "s =m ( we or ! writ]4 ,insuff]ably mode/4 ,9 ! op9ion ( ! pres5t writ] ,locke %\ld w94 ,direct4 ,locke %\ld w94 ,direct4 ,i ?9k ,locke %\ld w94 #fab4 ,use simple p]sonal pron\ns r ?an int5sive or reflexive pron\ns4 ,affect$4 ,y w\ld conf] a great favor on my wife & myself if y w\ld come4 ,natural4 ,y w\ld conf] a great favor on my wife & me if y w\ld come4 ,affect$4 ,myself & bro!r are bo? memb]s ( ! ,cap5 debat+ society4 ,natural4 ,my bro!r & ,i bo? belong to ! ,cap5 debat+ society4 ,affect$4 ,^! tickets w admit self & gue/s4 ,natural4 ,^! tickets w admit y & y\r gue/s4 #fac4 ,foll[ good usage 9 ref]r+ to a husb& or a wife4 ,vulg>4 ,y w h to see ,mr4 ab\t r5t+ ! g>age4 ,bett]4 ,y w h to see my husb& ab\t r5t+ ! g>age4 ,vulg>4 ,! d9n] 0 9 honor ( ,j4 ,a4 ,smi? & wife4 ,bett]4 ,! d9n] 0 9 honor ( ,mr4 & ,mrs4 ,j4 ,a4 ,smi?4 ,vulg>4 ,among ! gue/s 7 ,mrs4 ,capt4 ,johnson1 ,mrs4 ,pr(4 ,healy1 ,mrs4 ,rev4 ,%aw1 & ,mrs4 ,presid5t ,=d4 ,bett]4 ,among ! gue/s 7 ,mrs4 ,ralph ,g4 ,johnson1 ,mrs4 ,lionel ,f4 ,healy1 ,mrs4 ,h>ry ,l4 ,%aw1 & ,mrs4 ,f]d9& ,l4 ,=d4 ,vulg>4 ,aft] ,john _h be5 m>ri$ two ye>s1 %e left him4 ,bett]4 ,aft] ,john _h be5 m>ri$ two ye>s1 8 wife left him4 #fad4 ,avoid illit]ate usage4 alright4 ,!re is no su* ^w4 ,use all "r4 &4 ,& does n mean or4 ,wrong4 ,he asks f\r & five doll>s = a /raw hat4 ,"r4 ,he asks f\r or five doll>s = a /raw hat4 z4 ,use because z a causal conjunction r ?an z4 ,bad4 ,i c\ld n g to ! game z ,i _h to get ! d9n]4 ,bett]4 ,i c\ld n g to ! game because ,i _h to get ! d9n]4 ,use s aft] a negative r ?an z4 ,bad4 ,he is n z bad z he is pa9t$4 ,bett]4 ,he is n s bad z he is pa9t$4 z ?\gh4 ,z if is pref]able to z ?\gh4 ,bad4 ,he talk$ z ?\gh he _h a potato 9 8 m\?4 ,bett]4 ,he talk$ z if he _h a potato 9 8 m\?4 at ab\t4 ,at ab\t is a slov5ly colloquialism4 ,omit at4 ,bad4 ,he left at ab\t six o'clock4 ,bett]4 ,he left ab\t six o'clock4 call att5tion4 ,att5tion is direct$1 n call$4 c]ta9ly4 ,ov] use has made c]ta9ly unemphatic4 ,bad4 ,i w c]ta9ly be !re4 ,bett]4 ,i w be !re4 data4 ,plural1 n s+ul>4 did4 ,did is wrong if y mean h4 ,wrong4 ,i didn't see him yet4 ,"r4 ,i hav5't se5 him yet4 ea* o!r4 ,ea* o!r applies to two p]sons or ?+s2 "o ano!r to m ?an two4 extra4 ,extra does n mean unusually4 falls4 ,plural1 n s+ul>4 fir/-rate4 ,an adjective1 n an adv]b4 ,wrong4 ,y cook fir/-rate4 ,"r4 ,y are a fir/-rate cook4 fre%m54 ,! adjective is fre%man4 held4 ,held %\ld n be appli$ to a lecture1 a meet+1 or an initiation4 ,bad4 ,our frat]nity held initiation = eight m54 ,bett]4 ,our frat]nity initiat$ eight m54 ,bad4 ,! meet+ 0 held 9 ,rob9son hall4 ,bett]4 ,! meet+ 0 9 ,rob9son hall4 ,honorable4 ,see ,rev]5d4 if4 ,use :e!r if t is :at y mean4 ,wrong4 ,i don't "k if ,i c4 ,"r4 ,i don't "k :e!r ,i c4 94 ,use into to express motion4 ,bad4 ,he w5t 9 ! h\se4 ,bett]4 ,he w5t into ! h\se4 liable4 ,use likely or probably unless ref]r+ to some?+ undesirable4 ,bad4 ,he is liable to pass ! c\rse4 ,bett]4 ,x is likely t he w pass ! c\rse4 ,bett]4 ,he w probably pass ! c\rse4 l4 ,use z or z if to introduce a clause4 ,wrong4 ,d x l ,i d4 ,"r4 ,d x z ,i d4 ,wrong4 ,y look l y 7 cold4 ,"r4 ,y look z if y 7 cold4 lit4 ,use light$4 l9e4 ,loose4 ,:at l9e are y 98 ,exact4 ,:at bus9ess are y 98 ,bad4 ,he c d any?+ 9 ! l9e ( a?letics4 ,bett]4 ,he c d any?+ 9 a?letics4 ,atroci\s4 ,w\ld y l some?+ 9 ! l9e ( music8 ,bett]4 ,w\ld y l "s music8 "o ano!r4 ,ea* o!r applies to two p]sons or ?+s2 "o ano!r to m ?an two4 p]4 ,p] %\ld be foll[$ by a ,lat9 ^w4 ,wrong4 ,8 sal>y is #e1jjj p] ye>4 ,"r4 ,8 sal>y is #e1jjj a ye>4 ,"r4 ,8 sal>y is #e1jjj p] annum4 ,use accord+ to or 9 accordance ) in/ead ( z p]4 ,wrong4 ,he paid me ,monday z p] our agreem5t4 ,"r4 ,he paid me ,monday 9 accordance ) our agreem5t4 p] c5t4 ,wrong4 ,:at p] c5t w g to college8 ,"r4 ,:at p]c5tage w g to college8 real4 ,real is n a synonym = v4 ,wrong4 ,i l him real well4 ,"r4 ,i l him v well4 ,rev]5d4 ,rev]5d %\ld be prec$$ by ! 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baby4 ,bett]4 ,x is h>d = me to write :ile tak+ c>e ( ! baby4 ?an1 till1 until4 ,n synonyms = :5 aft] h>dly or sc>cely4 ,wrong4 ,h>dly _h he fir$ ?an ! burgl> fell4 ,"r4 ,h>dly _h he fir$ :5 ! burgl> fell4 ,wrong4 ,%e _h sc>cely spok5 until we arriv$4 ,"r4 ,%e _h sc>cely spok5 :5 we arriv$4 ,unit$ ,/ates4 ,%\ld be prec$$ by ! :5 us$ z a n\n4 ,wrong4 ,france & ,unit$ ,/ates h always be5 good fri5ds4 ,"r4 ,france & ! ,unit$ ,/ates h always be5 good fri5ds4 ways4 ,plural1 n s+ul>4 :ile4 ,:ile means dur+ ! "t 9 :i*1 or ?\gh4 ,x does n mean b4 ,good4 ,:ile ,i 0 gone ! h\se burn$4 ,good4 ,:ile :at y say may be true1 x w n affect my action4 ,bad4 ,! m5 sit on "o side :ile ! wom5 sit on ! o!r4 ,bett]4 ,! m5 sit on "o side2 ! wom5 on ! o!r4 #fae4 ,use reputable words4 all !4 ,wrong4 ,?is is all ! f>!r ,i w g4 ,"r4 ,?is is z f> z ,i w g4 ,a4,m41 ,p4,m4 ,use only aft] numb]s1 mean+ ! h\r4 ,wrong4 ,we />t$ e>ly 9 ! ,a4,m4 ,"r4 ,we />t$ e>ly 9 ! morn+4 & etc4 ,etc4 is an abbreviation = et cet]a1 :i* means & o!r ?+s4 ,wrong4 ,we b\ght flags1 h&k]*iefs1 & etc4 ,"r4 ,we b\ght flags1 h&k]*iefs1 etc4 any place4 ,! correct expression is any:]e4 any:]es4 ,! correct expression is any:]e4 badly4 ,badly is n a synonym = exce$+ly or v mu*4 ,wrong4 ,i want$ x badly4 ,"r4 ,i want$ x v mu*4 company4 ,gue/ is a bett] ^w ?an company4 ,wrong4 ,we expect company = supp]4 ,"r4 ,we expect a gue/ = supp]4 complect$4 ,wrong4 ,he is light complect$4 ,"r4 ,he has a light complexion4 consid]able4 ,consid]able is n a synonym = mu* or _m4 ,wrong4 ,we h _h consid]able tr\ble lately4 ,"r4 ,we h _h a great deal ( tr\ble lately4 ,wrong4 ,!re 7 consid]able p !re4 ,"r4 ,!re 7 _m p]sons !re4 drunk4 ,drunk is n 9 good usage z a n\n4 ,use a drunk5 man4 e place4 ,! correct expression is ev]y:]e4 folks4 ,wrong4 ,i am go+ to visit ! folks ?is week4 ,"r4 ,i am go+ to visit my family ?is week4 ,wrong4 ,m ?an "o ?\s& folks saw ! accid5t4 ,"r4 ,m ?an "o ?\s& p]sons saw ! accid5t4 g5t4 ,use g5tleman1 or pref]ably man4 get-up4 ,wrong4 ,did y ev] see su* a get-up8 ,"r4 ,did y ev] see su* a co/ume8 get up4 ,wrong4 ,we are gett+ up a /raw ride = ,?ursday ev5+4 ,"r4 ,we are plann+ a /raw ride = ,?ursday ev5+4 got4 ,to indicate possession use h r ?an h got4 ,wrong4 ,h y got a p5cil8 ,"r4 ,h y a p5cil8 he> to x4 ,wrong4 ,i absolutely refuse to he> to x4 ,"r4 ,i absolutely refuse to consid] x4 human4 ,human is n a n\n4 ,wrong4 ,humans are 9 _m ways l animals4 ,"r4 ,m5 & wom5 are 9 _m ways l animals4 ,"r4 ,human be+s are 9 _m ways l animals4 9 back (4 ,beh9d is bett] ?an 9 back (4 ,wrong4 ,we f\ght 9 back ( ! b>n4 ,"r4 ,we f\ght beh9d ! b>n4 inside (4 ,use inside or )94 ,wrong4 ,he w5t inside ( ! h\se4 ,"r4 ,he w5t inside ! h\se4 ,wrong4 ,inside ( t5 m9utes n a trace rema9$4 ,"r4 ,)9 t5 m9utes n a trace rema9$4 k9d (4 ,wrong4 ,x 0 k9d ( cold4 ,"r4 ,x 0 fairly cold4 leave4 ,use let4 ,wrong4 ,leave g ( my hat4 ,"r4 ,let g my hat4 ,wrong4 ,leave me h x4 ,"r4 ,let me h x4 lot4 ,n a synonym = _m1 mu*1 or ample4 ,wrong4 ,we _h lots ( "t4 ,"r4 ,we _h ample "t4 meet )4 ,) is sup]flu\s4 ,bad4 ,he met ) ! committee4 ,bett]4 ,he met ! committee4 milit>y4 ,milit>y is n a n\n4 ,wrong4 ,! milit>y confiscat$ all coal 9 ! t[n4 ,"r4 ,! milit>y au?orities confiscat$ all coal 9 ! t[n4 no place4 ,! correct expression is n[h]e4 n[h]e ne>4 ,! correct expression is n ne>ly4 n[h]es4 ,! correct expression is n[h]e4 (4 ,( %\ld nev] be us$ = h4 7,see #cch47 ,wrong4 ,i c\ld ( won if ,i _h ( be5 will+ to lie4 ,"r4 ,i c\ld h won if ,i _h be5 will+ to lie4 (f (4 ,(f is en\gh4 ,wrong4 ,%e /epp$ backw>ds (f ( ! c>4 ,"r4 ,%e /epp$ backw>ds (f ! c>4 only4 ,only is n a synonym = b or except4 ,wrong4 ,i w\ld n be :]e ,i am today only = my wife4 ,"r4 ,i w\ld n be :]e ,i am today except = my wife4 out l\d4 ,! correct expression is al\d4 ov] )4 ,ov] is en\gh4 ,wrong4 ,! conc]t 0 ov] ) at t5 o'clock4 ,"r4 ,! conc]t 0 ov] at t5 o'clock4 ov]ly4 ,!re is no su* ^w4 ,wrong4 ,i ?9k he is n ov]ly p>ticul>4 ,"r4 ,i ?9k he is n v p>ticul>4 p4 ,use p]sons4 ,bad4 ,?irty p appli$ = ! position4 ,bett]4 ,?irty p]sons appli$ = ! position4 ,p4,m4 ,see ,a4,m4 po/$4 ,po/$ is n a synonym = in=m$4 ,wrong4 ,keep me po/$ on :at happ5s :ile ,i am gone4 ,"r4 ,keep me in=m$ ( :at happ5s :ile ,i am gone4 provid+4 ,provid+ is n a synonym = if4 ,wrong4 ,i c g provid+ x does n ra94 ,"r4 ,i c g if x does n ra94 put 94 ,wrong4 ,i put 9 two ye>s at college4 ,"r4 ,i sp5t two ye>s at college4 put up4 ,wrong4 ,he put me up = ! night4 ,"r4 ,he lodg$ me = ! night4 rememb] (4 ,rememb] is en\gh4 ,wrong4 ,i d n rememb] ( meet+ him4 ,"r4 ,i d n rememb] meet+ him4 %ape4 ,wrong4 ,he is 9 bad %ape4 ,"r4 ,he is ill4 ,or1 ,he is 9 bad condition4 %[4 ,%[ is n a synonym = a !atrical p]=mance4 ,wrong4 ,x 0 ! be/ %[ ( ! ye>4 ,"r4 ,x 0 ! be/ musical com$y ( ! ye>4 "s place4 ,! correct expression is some:]e4 sort (4 ,wrong4 ,he is sort ( %ort = a high jump]4 ,"r4 ,he is h>dly tall en\gh = a high jump]4 /op4 ,/op is n a synonym = /ay4 ,wrong4 ,we are /opp+ at ! hotel4 ,"r4 ,we are /ay+ at ! hotel4 sure4 ,wrong4 ,i %\ld sure l to g4 ,"r4 ,i %\ld surely l to g4 ,wrong4 ,sure ,i'll come4 ,"r4 ,surely ,i'll come4 ,or1 ,i'll be glad to come4 ta/y4 ,use delici\s or "s simil> expression4 ,wrong4 ,t is a ta/y pudd+4 ,"r4 ,t is a delici\s pudd+4 ?r\gh4 ,?r\gh is n a synonym = f9i%$4 ,wrong4 ,i 0 ?r\gh ! exam9ation at qu>t] ( n9e4 ,"r4 ,i f9i%$ ! exam9ation at qu>t] ( n9e4 try &4 ,try to is pref]able to try &4 ,wrong4 ,try & d bett]4 ,"r4 ,try to d bett]4 up4 ,up adds no?+ to su* v]bs z end1 meet1 f9i%1 eat1 & burn4 ,wrong4 ,x took ! firem5 an h\r aft] ! h\se burn$ up to f9i% up _! "w4 ,"r4 ,x took ! firem5 an h\r aft] ! h\se burn$ to f9i% _! "w4 visit )4 ,) is sup]flu\s4 ,wrong4 ,my "m is visit+ ) relatives4 ,"r4 ,my "m is visit+ relatives4 :]e4 ,wrong4 ,did y see 9 ! pap] :]e ! m9i/] has resign$8 ,"r4 ,did y see 9 ! pap] t ! m9i/] _h resign$8 )\t4 ,)\t is n a synonym = unless4 ,wrong4 ,)\t ,i say s1 y w n be elect$4 ,"r4 ,unless ,i say s1 y w n be elect$4 #faf4 ,use words curr5t 9 pres5t /&>d ,engli%4 ,avoid su* antiquat$ words z fir/ly1 gott51 & prov54 b :at4 ,b t is pref]able to b :at4 ,wrong4 ,i _c see b :at y are "r4 ,"r4 ,i _c see b t y are "r4 _c help b4 ,wrong4 ,i _c help b ?9k he is innoc5t4 ,"r4 ,i _c help ?9k+ he is innoc5t4 diff]5t ?an4 ,use diff]5t f4 ,wrong4 ,mabel looks diff]5t ?an ,alice4 ,"r4 ,mabel looks diff]5t f ,alice4 #fag4 ,use words & expressions nationally curr5t4 =5oon4 ,bad4 ,! =5oon session began at eight4 ,bett]4 ,! morn+ session began at eight4 get4 ,wrong4 ,i am sorry1 b ,i did n get to g4 ,"r4 ,i am sorry1 b ,i 0 unable to g4 go+ on4 ,bad4 ,he is six ye>s old1 go+ on sev54 ,bett]4 ,he is ne>ly sev5 ye>s old4 gun4 ,bad4 ,he c>ri$ a gun 9 8 belt4 ,bett]4 ,he c>ri$ a revolv] 9 8 belt4 l4 ,wrong4 ,y say ,george is 9 ,bo/on4 ,h[ does he l8 ,"r4 ,y say ,george is 9 ,bo/on4 ,h[ does he l x !re8 make (4 ,bad4 ,:5 ,osc> came to t[n all ! girls made ( him4 ,bett]4 ,:5 ,osc> came to t[n all ! girls paid him mu* att5tion4 raise4 ,bad4 ,i 0 rais$ 9 ! ,s\?4 ,bett]4 ,i 0 re>$ 9 ! ,s\?4 sm>t4 ,bad4 ,he is a sm>t boy4 ,bett]4 ,he is a bright boy4 "s4 ,bad4 ,fa!r feels "s bett]4 ,bett]4 ,fa!r feels some:at bett]4 /air /eps4 ,bad4 ,i fell d[n ! /air /eps4 ,bett]4 ,i fell d[n ! /airs4 /oop4 ,bad4 ,e ev5+ we sit on ! /oop4 ,bett]4 ,e ev5+ we sit on ! por*4 tote4 ,bad4 ,he 0 tot+ a b>rel ( fl\r on 8 %\ld]4 ,bett]4 ,he 0 c>ry+ a b>rel ( fl\r on 8 %\ld]4 wait on4 ,bad4 ,if ,mr4 ,br[n w be back )9 an h\r ,i %all wait on him4 ,bett]4 ,if ,mr4 ,br[n w be back )9 an h\r ,i %all wait = him4 want4 ,bad4 ,d y want 98 ,bett]4 ,d y want to come 98 ,bad4 ,i want t y %\ld g4 ,bett]4 ,i want y to g4 #fah4 ,use ! correct =m ( n\ns :i* h an ab/ract mean+ 9 ! s+ul> & a concrete mean+ 9 ! plural4 ,wrong4 ,8 prep>ations = ! exam9ation 7 inadequate4 ,"r4 ,8 prep>ation = ! exam9ation 0 inadequate4 ,wrong4 ,anyone suspect$ ( c[>dice 0 kill$ by tortures4 ,"r4 ,anyone suspect$ ( c[>dice 0 kill$ by torture4 ,,*apt] ,,xi ,,spell+ ,correct spell+ m>ks ! well-educat$ man or woman4 ,?is simple fact con/itutes ! reason :y "o mu/ le>n to spell4 ,engli% spell+ (f]s difficulty p>tly because x is some:at ar*aic--t is1 because pronunciation has *ang$ s9ce spell+ became fix$ by pr9t]s ab\t ?ree hundr$ ye>s ago2 p>tly because ! ,engli% alphabet is inadequate--x has only tw5ty-six *>act]s1 & !re are =ty-two s\nds 9 spok5 ,engli%4 ,b h[ev] irrational may be ! spell+ ( _m ,engli% words1 e /ud5t mu/ ma/] spell+4 ,nor is ?is a difficult task if attack$ ) p]si/5ce & det]m9ation4 ,! *ief ob/acles are c>elessness & lack ( c\rage4 ,( ! #dej1jjj words 9 ! l>ge/ diction>ies1 probably n m ?an "o ?\s& are commonly misspell$ by any "o p]son--ev5 ! wor/ spell] alive4 ,completely ma/]+ a few words ea* day = "o ye>1 !re=e1 w enable any "o to become a good spell]4 ,b no %ort cut me?od has ev] be5 discov]$ :i* w give skill to ! writ] :o f9ds spell+ difficult4 ,e sep>ate ^w :i* he habitually misspells mu/ be ?or\ghly & p]man5tly le>n$ by a di/9ct ef=t ( ! memory1 aid$ by regul> practice4 ,practice1 9 fact1 is ! only means ( acquir+ flu5t & p]man5t control ov] "o's pet fail+s4 ,b ! memoriz+ & ! practice may well be facilitat$ by an intellig5t attack on ! problem4 ,human be+s rememb] ?+s 9 diff]5t ways1 or 9 a comb9ation ( diff]5t ways4 ,"s rememb] mo/ easily & cle>ly :at !y h c>efully look$ at2 ^! are ( ! visualiz+ type4 ,"s rememb] :at !y h he>d spok5 al\d2 ^! are ( ! auditory type4 ,& o!rs rememb] be/ c]ta9 motions :i* _! muscles h p]=m$2 ^! are ( ! motor type4 ,x foll[s t "s p]sons le>n to spell mo/ easily by look+ c>efully at a difficult ^w lett] by lett] or syllable by syllable2 o!rs by he>+ x spell$ al\d or by spell+ x al\d2 & /ill o!rs by writ+ x ov] & ov]4 ,b ( :atev] type a p]son may be1 he le>ns be/ by comb9+ all ?ree me?ods1 & by assidu\sly practic+ ! la/1 = ! only "t he ne$s to spell is :5 he is writ+4 ,! problem ( spell+ c be ma/]$ by writ+ e ^w five or t5 times :ile ! writ] has 8 eyes fix$ ^u ! correct =m & is spell+ ! ^w al\d4 ,practice on ! same ^w = ?ree successive days is almo/ c]ta9 to fix x = all "t 9 ! memory4 ,! weak spell] _c disp5se ) a diction>y4 ,ask+ a fell[ /ud5t h[ to spell a ^w m>k$ incorrect by an in/ructor is fatal1 = ! fell[ /ud5t is (t5 z ignorant z ! que/ion]4 ,look up ! misspell$ ^w 9 ,web/]'s1 ! ,/&>d1 or ! ,c5tury ,diction>y4 ,,rules ,_m misspell+s fall into classes :i* c be cov]$ by simple rules4 ,foll[+ are ! mo/ helpful ( ^! rules4 #gjj4 ,words ) a la/ syllable consi/+ ( a s+le %ort acc5t$ v[el foll[$ by a s+le consonant1 d\ble ! consonant :5 add+ a suffix beg9n+ ) a v[el4 dip-p-ed occur-r-ed occur-r-ence /op-p-+ =get-t-+ un=get-t-able sad-d-en =bid-d-en tranquil-l-ity ,obs]ve t ! conditions are ?ree3 #a4 ,acc5t on ! la/ syllable #b4 ,s+le %ort v[el #c4 ,s+le f9al consonant #gja4 ,words ) a la/ syllable end+ 9 a %ort v[el & a s+le consonant1 b n acc5t$ on ! la/ syllable1 d n d\ble ! f9al consonant4 wor%ip-ed level-+ travel-er #gjb4 ,words end+ 9 f9al sil5t -e drop ! -e be=e a suffix beg9n+ ) a v[el4 ,!y d ,,n d\ble ! consonant4 hope1 hop-ed f9e1 f9-er d9e1 d9-+ crude1 crud-ity wide1 wid-en subside1 subsid-ence #gjc4 ,words end+ 9 -ce or -ge keep ! -e be=e a suffix beg9n+ ) -a or -o1 to %[ t -c- or -g- is s(t4 *ange-able peace-able c\rage-ous notice-able advantage-ous s]vice-able #gjd4 ,words ) an acc5t$ d\ble v[el1 or ) an acc5t$ diph?ong1 d ,,n d\ble a f9al s+le consonant4 /oop-ed l\d-er meet-+ ro>-+ sweet-en jo9-+ #gje4 ,,cei4 ,,ei regul>ly foll[s c-4 conceive ceil+ deceive conceit receive deceit p]ceive receipt ,obs]ve also3 ei!r1 nei!r1 leisure1 seize1 weird1 _!1 c\nt]feit1 =eign4 #gjf4 ,,ei occasionally spells ! s\nd ( long i & ( long a4 height sleight weigh freight neighbor #gjg4 ,,ie regul>ly foll[s all consonants except c-4 believe pi] field niece piece relieve belief wield a*ieve pi]ce retrieve relief yield brief bi] siege fi5d grief ,obs]ve also3 f9anci]1 fri5d1 sieve4 #gjh4 ,n\ns end+ 9 a v[el & -y =m ! plural by add+ -s4 days boys *imneys valleys #gji4 ,v]bs end+ 9 a v[el & -y =m ! ?ird p]son s+ul>1 pres5t indicative1 by add+ -s4 lays enjoys employs #gaj4 ,n\ns end+ 9 a consonant & -y =m ! plural by *ang+ ! -y to -i & add+ -es4 fly1 fli-es sky1 ski-es lady1 ladi-es #gaa4 ,_m n\ns end+ 9 -f or -fe =m ! plural 9 -ves4 wolf1 wolves self1 selves life1 lives half1 halves leaf1 leaves wife1 wives calf1 calves loaf1 loaves knife1 knives #gab4 ,"s =eign n\ns =m ! plural accord+ to ! inflectional laws ( _! own language4 alumna1 alumnae axis1 axes datum1 data /ratum1 /rata alumnus1 alumni p>5!sis1 p>5!ses =mula1 =mulae ph5om5on1 ph5om5a analysis1 analyses crisis1 crises basis1 bases #gac4 ,don't1 won't1 c't1 ar5't1 hasn't1 hav5't1 h ! apo/rophe betwe5 n & t1 :]e a v[el has be5 omitt$4 #gad4 ,x's is ! colloquial =m ( x is4 ,! apo/rophe m>ks ! omission ( i4 #gae4 ,its1 y\rs1 h]s1 ours1 !irs1 81 ^: 7possessive pron\ns71 d ,,n h an apo/rophe4 #gaf4 ,foll[+ is a li/ ( words mo/ frequ5tly misspell$ by college fre%m54 accept accid5tally accommodate ackn[l$gm5t across affects aggravate airplane all "r already altoge!r amateur analyze app>atus appe>ance arctic argum5t a?lete a?letic balance beg9n+ believ+ b5efit$ biscuit ,brita9 bus9ess busy cal5d> c't c5t] c]ta9 *angeable *auffeur *oose clo!s co>se column committee compel conc$e conceivable ,connecticut consci5ce consci5ti\s controll$ c\rse deceitful def]r$ def9ite desc5d describe desp]ate developm5t d9+ room disappe> disappo9t discipl9e dissatisfi$ dissipate divide don't dy+ ec/asy emb>rass enemy envelop equipp$ especially exagg]ate exce$ excell5t except exhau/ exi/5ce famili> fasc9ate ,febru>y fif? f9ally f9anci] =feit =m]ly =ty f\r? fri5d fulfil g5]ally good-by gov]nm5t gov]nor gramm> griev\s h>ass hav+ height hop+ hurri$ly hygi5ic imag9>y imm$iately incid5tally inclose indep5d5ce indisp5sable inf9ite inquire in/ance int]c$e irresi/ible its x's itself judgm5t k laboratory laid l$ libr>y lightn+ lose ma9t5ance ,massa*usetts ma!matics m$ic9e mis*iev\s ,mississippi misspell$ muscle my/]i\s necess>y nei!r noticeable occasion occurr$ occurr5ce o'clock omission op9ion opportunity orig9al paid p>allel p>liam5t p>ticul>ly p>tn] p]ceive p]=m p]haps p]missible p]vade physical possession prec$e pref]r$ prep>ation pr9cipal pr9ciple privilege proce$ pr(essor program promissory pronunciation prove quiet q really receive recognize recomm5d ref]5ce repetition re/aurant ridicul\s seize s5t5ce sep>ate %9+ siege simil> skilful spee* /ation>y /ation]y /opp$ /opp+ /rictly sup]9t5d5t sup]s$e sure surprise syllable !at] _! !re !re=e till toge!r too tract trag$y tranquillity transf]r$ tr\ble truly ,tuesday until us+ usually village villa9 wea!r ,w$nesday weird welf>e :e!r :i* :olly :o's ^: wom5 y're ,,*apt] ,,xii ,,punctuation ,m>ks ( punctuation are us$ = ! purpose ( mak+ ! mean+ ( s5t5ces unmi/akable4 ,x is n suffici5t t s5t5ces be grammatically correct1 cle>1 & vigor\s2 !y mu/ also be p]fectly punctuat$ if _! mean+ is to be unmi/akable4 ,a writ] mu/1 !re=e1 obs]ve ! rules ( punctuation if 8 writ+ is to be intelligible4 #hjj4 ,use a p]iod 747 at ! end ( decl>ative & ( imp]ative s5t5ces4 #hja4 ,use a p]iod aft] e abbreviation4 ,"r4 ,mr4 ,c4 ,s4 ,mc,intyre ( ! ,c4 ,r4 ,i4 & ,p4 ,ry4 ,co4 receiv$ a t5 p] c5t increase4 ,"r4 ,! editors1 report]s1 feature writ]s1 etc41 & ! pr9t]s1 adv]tis+ solicitors1 circulation m51 etc41 ( ! ,spr+field 7,mass47 ,republican are all able m54 #hjb4 ,nev] use a p]iod at ! end ( an incomplete s5t5ce elem5t4 ,illit]ate4 ,aft] ! sun _h set4 ,we w5t home4 ,correct4 ,aft] ! sun _h set1 we w5t home4 #hjc4 ,use a "q m>k 787 at ! end ( a direct "q4 #hjd4 ,use a "q m>k1 sp>+ly1 to indicate d\bt4 ,9 ?is in/ance ! "q m>k %\ld be enclos$ )9 p>5!ses4 ,"r4 ,9 ! ye> #aeif 787 he 0 s5t to ,italy4 #hje4 ,nev] use a "q m>k at ! end ( an indirect "q4 ,wrong4 ,i ask$ him :at he int5d$ to d8 ,"r4 ,i ask$ him :at he int5d$ to d4 #hjf4 ,use an exclamation po9t 767 at ! end ( exclamatory expressions4 ,"r4 ,:at a t]rible exp]i5ce6 #hjg4 ,use a comma 717 betwe5 co-ord9ate clauses t are jo9$ by & or b only if ! subjects ( ! clauses are diff]5t4 ,wrong4 ,he began z (fice boy1 b 9 no long "t he became timekeep]4 ,"r4 ,he began z (fice boy b 9 no long "t he became timekeep]4 ,wrong4 ,he began z (fice boy b 9 no long "t !y made him timekeep]4 ,"r4 ,he began z (fice boy1 b 9 no long "t !y made him timekeep]4 #hjh4 ,use a comma betwe5 clauses jo9$ by ! conjunction =4 ,wrong4 ,he w5t into ! h\se = 8 automobile ne$$ wat]4 ,"r4 ,he w5t into ! h\se1 = 8 automobile ne$$ wat]4 #hji4 ,use a comma betwe5 %ort co-ord9ate clauses n jo9$ by conjunctions1 if ! clauses are p>allel 9 /ructure4 ,! horse neigh$1 ! pig grunt$1 ! dog b>k$4 #haj4 ,use a comma aft] a dep5d5t clause t prec$es a ma9 clause4 ,:5 he speaks1 we all li/54 #haa4 ,use commas to set (f clauses or phrases t add m]ely a descriptive idea to ! expression modifi$4 ,abraham ,l9coln1 :o 0 born 9 a log cab91 became "o ( ! greate/ presid5ts4 ,!y1 read+ ! newspap]1 did n he> me come 94 #hab4 ,use commas betwe5 adjectives 9 a s]ies if ! position ( ! adjectives c be logically int]*ang$4 ,ea* "o c>ri$ a r$1 :ite1 & blue flag4 #hac4 ,use commas betwe5 words1 phrases1 or clauses 9 a s]ies4 ,he s5t me two books1 a drum1 & a small wagon4 ,see+ ! d>k sky1 feel+ ! %>p w9d1 & kn[+ t my family w\ld be worri$1 ,i hurri$ home4 ,if he _h n be5 ill1 if ! bank _h n fail$1 & if my cr$it _h n be5 exhau/$1 y w\ld nev] h f\nd me "h4 #had4 ,use a comma be=e ! & connect+ ! la/ two memb]s ( a s]ies4 ,wrong4 ,he ord]$ bread & butt]1 ham & eggs1 cucumb]s & milk4 ,"r4 ,he ord]$ bread & butt]1 ham & eggs1 cucumb]s1 & milk4 #hae4 ,use a comma to sep>ate elem5ts :i* might o!rwise become confus$4 ,wrong4 ,n long be=e he _h b\ght ! horse4 ,"r4 ,n long be=e1 he _h b\ght ! horse4 ,wrong4 ,we drove up to ! h\se1 & ! motor /opp$ all[+ u to complete ! trip )\t disa/] along ! road4 ,"r4 ,we drove up to ! h\se1 & ! motor /opp$1 all[+ u to complete ! trip )\t disa/] along ! road4 ,confus+4 ,:i* ( ! m5 to *oose f among all ^? :o appli$ w\ld be a difficult matt] to decide4 ,bett]4 ,:i* ( ! m5 to *oose f among all ^? :o appli$1 w\ld be a difficult matt] to decide4 #haf4 ,use commas to set (f names 9 direct address4 ,"h1 ,jim1 let me d t4 #hag4 ,use commas to set (f appositives4 ,hilda ,kasp]1 ! cat]ess1 s]v$ ! lun*eon4 #hah4 ,use commas to set (f geographical names :i* expla9 o!r geographical names4 ,he liv$ 9 ,birm+ham1 ,alabama1 be=e he came "h4 #hai4 ,use commas to set (f ! ye> z a "p ( a date4 ,9 ,april1 #aibc1 he w5t home4 ,! lett] 0 dat$ ,febru>y #b1 #aiaj4 #hbj4 ,use commas to set (f absolute phrases4 ,! soldi]s hav+ re/$1 ,hannibal ord]$ ! army to />t4 #hba4 ,use commas to set (f mild int]jections or slightly p>5!tical expressions4 ,x 01 alas1 too late4 ,yes1 ,i %all be glad to g4 ,no1 ,i am sure t is n correct4 ,x 01 !re=e1 8 duty to accept4 ,i nev] met him1 y "k4 #hbb4 ,use a comma to set (f an in=mal quotation 9 direct disc\rse unless ! quotation is %ort & is grammatically incorporat$ into ! s5t5ce4 ,he said1 8,i am go+ home40 ,he answ]$ 8yes0 to my "q4 #hbc4 ,nev] use a comma betwe5 an adjective & ! n\n x modifies4 ,wrong4 ,a blue1 :ite1 & r$1 flag hung f ! w9d[4 ,"r4 ,a blue1 :ite1 & r$ flag hung f ! w9d[4 #hbd4 ,nev] use commas to set (f clauses or phrases t limit ! mean+ ( ! expressions !y modify2 no punctuation is necess>y4 ,wrong4 ,all m51 :o d ?is1 %\ld be hang$4 ,"r4 ,all m5 :o d ?is %\ld be hang$4 ,wrong4 ,any woman1 desir+ to try = ! team1 %\ld report imm$iately4 ,"r4 ,any woman desir+ to try = ! team %\ld report imm$iately4 #hbe4 ,nev] use commas betwe5 adjectives 9 a s]ies if ! position ( ! adjectives _c be logically int]*ang$4 ,wrong4 ,he wore an old1 black1 felt hat4 ,"r4 ,he wore an old black felt hat4 #hbf4 ,nev] use a comma to indicate a slight pause4 ,wrong4 ,?r\gh ! w9d[1 jump$ ! cat4 ,"r4 ,?r\gh ! w9d[ jump$ ! cat4 #hbg4 ,nev] use a comma be=e t1 :at1 h[1 :y1 etc41 9 indirect disc\rse4 ,he said t he w\ld g tomorr[4 ,he ask$ me :at ,i 0 go+ to d4 ,%e inquir$ h[ !y 7 to g4 ,!y ask$ :y _! sal>ies _h be5 decreas$4 #hbh4 ,nev] use a comma betwe5 ma9 clauses n jo9$ by a conjunction2 use a p]iod4 7,see #chj47 ,wrong4 ,tomorr[ is ,tuesday1 y mu/ come !n4 ,"r4 ,tomorr[ is ,tuesday4 ,y mu/ come !n4 #hbi4 ,use a semicolon 727 betwe5 co-ord9ate clauses t are n jo9$ by a co-ord9at+ conjunction4 ,wrong4 ,he w5t to ,s\? ,am]ica1 ,i /ay$ at home4 ,"r4 ,he w5t to ,s\? ,am]ica2 ,i /ay$ at home4 #hcj4 ,use a semicolon betwe5 clauses t are jo9$ by conjunctive adv]bs4 ,%e c\ld n come2 s !re 0 no meet+4 ,i did n see him2 nev]!less ,i knew he 0 !re4 ,! m5 7 none too sure ( _! next move2 _! d\bt1 h[ev]1 only t5d$ to height5 _! excitem5t4 #hca4 ,use a semicolon betwe5 co-ord9ate clauses t are jo9$ by & or b only if ! clauses h m ?an t5 words ea*1 or if !re are commas )9 ! clauses4 ,sl[ly ! huge grey transport t _h be5 wait+ at ! dock s9ce midnight got "u way2 & sl[ly ! ?rong t _h ga!r$ = "o la/ glimpse ( relatives & fri5ds made its way up ! long /reet4 ,if we c f9d no o!r way1 y may be sure we %all foll[ y\r advice2 b y mu/ n expect u to rel9qui% any m ( our pr(it ?an we c help1 especially at ?is late date4 #hcb4 ,nev] use a semicolon betwe5 a subord9ate clause & a ma9 clause4 ,wrong4 ,s9ce !y came2 we h n _h a mom5t's peace4 ,"r4 ,s9ce !y came1 we h n _h a mom5t's peace4 #hcc4 ,nev] use a semicolon aft] ! salutation ( a lett]4 ,wrong4 ,de> ,sir2 ,we are glad t y approve our action4 ,"r4 ,de> ,sir3 ,we are glad t y approve our action4 #hcd4 ,use a colon 737 to introduce =mally a ^w1 a catalogue1 a li/1 que/ions1 /atem5ts1 or long quotations4 ,!re 0 b "o ?+ to d3 retreat4 ,i 0 advis$ to see ^! m53 ,c4 ,r4 ,wright1 ,a4 ,w4 ,h5d]son1 & ,b4 ,l4 ,nooj94 ,! foll[+ w report 9 uni=m tomorr[3 ,butl] ,doolittle ,?omas ,williams ,! "q !n arose3 ,:at %\ld we d ) him8 ,:at tr\bl$ u 0 ?is3 ,! ammunition 0 runn+ l[4 ,?is is ! fir/ s5t5ce 9 ,poe's ,fall ( ! ,h\se ( ,u%]3 8,dur+ ! :ole ( a dull1 d>k1 & s\ndless day 9 ! autumn ( ! ye>1 :5 ! cl\ds hung oppressively l[ 9 ! heav5s1 ,i _h be5 pass+ alone1 on horseback1 ?r\gh a s+ul>ly dre>y tract ( c\ntry2 & at l5g? f\nd myself1 z ! %ades ( ev5+ drew on1 )9 view ( ! melan*oly ,h\se ( ,u%]40 #hce4 ,use a hyph5 7-7 9 writ+ fractions1 or numb]s less ?an "o hundr$4 ,?ree-fif?s1 tw5ty-"o1 ?irty-seconds4 ,?irty-sev51 n9ety-n9e4 #hcf4 ,use a hyph5 9 titles compos$ ( two words or m4 ,lieut5ant-colonel1 ald]man-at-l>ge1 editor-9-*ief4 #hcg4 ,use a hyph5 aft] ! fir/ "p ( a ^w divid$ at ! end ( a l9e4 #hch4 ,use a hyph5 9 comp\nd adjectives4 ,light-blue1 #gj-;horsep[]1 six-cyl9d]1 sev5-pass5g]1 ill-advis$4 #hci4 ,use a hyph5 aft] prefixes l co-1 re-1 anti-1 po/-1 etc41 :5 prefix$ to words beg9n+ ) ! la/ lett] ( ! prefix2 :5 prefix$ to prop] n\ns or prop] adjectives2 :5 ! comp\nd might become confus$ ) a ^w ( simil> spell+4 ,co-op]ation1 anti-,*ri/ian1 re-creation4 #hdj4 ,use a da% 7--7 :5 ! ?\ght is abruptly brok5 (f4 ,j !n ! telephone rang--,i wi% ,i c\ld rememb] :o 0 call+4 #hda4 ,use da%es r ?an p>5!ses to inclose in=mal p>5!tical mat]ial4 ,he (f]$ me--imag9e x--tw5ty doll>s a week4 #hdb4 ,use a da% be=e a summ>iz+ expression4 ,aft] ! :eat is all 91 aft] ! horses are put up1 & aft] ! *ores h be5 done--!n y may use ! c>4 #hdc4 ,nev] use a da% :]e a p]iod %\ld be us$4 ,wrong4 ,come tomorr[--ev]ybody w be "h !n-- ,"r4 ,come tomorr[4 ,ev]ybody w be "h !n4 #hdd4 ,nev] use a da% :]e a comma %\ld be us$4 ,wrong4 ,tom came 9 ye/]day--& ,jim 0 glad to see him4 ,"r4 ,tom came 9 ye/]day1 & ,jim 0 glad to see him4 #hde4 ,use quotation m>ks 78 07 to inclose expressions 9 direct disc\rse4 ,he said1 8,let me try40 #hdf4 ,use quotation m>ks to inclose mat]ial borr[$ f "s o!r writ]4 ,accord+ to ,john ,keats 8,a ?+ ( beauty is a joy =ev]40 #hdg4 ,if ! quot$ passage conta9s m ?an "o p>agraph1 ! quotation m>ks mu/ be plac$ at ! beg9n+ ( ea* p>agraph1 b aft] only ! la/4 #hdh4 ,use s+le quotation m>ks 7#8 '7 to inclose a quotation )9 a quotation4 ,! man said1 8,john said to me1 #8,y hold him2 ,i'm busy4'0 #hdi4 ,use ord9>y quotation m>ks to inclose mat]ial quot$ )9 a passage enclos$ by s+le quotation m>ks4 ,%e said1 8,jane repli$1 #8,jim's rem>k1 8,i[a has a h>d s*$ule next ye>10 does n mean :at y ?9k x means4'0 #hej4 ,include p]iods & commas at ! end ( quot$ mat]ial )9 ! quotation m>ks1 b treat o!r m>ks ( punctuation accord+ to ! context ( ! passage4 #hea4 ,und]score names ( books1 plays1 musical compositions1 pa9t+s1 & pieces ( sculpture4 ,d n use quotation m>ks4 ,george ,eliot's ,silas ,m>n] has be5 read by ?\s&s4 #heb4 ,use an apo/rophe 7'7 to m>k ! omission ( lett]s 9 contract$ words4 ,wrong4 ,dont1 cant1 its 7= x is71 ,ive1 doesnt4 ,"r4 ,don't1 c't1 x's1 ,i've1 doesn't4 #hec4 ,use an apo/rophe be=e ! s to =m ! possessive ( s+ul> n\ns4 ,wrong4 ,fa!rs h\se has j be5 pa9t$4 ,"r4 ,fa!r's h\se has j be5 pa9t$4 #hed4 ,use an apo/rophe aft] ! s to =m ! possessive ( plural n\ns4 ,wrong4 ,!y sell boys clo?+4 ,wrong4 ,!y sell boy's clo?+4 ,"r4 ,!y sell boys' clo?+4 #hee4 ,nev] use an apo/rophe to =m ! possessive ( p]sonal pron\ns4 ,wrong4 ,_!'s are black4 ,"r4 ,!irs are black4 #hef4 ,use p>5!ses 7 7 to inclose mat]ial t is =eign to ! ma9 ?\ght ( a s5t5ce1 p>agraph1 or :ole composition4 ,"r4 ,!y w 7,i saw ! ord] myself7 )draw ! ,second battalion tomorr[4 #heg4 ,use p>5!ses to inclose figures t confirm num]ical adjectives4 ,place ! figures 9 p>5!ses aft] ! num]al ^w4 ,wrong4 ,he (f]$ to sell me 7#e7 five mules4 ,"r4 ,he (f]$ to sell me five 7#e7 mules4 #heh4 ,nev] use p>5!ses to cancel a ^w :i* y want to omit2 draw a l9e ?r\gh x4 ,wrong4 ,next week ! 7:e!r7 wea!r w be w>m4 ,"r4 ,next week ! whether wea!r w be w>m4 #hei4 ,use brackets to inclose explanatory mat]ial introduc$ into a quotation4 ,! speak] said1 8,he ,wa%+ton 0 above ev]y?+ else an ,am]ican g5tleman40 #hfj4 ,practice4 ,p>agraph & punctuate ! foll[+ passages4 ,i ,i _h be5 go+ to ,/ ,lukes ,hospital 9 ,*>le/on ,s ,c e day = two weeks to visit my bro!r ,john :o _h to und]go a s]i\s op]ation ,dr ,r ,l ,spitz5b]g "o ( ! be/ surgeons 9 ! city 0 9 *>ge ( ! case "o day x 0 ,i ?9k ,m>* #ab #aiai ,i ask$ ! doctor :5 ,john might be tak5 home he exclaim$ my de> sir h[ c y expect to move a man :o is z weak z y\r bro!r is naturally ,i 0 disappo9t$ b ,john 0 m !n disappo9t$ = he _h become v tir$ ( ! hospital r\t9e he sigh$ deeply he turn$ 8 face to ! wall & wept sobb+ly :5 he _h become some:at quiet$ a nurse came 9 ) 8 ev5+ meal %e 0 r small n p>ticul>ly pretty & unusually brusque ,i ?\ght 9 mann] ! meal consi/$ ( a small well-cook$ /eak hot bak$ potatoes & a comb9ation salad ,i sat beside ! b$ z he tri$ to eat & wond]$ :y !y gave him su* heavy food if he 7 s weak f9ally ,i said nurse are all pati5ts giv5 ! same diet n two m9utes be=e %e _h be5 />+ out ! w9d[ 9 a vacu\s sort ( way at my "q h[ev] %e turn$ & ) no app>5t *ange 9 h] mann] rem>k$ h[ %\ld ,i "k ,ive j be5 tak5 on4 ,,ii ,! lectur] said 9 "p let me beg9 by quot+ ! h\nds ( spr+ are on w9t]s traces & ! "m ( mon?s 9 mead[ & pla9 fills ! %ad[s & w9dy places ) lisp ( leaves & ripple ( ra9 c\ld any?+ m precisely convey ! re/less s5sitive mood ( spr+ ,i c ?9k ( no?+ he ,sw9burne ! au?or seems to h grasp$ ! v ess5ce ( spr+ "h & made x live =ev] 9 8 l9es let me pause "h a mom5t to sugge/ t if anyone ( y is look+ = poetry t really s+s try ,sw9burne he w always satisfy ! e> b poetry is n all s\nd h[ev] x mu/ if x is to appeal popul>ly h rhy?m to be sure nev]!less ?is rhy?m mu/ nev] be all[$ to become monoton\s try read+ ,popes ,rape ( ! ,lock = in/ance al\d :at 0 x ,wordswor? said poetry 0 emotion recollect$ 9 tranquillity or some?+ l t wasn't x inde$ no?+ c\ld be m easily demon/rable ,bret ,h>te = example 9 ,gabriel ,conroy describes a sn[ /orm to p]fection "o f9ds himself fl\nd]+ ?r\gh ! drifts z truly z if he 7 actually 9 ! mid/ ( ! /orm yet ,h>te wrote ! passage long aft] he _h und]gone ! exp]i5ce set =? & f> f ! sc5e itself 9 fact he wrote ( a /orm 9 ! ,we/ 9 midw9t] :ile sitt+ calmly at 8 desk 9 ,new ,york 9 midsumm]4 ,,*apt] ,,xiii ,,me*anics ,9 putt+ y\r ideas ^u pap] y mu/ foll[ c]ta9 cu/oms :i* good ta/e & conv5i5ce h e/abli%$ z correct at ! pres5t "t4 ,s9ce mann]s *ange f g5]ation to g5]ation1 h[ev]1 & s9ce writ+ ma*9es & pr9t+ me?ods are con/antly be+ improv$1 "s ( ^! cu/oms necess>ily v>y4 ,! ensu+ rules1 !re=e1 h be5 compos$ 9 accordance ) ! be/ pres5t usage & are pass$ on to y z describ+ ^? cu/oms :i* are lea/ subject to *ange4 ,manuscript #ijj4 ,write ^u only "o side ( ! pap]4 #ija4 ,place ! title ^u ! fir/ l9e1 or ab\t two in*es f ! top ( ! %eet4 #ijb4 ,leave "o l9e blank betwe5 ! title & ! body ( ! composition4 #ijc4 ,write legibly & )\t fl\ri%es1 us+ black ink4 #ijd4 ,numb] ! pages 9 ! upp] "r-h& corn]4 #ije4 ,leave ! space ( ! lett] m aft] ea* m>k ( punctuation )9 ! s5t5ce1 & ! space ( ?ree m's aft] m>ks ( end punctuation4 #ijf4 ,nev] cr[d a ^w 9 ord] to get x all ^u "o l9e4 ,divide ! ^w & m>k ! division ) a hyph54 #ijg4 ,place ! hyph5 t m>ks ! division ( a ^w at ! end ( a l9e aft] ! fir/ "p ( ! ^w4 ,d ,,n place a hyph5 be=e ! second "p ( ! ^w4 ,divide a ^w only at ! end ( a syllable4 #ijh4 ,ma9ta9 a left-h& m>g9 ( at lea/ an in*1 & endeavor to keep ! "r-h& m>g9 ev54 #iji4 ,ind5t ea* p>agraph half an in*4 #iaj4 ,nev] write bel[ ! la/ l9e ^u a rul$ %eet4 ,9 typewritt5 manuscript leave at lea/ half an in* at ! bottom ( ! page4 ,und]scor+ #iaa4 ,und]score a ^w once = italics1 twice = small capital lett]s1 & ?ree times = l>ge capital lett]s4 #iab4 ,nev] und]score a ^w = emphasis4 ,footnotes #iac4 ,use sup]ior figures = footnotes1 plac+ ! figure aft] ! expression ref]r$ to4 #iad4 ,place footnotes at ! bottom ( ! page prec$$ by ! sup]ior figure correspond+ to t us$ 9 ! text4 ,abbreviations #iae4 ,use no abbreviations 9 =mal composition except ,mr41 ,mrs41 or ,dr4 ,capitals #iaf4 ,beg9 all prop] n\ns & prop] adjectives ) a capital lett]4 ,russia1 ,bible1 ,pike's ,peak1 ,engli%1 ,*ri/ian1 ,napoleonic4 #iag4 ,beg9 ! fir/ ^w ( e s5t5ce ) a capital lett]4 #iah4 ,beg9 e l9e ( v]se ) a capital lett]4 #iai4 ,beg9 e direct quotation ) a capital lett]4 #ibj4 ,beg9 ea* important ^w 9 ! "n ( a social1 a political1 or a religi\s organization ) a capital lett]4 ,sigma ,delta ,*i1 ,democratic p>ty1 ,unit>ian *ur*4 #iba4 ,beg9 e ^w t ref]s to ! ,deity ) a capital lett]4 #ibb4 ,capitalize ! pron\n ,i & ! int]jection ,o4 #ibc4 ,beg9 ! important words 9 ! names ( books1 ( plays1 ( musical compositions1 ( pa9t+s & ( pieces ( sculpture ) capital lett]s4 #ibd4 ,beg9 ) capital lett]s p]sonal titles :5 !y are writt5 ) p]sonal names4 ,colonel ,morrison1 ,pr(essor ,hunt1 ,secret>y ,mc,adoo4 #ibe4 ,beg9 ! names ( mon?s1 days ( ! week1 & holidays ) capital lett]s4 ,figures #ibf4 ,write out 9 full only ^? numb]s t c be express$ 9 two words4 ,n9ety-n9e1 fifty ?\s&1 "o million4 #ibg4 ,write out 9 full sums ( money 9 ev5 doll>s :i* c be express$ 9 two words2 o!rwise use ! doll> sign & figures4 #ibh4 ,use ! doll> sign & figures = sums ( money 9 doll>s & c5ts4 #ibi4 ,write out 9 full sums ( money less ?an "o doll>4 #icj4 ,write out 9 full numb]s us$ z names ( /reets or di/ricts4 ,fifty-fif? /reet4 #ica4 ,nev] beg9 a s5t5ce ) a numb] express$ 9 figures4 #icb4 ,write out 9 full sums ( money us$ z adjectives4 ,%e b\ght six-doll> gloves4 ,lett]s #icc4 ,write ! full address ( ! writ] & ! date ( writ+ 9 e lett]1 pref]ably at ! head4 #icd4 ,use "o ( ! foll[+ =ms = ! salutation ( a bus9ess lett]3 ,de> ,sir3 ,g5tlem53 ,ladies3 ,sir3 ,madam3 ,my de> ,sir3 ,my de> ,madam3 ,my de> ,mr4 ,higg9bottom3 ,my de> ,mrs4 ,higg9bottom3 #ice4 ,use "o ( ! foll[+ =ms = ! salutation ( a p]sonal lett]3 ,my de> ,mrs4 ,wilson1 ,de> ,dr4 ,albright1 ,de> ,br[n1 ,de> ,miss ,h5ry1 ,de> ,pet]1 #icf4 ,use "o ( ! foll[+ =ms = ! clos+ phrase ( a bus9ess lett]3 ,y\rs v truly1 ,v truly y\rs1 ,y\rs truly1 ,y\rs respectfully1 ,respectfully y\rs1 #icg4 ,use "o ( ! foll[+ =ms = ! clos+ phrase ( a p]sonal lett]3 ,y\rs truly1 ,s9c]ely y\rs1 ,y\rs s9c]ely1 #ich4 ,write ! envelope address 9 n m ?an f\r l9es4 #ici4 ,omit punctuation aft] ea* l9e ( ! envelope address4 #idj4 ,be consi/5t 9 ! use ( ! ?ird p]son 9 =mal notes4 #ida4 ,sign lett]s cle>ly s t ! signature c be easily read4